SS - Beyond (Updated part 3 pg 2)

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"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing there is a field. I'll meet you there" ' Rumi

Right vs Wrong, the constant battle between these two opposing forces. Who decides it for us? Is there really a concept of right vs wrong, is everything so easily categorized as black or white or was there scope for another option to exist, did grey have a chance?

This story is about changing emotions, perspectives and more importantly about love. In the war waging between right and wrong could love being peace, did it have a chance?

He is simple man, well so he believes

She is an embodiment of life, or she projects

Could these souls be one? The voids that exist in their respective lives, could they be finally filled by the other?


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Hi you guys, first attempt at writing something, I welcome all criticisms and compliments 😳

This was just a prologue of sorts, I'm hoping to keep it short, so it shouldn't have too many parts. Depending on when the brain juices give up 😃😃


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Part 1: Page 1

Part 2: Page 2

Part 3: Page 2



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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting plzz do update soon!!!
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Part 1:

"Waiting is painful. Forgetting is painful. But not knowing which to do is the worst kind of suffering." - Paulo Coelho


He is Asad Ahmed Khan, his life is straightforward and can be easily categoriesed and compartmentalized. He has his family, his darling sister and the woman who made him the man he is today, his Ammi.

Life made sense to him, it was simple:

1.Provide for your family and protect them from every harm.
2.Go to work, dedicate yourself 100% excel in your field

He liked his life in those simple terms, there was black and white, no confusion. But then she came..


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She is Zoya Farooqui, her life is anything but straightforward. To strangers she seems like a girl full of life and everything beautiful that life offers, but little do they know of the scars.
These scars, not just the physical ones but the scars on her soul. The physical ones look ferocious, yet it is is the internal ones which have caused the greater damage.

Inspite of her troubles, here she was a young beautiful woman, grabbing life by the horns, ready for all the experiences, ready to see beyond the black and white of life.


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"Jee haan yeh sab ek draam tha" retorted Asad

"Dekhiye Mr Khan, bhaut ho chuka is baar jaane diya toh bas, dubara nahi, aur nahi. I can't play this game anymore" Zoya said, her voice full of emotion she had laid her cards out in the open

Asad closed his eyes and involuntarily his hands reached up to caress his temples

"Miss Farooqui, woh actually mein apse..."

But before asad could say more Dilshad walked into the room with najma in tow. She saw the moment passing between Asad and Zoya and mentally reprimanded herself for such bad timing.

" Zoya, Asad I wanted to talk to you both, acha hua tum dono saath hi ho"

"Saath Kahaan hain phoophi" muttered zoya to herself as she looked at Asad with deep longing

"Kuch kaha tumne Zoya?"

"Ji nahi nahi kuch nai" said a visibly embarrassed zoya

"So Asad i used to always worry for you, always wondered if you would be able to accept love into your life and build a family of your own. But now that Zoya is in your life i can finally heave a sign of relief" said dilshad with unshed tears brimming in her eyes

"Ammi, yeh kya baatein le kar bhaith gayi aap"

"Asad tum pehle suno toh. Zoya tumhein maalum hai ek dargah hai jahaan maine manat mangi thi asad ke liye, uski khushiyon ke liye aur ab jab voh sab sach ho raha hai, I feel we need to all go to the dargah and pay our respects"

Zoya's eyes danced with anticipation "Chaliye phoope isme itne discussion or tension kis liye abhi chalte hain" exclaimed zoya as she quickly got up to go leave

"Zoya, voh itna aasaan nahi hai thodi planning karni padegi"

"Plannin? phoopi dargah ke liye planning?"

"We'll have to travel a little bit to get to this dargah, its actually a little far"

Asad and Zoya both looked towards Dilshad with apprehension. Something in dilshad's voice caused suspicion

"Ammi kahaan hai yeh dargah?"

"Umm, Kashmir"

"WHAT! Kashmir!!!!" exclaimed both Asad and Zoya together

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice 😛Wow! Kashmir... I thot it would be Ajmer 😉
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WOW...luved it...very well-written...plz...plz continue soon...👏👏👏.!

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Part 2:

"Silence is the language of God, all else is poor translation" - Rumi


"What are you saying Ammi"

"Exactly what you heard Asad! All of us need to go to the dargah"

"But Ammi, its a little far don't you think?"

"Asad, I dont understand the problem in that. Book our tickets beta we all are going. That's it!"

Asad sighed heavily as the three women left his room, they were already discussing the packing they will need to do for the trip.

Dilshad had genuinely wanted to go to the dargah and pay her respects there. But also there was another reason and that reason was Asad. She could clearly see the love between Asad and Zoya, but circumstances had played such a cruel joke on Asad and made him the way he was, unable to voice his deepest thoughts and it all came down to fear.

All Dilshad wanted was to provide an environment for Asad and Zoya to let lose, for Asad to be free and let his heart take precedence over his mind and especially over his fears. What place could be better than the beautiful jannat that is Kashmir, Dilshad hoped the magical place could do its wonders on Asad and Zoya too.
Ofcourse Dilshad herself had some tricks up her sleeve to help the matter.

Asad being the dutiful son that he is had booked their flights at the earliest possible. Before long, the foursome were bound on a plane towards the valley.

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They landed at the airport and took a taxi towards their hotel which was situated alongside the beautiful Dal Lake. The crisp cool air, the beautiful surroundings and the company of your beloveds what else could a man want.

Zoya had completely transformed into a little excited five year old child upon reaching the valley. The past 15 mins she had been chatting away with the taxi driver, Javed. Asad found himself stealing glances towards her, those big beautiful round eyes were brimming with excitement.
The joy in her eyes and voice was contagious, he could feel himself getting lost in her thoughts.

"Allah Miyah!! Whats wrong with you Mr Khan? aap kabhi meri koi baat sunte kyon nai hai?" fumed Zoya

"Huh, what, what happened" Asad had been so distracted by those luscious lips that he didnt pay attention to what she was actually saying

"MR KHAN!!" zoya sighed

"Kya hai Ms Farooqui"

"Like I was telling you earlier when you were clearly in la la land, Javed just told me about this place called Gulmarg which is one of the top tourist destinations here. Javed says that no trip to the valley is complete without going to gulmarg"

"Ms Farooqui, in case you have forgotten already let me remind you, hum yahaan dargah ke liye aaye hain"

"Haan Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan!! I know! Gulmarg is a mere 20 min drive up from the dargah we can go there after paying our respects"

"Ms Farooqu..." but before he could finish

"Just imagine Mr Khan, the seven ft of snow, the snow falls, the cottages, the fog, the garam garam maggi in the snow, the gondola rides" she said dreamily

"Ms Farooqui mein toh..."

"Nahi Mr Khan aap mana mat karna. Phoopi you tell him! yeh har cheez ke liye mana kyon kar dete hain. Hum itni door aakar bhu sab na dekhein toh kitna waste hai. Mr Khan aap kabhi meri koi baat..."

"Oh Lord! Ms Farooqui stop!! I've been trying to say yes ok we'll go. But aap kuch bolne de toh na"

The three women were all shocked and gaped at Asad open mouthed. What was this new side to him? Did he just agree without protesting?
Zoya had a glazed look over her eyes as if she was dreaming

"Ms Farooqui, before you start frothing could you stop looking at me its kind of making me uncomfortable" Asad said with a sly smirk on his face

Zoya quickly got hold of herself and looked away before anyone else noticed the crimson rising in her cheeks.

Dilshad secretly smiled to herself thinking how the environment was already taking a hold over Asad. She was excited for the surprise awaiting them at the hotel, abhi toh bas shuruwat hai asad, thought dilshad to herself.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome!it was freaking ur charecterisation is so real to that of asad and zoya they are so like them!
do update soon and do pm me!(if tht is possible!)😊
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Awesome!!!! Really interesting!!!!!! Please on me when you update.
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Part 3:

"Travel is more than the seeing of sights; it is a change that goes on, deep and permanent, in the ideas of living."- Miriam Beard


Asad rolled down the window to take in the fresh air. He breathed in heavily and felt the sensation of the air penetrating every part of him.

Upon reaching the hotel, Asad heard Zoya making plans with Javed to go visit the dargah and Gulmarg tomorrow morning itself. He couldn't help but grim at her eagerness.

"Hi! My name is Asad Ahmed Khan we have a booking in this hotel for three rooms" he said to the manager at the reception desk.

"Jee, jee Khan sahab we were expecting you. Your rooms are ready if you would kindly follow me"

"uhm jee excuse me, mere naam Dilshad hai, maine apse baat ki thi humare rooms ke bare mein" interjected Dilshad with a clear stutter in her voice

"Oh!! OH!! Of course, jee toh aap voh hain, jee apke special kamre ready hain"

Dilshad smiled nervously to herself, purposely avoiding Asad's gaze

"Yeh special kamre kya hain Ammi" questioned Asad

"Um, aah.. um voh.. Asad haan I told them you are particular about cleanliness right, so I told them to be extremely particular about our rooms" lied Dilshad

Yeh ladka jasoos kyon nahi ban jata, mused Dilshad

The foursome were taken to their rooms, Dilshad and Najma were together whereas Zoya and Asad had one room each. Dilshad's and Najma's room was the the left and Asad's room was to the right of Zoya.

As they were all entering into their specific rooms, Zoya annoounced

"Phoopi! Chaliye aas paas ki jagah ghumne chalte hai, Dal lake par shikare ki ride, aur markets, aur phoopi Javed said yahaan bagh bhaut..."

"Ms Farooqui, aap do minute saans toh le lejiye. Unpack and relax, we've had a long journey. All this will have to wait"

Zoya made a face and mouthed AKDU before storming off into her room. Dilshad, Najma and Asad too followed suite and went into their respective rooms.

"WOW! look at this place, so amazing" Zoya said while taking in the surroudings

"Aur Akdu Ahmed Khan kabhi relax hi nahi karte. I think in this cold weather I better take a nice hot shower, that will help me wash off the tiredness from the journey"

She quickly gathered her things and marched towards the door that could only be the bathroom. She passed through the door expecting to find the bathroom, but to her shock she was standing there in Asad's room.

"Ms Farooqui! what is this? How did you get into my room? what are you doing here? why do you have this towel? what behaviour is this"

Zoya sighed to herself, she had decided she was not going to let Asad walk all over her in this trip. she roterted out:

"Haan Mr Khan, I entered my own room and magically made a doorway appear to link our rooms. I mean how can I go on even a few hours without you lashing out at me. So I built this door, so you can conveniently come and insult me" Zoya said her every word laced with sarcasm and to add effect she batted her eyes lovingly at Asad

"Ms Farooqui, you think you're really funny"

"No! No!! I'm being honest, joke kaun kar raha hai" mocked Zoya

Asad massaged his temples involuntarily and let out a deep sigh

"I'll ask at reception" he announced

"Oh finally! kuch toh sensible idea aaya apke paas"

Asad came back to Zoya and said that there was a mix up and they were given someone else's room. But due to peak tourist season, they didnt have any spare rooms for them to change to.

"I'll swap my room with Ammi and Najma" he said

Before Zoya could protest, Asad left to go speak with the ladies

Zoya had gone back to her side of the room and set herself on the bed within a few minutes Asad was back.

"Ammi and Najma are settled into their room, they said they can't be bothered with the extra hassle"

"hmmm, so looks like you and I are going to have to deal with this door link"

"I suppose"

"Arre Mr Khan don't worry mein apki izzat par haath nahi dalungi, aap relax kariye" Zoya laughed with a twinkle in her eye while flashing those gorgeous dimples.. she picked up her clothes and retreated towards the actual bathroom

Asad found himself feeling amused and kind of excited by the idea

"Whoa! Excited!!" I think I need a shower too

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Thank you all for your kind words, definitely encouraging to see appreciations 😳
I hope this part wasn't a drag, kind of felt like it to be honest, but don't worry im just putting the settings in place 😃


Edited by rumi.love - 12 years ago
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Loved all the chapters 😊 Seriously interesting 😊 Please do continue soon and if possible please pm me 😊

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