My first OS- Friends for death

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys, this is my first OS. I hope you like it...please do excuse mistakes and all, it's just my first time!😳

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She left! She left me to die alone! She promised that we would always be together! She took those seven vows with me'but to her, none of that was meaningful. Her being my wife was the world to me. I loved her. I thought she loved me'but I was completely wrong. She never even looked back once, she just drove off with him, leaving me deserted, alone and vulnerable. Never once, did I think my love would do this to me but she did. She pierced my heart. All she gave me was sorrow and pain. All I got was suffering. All I got was tears!

Yes, she left me for starvation to get the best of me, but I survived! She left me in the middle of the desert hoping that I would never come back but I will never let her dreams come true. I will never. YASH SCINDIA VOWS TO TAKE REVENGE ON HER! ONE WAY OR ANOTHER!!

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Arpita: I loved you!

Yash: No you didn't!

Arpita: I did!

Yash: Your eyes say something different!

Arpita: Yas..

One gunshot, straight through her forehead, and she left'forever!

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Yash: You were right about her!

Aarti: Yash, yeah I was, but please don't do this!

Yash: I loved her! I LOVED HER AARTI!

Aarti: Yash please! You'll die, please!

Yash: Aarti, I have to!

Aarti: YASH NO!

She pulled him forward to her as he was about to jump off! The gun fell out from his pocket and knowing that he would never realize his mistake until he truly goes through the pain that Arpita's family must be going through for killing her, she pulled the trigger, leaving red and only red in the surrounding.

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Yash: I miss you Aarti and I'm coming to you!

His last words...as he jumped off the cliff.


FRIENDSHIP CAN BE STRONGER THAN LOVE BECAUSE SOMETIMES WHAT YOU FEEL FOR YOUR FRIEND, IS LOVE.

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ilovepyaar thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was very sad and very well written! I loved it! Great work Carissa!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Carrie why did you write this. 😭

It's so sad and emotional and heart breaking 😭

You've written it so beautifully that I could feel their emotions running through your writing šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Carissa...this is really fabulous writing. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ Where were you pal? You have a super combo gift of imagination and narrative flow. Don't stop...now that that you have begun. Looking forward to more...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭awesome
Edited by Malika_ZL_Khan - 12 years ago
nan0102 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that is a very tragic story but still i love it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its so emotional
but wonderful work

..Mini.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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erm my best friend Carissa, I would die for you too LOL yar !!

why make a sad one again!! what is with you and sad eh? aww Carissa stop making me cry..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's an emotional story😭well done carriešŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok then so Aarti was a ghost too or sumn like tht anyway I liked it, it was kool😊

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