Falling Down; A Random Writing Snippet

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Once again, please do not ask what I was thinking when I wrote this. It can kind of relate to Yash and Aarti's situation in the show, but not really... I just felt like writing it! Here's my last depressing snippet: Click


Falling Down

She's falling, falling down.

Reach for her hand, grab her, save her, never let go of her, go back for her, please.

She doesn't want to leave you, she never did. She wants to stay in this world, she's a carefree soul, she only ever wanted to be happy, but her destiny had other plans for her.

Your hand holds hers tightly, but she's slipping away. She won't make it, you know it too, but deep down, you're holding on to a thread of hope, that she'll be in your arms once again. The love that you were never able to treasure, you'll know how true it was, when she passes on. Unfortunately, this was what was written in the stars.

You realized it too late.

Now her hand is slipping, slipping away.

You broke her so much that the once lively girl has a part of her that wants to fall, that wants to slip away, to evade this misery, the misery that you turned her life into.

She will forgive you, you know that. She always does. But will you be able to forgive yourself? Ponder upon that as her hand leaves yours and she falls down into the darkness, into another world, a world where you hold no importance, a world where she will rule, and you will be nowhere, not even in her memories.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Saffi I don't know how to comment and what to comment. 👏

It was so emotional 😭 😭

I could literally visualize AarYa in it 😭 👏

I Just pray that they don't show such ending in PV 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such an emotional writing..it literally brought tears to my eyes..hope our aarya doesn't ended like this..it will heartbroken if that happen..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have nothing to say but if you ever write a book, I want the first copy!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my Saffi! I was totally visualizing Aarti reading this snippet. Where were these snippets all this time. Loved it. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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don't know what to write, TOTALLY SPEECHLESS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hope aarya don't end up this way. What are u doing cvs?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am yet to come out from the emotion u created Saffi...what a flow of thoughts...visualizing ARYA...am short of words...just want to say👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is...devastatingly beautiful.

Saffi, you have done it again. Stunned me with the emotional power of your words. And while I have still not seen this week's episodes, it is all too easy to think of Yash and Aarti as the unspecified people in this snippet.

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