taarey story- YAAD TERI AA RAHI HAI

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HEY MY SWEET DEAR FRIENDS
THANKS 4 YOUR GREAT RESPONSE ON MY POEM
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WHICH I WROTE 4 D FOLLOWING STORY BUT WILL COME LATER IN THIS STORY ONLY IF U ALL KEEP SUPPORTING BY YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS 😉😉😛
AND THIS UPDATE IS ESPECIALLY 4 MY SHANU WHO FORCED ME 2 WRITE THIS 😆😆



the story starts from d taarey arguments in d rehearsal hall and rey left from d RH
and taani was crying , sobbing on her knees
( and rey's words were ringing in her mind again and again -
*flashback *
rey (after thinking ) said - taani tum aisa kaise keh sakti ho , vo mere friends hain , meri team hai vo , main unhe aise kaise akela chod sakta hun when they need me just because my girlfriend wants me 2 hide my identity of being a dancer , now this will be really selfish on our part 2 leave them, college as well as my professional team in trouble because of my personal relationship , NO i can't do this , this is wrong ,totally wrong , dance is my life , my passion not an option or choice
( taani was just listening 2 him standing like a statue there , but tears were continuously flowing from her eyes showing her helplessness and d pain of her heart )
rey ( was also crying as he was also in pain as how can he choose between love , friends or passion as all r important 4 him , he can't leave one 4 d other) and i can't leave my friends in trouble as they r those persons who supported me when i was in trouble , when i was alone , they r those who make me smile when i was in pain they were with me 2 support me even before u came into my life , sorry but i can't do this , and suppose even if i do this but till when and how many times because some time or d other tauji ko mere dancer hone ke baare main to pata chalega hi naa , then what to kya tum mujhe dance hamesha ke liye chodne ko kahogi ???

( taani's wet eyes opened wide in shock listening rey's words and nods her head in denial , as she was not in a state 2 speak anything and before she could speak rey spoke)

rey (teary eyes showing pain reflecting he don't want 2 say that he was about 2 say) - taani pyaar hamein better human being banata hai but ye kaisa pyaar hua jo mujhe meri hi real self , meri identity chodne pe force karde ,
( and he left saying that leaving a shocked crying taani behind him in d rehearsal hall)

*FLASHBACK END*
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TAANI( ON HER KNEES crying and sobbing badly, talking 2 her loneliness as no one is there in d rehearsal hall ) -
nahi rey aisa nahi hai , aap nahi jaante ki ye aapka dance hi to hai , jisne sabse pehle mujhe aapki taraf kheencha , aur mujhe aapka crazy fan bana diya ,
your dance touches my soul, my heart as it reflects u , your soul's purity and your passion 4 dance , it not only attracted me towards u but also made me fall 4 u more and brought me here in mumbai close 2 u ,
( wiping her tears with her wet hands but still they were flowing not in a mood 2 stop as her pain has also crossed d limits )
but now i am forced 2 ask u 2 not dance in ndc , it's paining me also , trust me rey i am helpless in this situation , ek baar mera dil to sunte rey ki main bhi majboor hun , ek baar aapko kho chuki hun aur badi difficulties , misunderstandings and problems ke baad aapko paaya hai , dusri baar agar aapko khoya to main jee nahi paungi rey , i love u rey , i really love u plzzz listen 2 my painful heart at least once by your heart

and aap aisa kaisa soch sakte hain ki pyaar main 2 logon ke , love birds ke real self alag hone chahiye but mujhe to lagta tha infact lagta hai ki pyaar main 2 love birds ka love hi unki real identity hoti hai , unki sahi pehchaan hota hai
unka real self unki individuality to unke pyaar main jhalakti hai ,
dono alag hoke bhi ek hote hain aur ek hoke bhi alag ,

( and how can u think that in love love birds should have different identity but i used 2 think and still believe that love of d lovebirds is their only real beautiful identity , the real self of lovebirds is reflected in eachother's love ,they both r 2 bodies but one soul)

finally she gather her courage and stand up and go from there but while she was walking in d corridor she hears d gang except rey talking about her in an empty classroom
(swayam was there but not saying anything , neither supporting nor opposing them )
nil- ek non dancer hoke bhi aisa attitude jaise ki kahin ki queen ho , swayam ki behan hone ka aur rey ki girlfriend hone acchha fayda utha rahi hai taani
patanahi rey ko ismein dikhta kya hai ,
simmi- i agree with u , kahaan hamara rey ek hero and d star dancer of d college and kahan taani zero in everything , totally opposite ,
neha - right u r saying is
rinni - but jabse vo rey ki girlfriend bani hai tabse kuch zyada attitude aagaya hai usmein
sharon - ya actually she was wierd from d starting but now a days she is behaving more wierd, and selfish also i mean how can she keep rey away from dance which is his life , his passion
vicky - pata nahi rey aur swayam taani ko jhelte kaise hain
bharat- vaaahiiich to
( all agree with each other)

( on d other side taani broken heart was again piercing by their comments , tears again made their way in her innocent beautiful eyes which r now yearning 4 true love and care. and she ran outside from d college crying )

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i hate tears re , so don't dare 2 cry


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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!

unres.. ME 1ST <3

AWEEE!!
I LOVE THE CONCEPT 😳
AND FEELING SO BAD FOR TAANI,... 😭
SWAYAM, DINT EVEN SAY A SINGLE THING.. 😭
UPDATE YOUR FF SOON MO DI <3
I CANT WAIT TO READ IT <3

Edited by sanayaluvzya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow chinu amazing concept yaar
feeling bad for taani ,gang are crazy n
swayam uff how he can stay qiuet
update soon..good luck for ur exams :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it awesome very nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's so emotional... But I love it
All the best for your exams
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love the concept plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept contin soon dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great part dear
all the best for ur exam
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow it was awsm n emotional
i luv it thanks for PM

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