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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gurti30

congrats on new thread dear 😊

and loved the update
how will poor maan react after seeing geet😆




Thanks for liking the update der
hehe lets see how he really reacts seeing Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u for liking the update der
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Thank u for liking the update der
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VERY-IMP NOTE Don't IGNORE- Before I give my today's Update, I want to say something, I know I am not a regular Updater and I have told u all the reason for it is that I am busy and my health don't permits me, but Still i tried to give u all a big updates whenever I gave u all updates for my Stories, but I guess none of u are really interested in reading my FF/SS, and whoever is giving me comments are only in one words with saying Nice and awesome and der is hardly any comments that say anything abt the update, I also want to read urs, the readers comments and want to know if der is anything that u readers don't like it and want me to change, then I would do it to help improve my writing, but u all don't do that at all, which meant is u all don't like it, I am more than happy to end my Stories and not bother u all with my PM and unwanted stories, coz I don't want to waste my time on something that u all can't even give me a proper comment on. Anyway If u all want then I am willing to give u all small updates as much as I can and whenever i can if it works for u all if not then after this update I will not update if I don't get gud likes and gud & long comment other then commenting NICE and AWESOME then after it I will discontinue all my works.

PS: I will not be updating any of my other works till I see some good improvement on liking and comments, coz I don't want to waste my time and my stories where people don't appreciates it, Sorry if I am being rude but I also want something from my readers and that is only gud comments to motivate me and gud amount of Likes, that is all I am asking for.



Part 27

Prem- don't tell me Maan, you are scared to drink coz of Mrs. Khurana" just then Mukti came in knocking the door and giving glare at Prem, who instantly kept the glass back on the shelf and looked at Maan who gave him a look of now who is scared. Prem straighten himself and went to Mukti and whispered "yaar tum apne glares thodi deer ke liye bhol nahi skati kya, kar diya na meri izzat ka kachra Mr. Khurana ke samne"

Mukti looked at Maan giving him a smile and then pulled Prem out of the room and said "you had promised to not have any drink na"

Prem- but jaan I was taking that out for Mr. Khurana, sachi" saying that he pitched his throat and showed her a innocent face "don't Prem don't u dare put ur blame on him, I heard ur talking with him, so u better not lie to me" Mukti said.

Prem- jaan last time please.

Mukti- no, never

Prem- please jaan last time, dekho Maan also wants to drink

Mukti- no no no, I have placed the dinner, u both come and have ur dinner.

" par jaan can we have just one drink" Prem said as he gave her a quick peak on her cheek and then on her lip and showed her his puppy face.

Mukti- only one

Prem- thank u love u" saying that he hugged her and then like a happy child he went back and took Maan to the dining table.

"Well then I guess it's the two of us here only" Prem said as he sat on the dining table across Maan

Maan- why isn't the ladies joining us.

Prem- don't even say that, they are too shy to come in front of their own husband.

"why" Maan asked as he took a sip of water.

Prem- don't tell me u didn't notice my wife dress, she is feeling conscious coming in front of u wearing that dress, well can't blame her, it's my fault too.

"how" Maan asked

Prem- whenever we come here, I never let her bring any other dress other then nighties" saying that Prem went and got the wine and two glass.

"drinks" Prem said as he pour in the glass, while Maan gave him look of saying that didn't ur wife refused it, like reading his mind, Prem said "don't worry she said we can have one, which means we can have more than that"

"yehan Geet ek glass nahi peene degi and he is talking abt many" Maan murmurs to himself but then says "no I am fine"

Prem- come on Maan itna bhi kya darna, waise bih after one drink you won't even feel scared of Mrs. Khurana" hearing that Maan looked up only to see Geet standing in the kitchen behind the pillar and staring at him, and the denial was clearly shown in her eyes and then with gestures called him. Maan excused himself and went to her and saw her getting conscious with his presence as she was trying to hid herself behind the pillar.

Maan- kya huwa tumhe, why are standing like this

Geet- aap meri chodo aur apni kaho, kya karne ja rahe thi abhi aap, and how can u even think of asking me to give u permission to let u drink.

Maan- but Geet he...

"mujhe kuch nahi suna, aap bas nahi peena " Geet said sternly.

Maan- aur kuch

Geet- haan

Maan- kya

Geet- mujhe wo...aap...kuch nahi

Maan- kya baat hia bolo tu

Geet- kuch nahi aab aap jao

Maan- hmmm, acha suno eat properly u hadn't eaten anything since morning.

Geet- aap ki galti

Maan- sorry na

Geet- aap jao Prem ji intezar kar rahe hai aap ka

Maan- hmmm.

"no its ok I am fine" Maan said as he took a glass of water, then looked at Geet once again and thought to give his luck one more chance and pleaded with his eyes to have one glass only, to which she just shook her head in no pouting angrily yet she looked so cute with that pout on her face, and after that he didn't had in him to refuse her and he took a big deep sigh knowing her no will never turn into yes, and then went back to eating.

"so what do you do, any job" Mukti asked as she served Geet paneer dal.

"I am MD of "Princess G" Company" Geet replied.

Mukti- You mean the MD of Princess Gunjan company.

Geet- yes

Mukti- so your are the corporate event planners that had done for the XYZ opening party of Amani Trading & Exports Ltd, after whom Prem went Gaga over after seeing all the arrangement u had done.

Geet- thank u, I am happy to hear that Mr. Prem liked our work.

Mukti- not only liked your work der, but he went fida over it, at one point i kinda felt so jealous of that MD, coz for one whole week he did no other talking other than this.

Geet- I guess u can blame me now for that one week lose

Mukti- no way I can't do that now after seeing u, i can never

Geet- kyun

Mukti- coz ur sweet and cute

Geet- maska tu nahi laga rahi

Mukti- arre is main Maska ki kya baat hai, actually u reminded me of my little sister

Geet smiled at her yet sadly reminded of something which she didn't wanted and then changed the topic and asked "so what do u do"

"simple Housewife" Mukti replied.

Geet- Mama always says it's totally a different feeling being a housewife.

Mukti- wo tu hai, the happiness you get doing your love works is just an amazing feeling, cooking for him his fav food, waiting for him to come back from office after the tiring days, supporting him when he needs our support, helping him when he needs my help, always being there for him, in his happiness or bad time, having dinner together, and after the whole tiring day when we spend that little time with each other when we go to sleep is just amazing.

Geet- you really love him

Mukti- more than my life, and I can see the same love I have for Prem in your eyes For MAAN" Just as those word escaped Mukti lips, Geet hands stopped in mid as she was going to take her bite. "kya huwa ruk kyun gai" Mukti asked seeing her.

"ku...kuch bhi tu nahi" Geet replied as she placed her spoon back on the plate, just then they heard the laughing voice of them men. "Oh God, don't tell me they are already high" Mukti said as she wiped her hand with the napkin.

Geet- matlab

Mukti- drinks

Geet- Maan doesn't drink

Mukti- being with Prem, its hard to say no

"Maan ne hum se promise kari hai ke wo drinks aab kabhi nahi karenge" Geet said innocently to which Mukti chuckle and said "trust me Geet, its not only hard but impossible to say No with Prem"

"unhone ek hi drink kari hogi na" Geet asked worriedly.

Mukti- nope, for him one drink means more then 3 or 4 drinks.

"haye haye Baba ji 4 drinks, aise main how will i handle him" Geet said remembering the last encounter of him drunk, and how he had hurt himself.

Mukti- Geet you must be tired, you can go and take rest.

Geet- nahi nahi I will help u here

Mukti- that so sweet of u but Geet there is no need of help, I can manage it.

Geet- jo bhi hai hum wo saath kar sakte hai, and it will be finished soon.

Mukti- ok" saying that they both started clearing the table, and then Mukti went to check in the dining room to see if the men were done, when she was sure they are not their she went and cleared out their too.

"Geet if u need anything just tell me ok" Mukti said as she led Geet to her room.

Geet- thank u

Mukti- aap thodi deer rest karo lo abhi un logo ko ane main time hai" Geet smiled and nodded.

"Shhh, shor mat karo, Mukti uth jayegi aur phir naraz ho jayegi" Prem said in babyish tone to Maan as he placed his fingers on his lip and Maan also kept his fingers on his lips and said "Geet ne tu waise hi mujhe mar dena hai"

Prem-shhh

"Solly" Maan said just like a 4 years old baby showing his puppy face to Prem and said "tu aab kya kare"

Prem- ok we will do one thing I will go to Geet" hearing that Maan eyes popped out and his face turned all red to which Prem said "yaar waise nahi jaisa tu soch raha meri baat sun lo pahle"

Maan- still why would u go to MY Geet, she is mine only

Prem- janta hoon aab meri sune ga" to which Maan nodded and Prem continued saying "i will go to Geet and you go to Mukti and take the blame for me saying U forced me to drink this much and I will do the same"

Maan- but why should I lie when u did forced me to drink

"Dost dost na raha, yaar yaar naa raha
Zindagi hamein tera, aitbaar na raha, aitbaar na raha"
Prem sang as he rested his head on Maan shoulder faking cry.

"Prem Dost and Yaar is the same thing, isn't it" Maan asked being confused with the way Prem putted this song, as he knew this was not the correct lyric and said "Prem its not yaar its Pyar, u forget to add P in their" Prem banged his head on his shoulder and said "Maan I can't say as my Pyaar as ur not my MUKTI, and anyway I was just trying to emotionally blackmail but u don't seems to be blackmailed by this emotional atiyacha u so I guess u will go to ur GEET and get beaten up by Mrs. Khurana or sleep on the couch, main tu chala"

"Nahi nahi" Maan almost screamed as he garbed Prem hand and jerked him back and said "I will go to Mukti and take ur blame and u mine"

"aab aya na uth pahar ke neeche" Prem said and they both went toward the room. Since they were really drunk they both stopped in front of the room looking at each other with confused face thinking in which room will Geet be in and in which Mukti, they swiped their places few times and then Maan stopped Prem abruptly forwarding his hand in front and said "I will go first and the room I don't go in you will go der" with that saying he zoomed into the left side of the room from where Prem was standing and once the door was locked Prem came out of his trance and said "ye kahan gaya" as he twirl around and then shrugged his shoulder and went in to the right side of the room, but to their luck they both went in their own room.

"preee" Before Mukti could say his name Prem kept his finger on his lips and said "Shhh Geet, main Prem hoon" hearing him say Geet name Mukti just stood folding her hand on her chest and waited for him to continue "dekho Geet don't get angry at Maan I was the one who forced him to drink, so he is not at all fault, wo Mukti ne permission di thi na one drink ke liye but then she always don't give me permission so we just decided to get drunk fully" and next moment things started flying in the room as Mukti pounced on him hitting him saying "I hate u Prem, how can u take me for granted main ne ek bola tha na pee ne ko itni kyun pee"

"Mukti" Prem cried as he popped his head out of her hold and then said "Maan kuch mat bolna, wo sachi Geet hai"

Precap is the same, Sorry their weren't lots of Maaneet scene.


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Edited by CrazzyBusy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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are dont angry na pls update soon waise bhi sub busy hain holidays mein isilye koye com nahi kare

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear this my first comment but i used to read this ff now i am no more silent reader i am giving comments to all other writers also sorry for being silent reader till now. update was excellent maan&prem r socute ab jaroor maan ka band bajega geet se
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update

loved the way maan gets scared of geet

but poor he,,, drank and now will suffer wat geet will do to him

dear can we have maaneet moments.. as since few updates its more of others..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome
maan n prem want to save eachother frm their wives
but reached wrong place n prem in trouble😆
now its maan turn... waiting for geet reaction😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely
ist funny both went to their room only😆
ek ki to band baj gaya pata nahi dusre ka kya hoga
maan ko bhagwan hi bachae sherni geet se

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