OS: Emptiness - Page 2

You know this song was sung by Kishore da when Madhubala, the love of his lifd died? And it is the pain of her death that is so beautifully there in his voice? This is one of my favorite songs too. I cry everytime I listen to it. And now you put it in an Arnav and Khushi's situation and I was crying even more. This was beautifully written. Arnav's guilt, his pain, his emtions, Khushi understanding, her forgiving nature, her giving up, just all so beautifully expressed. Wonderful work mate. 👏

Beautifully written...loved the way you described their emotions

K!!!!

As I read the update, I felt Khushi was feeling emptiness in her life. She had got everything that any girl would dream of but how she got it, that had left a sour taste in her mouth. Like I told La, for Khushi the means are more important than the ends and Arnav wishes to reach the end no matter the means!!!


Both love each other. Both yearn for the other. Both know what the other wants to say. But every things has its time. I think Arnav's time expired or may be not.

When she left, the emptiness now doubled. If they will be together leaving everything else behind they can fill up this emptiness :-)

That was amazing..:)

Arnav z n was always lyk this..

First doing things..n den regrtin.

Now that he had known that he would do nethin 2 hav her in his life.n be wid her..

It was too late..just likeKhushi thought..

She did love him..n would always.but its nt always about him..

She had 2 take that decision..n that was way too right 2 mend der relationship..:)

This emptiness in his lyf n her lyf would surely bring dem 2gthr..:)

Just hav 2 wait 4 d right time..:)

I loved it.:)

that was nice, but feel sorry for them.

Great OS !
Heart breaking ...
Description of feelings on both perspective was awesome...
It was one Great song that you used ..
Loved reading it ..

What a beautiful OS kalyaani..I stumbled across it just now..