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@boyznaka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

You know this song was sung by Kishore da when Madhubala, the love of his lifd died? And it is the pain of her death that is so beautifully there in his voice? This is one of my favorite songs too. I cry everytime I listen to it. And now you put it in an Arnav and Khushi's situation and I was crying even more. This was beautifully written. Arnav's guilt, his pain, his emtions, Khushi understanding, her forgiving nature, her giving up, just all so beautifully expressed. Wonderful work mate. 👏

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Beautifully written...loved the way you described their emotions

loved it :)

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

K!!!!

As I read the update, I felt Khushi was feeling emptiness in her life. She had got everything that any girl would dream of but how she got it, that had left a sour taste in her mouth. Like I told La, for Khushi the means are more important than the ends and Arnav wishes to reach the end no matter the means!!!

Both love each other. Both yearn for the other. Both know what the other wants to say. But every things has its time. I think Arnav's time expired or may be not.

When she left, the emptiness now doubled. If they will be together leaving everything else behind they can fill up this emptiness :-)