A SPECIAL DAY (NEW TAREY STORY)UPDATED PART 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A SPECIAL DAY

I HAVE STARTED THIS STORY BECAUSE MY SWEET DEAR FRIEND SANA ASKED ME 2 WRITE A STORY ON CURRENT TRACK - TAANI'S BIRTHDAY
PART 1
(one day before taani's birthday )

IN REY'S HOUSE , REY WAS THINKING D GIFT 4 TAANI'S BIRTHDAY ,
REY(talking 2 himself ) think rey , think what will u gift taani but it should be very special as it's her first birthday after our relationship , mind never works when needed , hold on why am i thinking with brain , i should think with my heart as she is my heart , my love , my life
and he closes his eyes , and see / feel her angelic face through his heart , her beautiful smile , her love , her care and all taarey beautiful magical moments , their sweet and sour memories
(suddenly he opens his eyes as he got an idea )
rey(2 himself) - haan yeh usse bahut acchha lagega , my angel of love will surely love this
( and he starts preparing 4 his gift )
in evening all boys call him 2 convince him 4 not wishing her as swayam wants 2 give her a surprise birthday party , but he was not convincing at all ,
so swayam (in a little angry voice)- dekh rey , agar ab tu nahi mana to main vapis typical possessive indian brother ki tarah tujhe chodunga nahi,
hum sab kal usse surprise birthday party hi denge aur tabtak tu usse wish nahi karega samjha
rey- ok
listening his angry best friend rey have 2 agree although his heart don't agree with that ,
15 minutes before 12 midnight taani's birthday is going 2 start , and she was still awake as swayam has always wished her at 12 midnight and this time she was expecting rey's call also ,
on d otherside rey was very confused as his mind says no but his heart says yes , his heart badly wanted 2 wish his love but mind says no as he promised 2 swayam ,
and he was just fully confused between his mind and his heart , don't know what 2 do ,

finally it's 12 of midnight ,
rey - (keeps his hand on his heart , and then take out his phone and opens taani's photo in that and kissed her photo ,) and says happy birthday my love taani , happy birthday sweetheart( and keeps his photo in d phone close 2 his heart ,but still his heart was not convinced , uska taani se milne ko , usse dekhne ko had se zyada bekraar tha , )
on d other side
taani has opened d door of her room expecting swayam but no one is there and her phone in her hand in d hope of rey's call . ,still expecting swayam , she moves out of her room but she firstly go 2 pooja ghar of their home 2 take d blessings of his lord krishna
and prays 2 her krishna ji - hey krishna ji , thank u thank u 4 giving and completing smoothly 1 more year of my life , plz give me your blessings now and in d upcoming years also , and i want a special gift from u , and that is d love and happiness in d life of my all loved ones , bhai , rey sabke faces pe smile rahe , and main kabhi kisiko hurt na karun , and i also want your lovely blessings also ,
ab main jaati hun bhai mujhe wish karne ke liye mera wait kar rahe honge
and she goes out of d pooja ghar but still no one is there and she saw closed door of swayam's room and got a bit hurt and goes 2 her room
in swayam's room , swayam was moving from here and there as he also wants 2 wish his little sister,
sw(2 himself) - kya karun birthday wish kar dun jaake usko , aajtak main hamesha se hi meri pyaari si little sis ko 12 baje hi wish karte aaya hun . but agar maine usse abhi wish kar diya to uske surprise ka maza kam ho jaega ,this time dil se happy birthday accept karlo and milke kal apni little sis ko surprise birthday wish karunga ,

in taani's room taani was very hurt and this time her brother has also forgot her birthday , and her love rey has also not called her yet , she was checking her phone again and again but no call/ miss call from rey , she thought that he have also forgot her birthday
d hurt taani go 2 her room's window , from which d moon and stars r visible and she look at d dark sky with twinkling stars and d moon spreading moonlight in d dark sky ,
taani was looking more beautiful due 2 d moonlight
hurt and sad taani(thinking) kya main itni bhi important nahi hun mere apno ki life main ki vo mera birthday yaad rakhein and at least ek baar wish kar de , isbaar to bhai ne bhi mujhe birthday wish nahi kiya , vo to sabse pehle 12 bajte hi mujhe wish karte hain, aur rey , vo bhi mera birthday bhul gaye , par kya pata vo sab mujhe kal birthday wish karein
shayad tired ho aur so gaye honge , anyways leave it main bhi so jaati hun, kal college bhi to jaana hai , oh shit main to bhul hi gayi kal to holiday hai
she goes 2 her bed but unable 2 sleep and tears of being hurt by our loved ones were also falling from her beautiful eyes , making her pillow wet but after sometime she fall asleep due 2 crying and tiredness of d whole day

in d morning on taani's birthday
taani was still asleep and swayam and gang go 2 d market 2 buy their gifts and 2 prepare 4 d party , but rey has already informed them that he has already prepared his gift which is a surprise and he won't come with them

taani wake up at 10 gets up and firstly check her phone 2 see rey's call but she again get hurt 2 see no missed calls , and she go out her room and found that her bhai has also gone somewhere without wishing her ,
now she was really very hurt and angry as well ,
on the other side rey can't wait anymore so rey decides 2 go 2 taayam's house before time 2 wish her properly and drove off 2 taayam's house but he also decides 2 go by window
and surprise taani

taani freshens up and sits on her bed switching on d tv without even having breakfast ,
keeps on changing d channels , as she was angry and hurt ,and then throws d tv remote in anger
she was having tears in her eyes and take out a rey's photo from d cupboard and keep it close 2 her heart and a tear drop fell from her eyes on rey's photo
rey just reached taani's house and starts climbing d window

if u all supported then
precap - rey enters in taani's room and saw her crying
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rey picks taani in his arms

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swayam's dad outburst

I KNOW THIS STORY IS NOT THAT GOOD BUT PLZ IF U LIKE IT A BIT THEN PLZ DO LIKE AS WELL AS COMMENT FROM HEART


THANKS 4 YOUR GREAT UNEXPECTED SUPPORT


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipeee..!!!! M First ...
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story i jst awsome...
i loved it... n precap is interesting...plzz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me second!!!! Hehe res...

UNRES!!

Awww... Poor taani!! She thinks everyones forgotten her birthday... And especially swayam and rey... I felt so bad for her... And awww... Rey indirectly wished her, and so did swayam!!

And she was crying in the end... And rey!! Hehe coming through window... Really excited for tht!!
Solly chota sa comment... But me very busy as the moment... I wanted to write lots more things but i gotta run!

Purely loved the update!!
Ur just a mind-blowing writer!!
Update soon!!
Love u di... ā¤ļø
Edited by Shanae_Diamonds - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it =)
please update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Doll nice story sweetheart ... Plz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyyy moni 😊 its amazing yar really superb n loved swayam n rey convo.(typical indian bhai hahahaha šŸ˜† šŸ˜† ) n taani felt bad 😲😲(ya i knw it wil hurt last yr i did lik this for my frnd bt latr she was happy but she ws sad for whole day so this tym i didnt do like tht n al) n precap gosh rey see's taani while crying 😲 n Mr.shikawat outbrust😲lolll damn interesting dr n ya his outbrust is on taarey r on swayam(as like in precap)????šŸ˜• šŸ˜• okay anyways really an awesome update loved it 😊😊 😊 😊 😊😊 totally plzz do continue it soon n pm me😃😃 😃... really appreciate ur writing skills u r awesome😊
Edited by radhu-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anothe great work by u...
really awsm
nice update and concept
plz plz update soon
and precap is really intresting
and thanks for ur pm's and story's
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great concept dear it's brilliant loved the first part very much and poor taani is hurt but i'm still happy for her because reyam love her soo much
i'm excited for the precape and also little scared
brilliant update šŸ‘ dear and plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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taarey romance i do support...
coz i cant c her in tears anymore...
pls nt swayam's dad outburst
our angel will cry if tht happens!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mind blowing story yaar ... 😊

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