#2COTWMGOS New OS Page 21/25th July - Page 3

Originally posted by: spvd

wk? OS ?
this OS i have already read...
wasnt this written by Sangeetha? ghsp2fan?
mention the week number and OS number dear...
nice OS dear...

no dear, this OS is not mine...

I want romeo nd juliet also plz kuch karo na

@ ghsp2fan
Kaisa ye safar hai?
awesome dear...
very nice......

PS - in the previous that update count was very nice...
whats the week number and update number?

Kaisa ye safar hai? – 2

Geet pehle Shakespearian era pohunchjaathi….

And guess what, she meets Shakespeare at his theatre…..

Romeo Juliet ka rehersals chal raha hai….

Geet ko thoda dar lagtha hai…

But she is very eager to see what's going on….

She is shocked to see a man donning Juliet's role….

Undinnon mein male artist hi female roles karthe the, haina?

Kitna unromantic , bechare Shakespeareji, unkko koi achchi ladhki nahi milli?

So thinking she peeps in….

She hides herself behind the curtain and takes a look…..

Suddenky someone touches her shoulder….

Geet tries to shout for help….

But Maan as usual closes her mouth…..

Maan: chup…. Bilkul chup

Geet: tum mere peecha kyun kar rahe ho?

Maan: mujhe koi shok nahi tere saath goomne ki, meinne Dadi ko promise kia hai ki tumme sahi salamat wapas lekhe aaoonga, issiliye mein yahan aaya hoon

Geet: ha ha ha, mujhe tummari madat ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein kudh chale jaoongi wapas

Maan: kaise?

Geet: jaise bhi, lekhin aap mujhse dhoor hi raho

Someone spots her and alerts everyone…..

Artist: theif theif

They catch hold of them and take them to Shakespeare

They first think that they have come from their rival company lookin at their funny clothes….

Artist 1: who are you?

Geet: I'm Geet Handa

Artist 2 : what?

Maan: we are not Ur rivals

Geet: we want to act inyour play sir

Shakespeare thinks that their rivals try to pull crowd introducing a girl in their play…..

So he decides to give her a chance….

Geet is happy to play Juliet…..

Maan stays with her…..

Geet too wants him to stay as she is the only girl there….

Geet: tumme Romeo Juliet pasand hai?

Maan: ye toh sabka favourite hai

Geet: I too love them, lekhin afsooos, they die in the end

Maan: tabhi toh unkki kahanni aaj taka mar rahi

Geet: lekhin unka pyaar toh har gayi haina?

Maan: logon ko issiliye inkki kahaani pasand hai

Geet: mujhe toh sirf happy ending pasand hai

Maan: phir ye bhi ak aur fairy tale banjaathi, aaise epic nahi bantha

Geet: pyaar ka jeet toh saath jeene mein hai, saath marne mein nahi

Maan: lekhin ye tummari kahaani nahi, Sahkespeare ki kahaani hai

Geet: lekhin ye history thodi nahi, ye toh sirf ek kahaani hai, issko toh hum badal hi sakthe, haina?

Maan looks at her in confusion….ye kya keh arhi hai?

Aaisa bhi hotha hai kya?

Manthe hai hum future se aaye hai, lekhin hum aaise nahi kar sakthe, haina?

Maan: pagal ho gayi ho kya? Tum shakepeare ki Romeo Juliet ko badalegi?

Geet: mein Geet handa hoon, mein chahoon toh kuch bhi padal saskhti, tumme bhi badal sakthi

Maan gets angry and stares at her…

Geet: kya dekh rahe ho?

Maan ko toh kuch sunayi nahi detha, woh toh Geet ke beauty mein kahin kho gaya…

Maneet eyelock…mahi……

Maan: haan Geet, mein bhi badal raha hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: kuch nahi, tum kuch kaooge?

Geet: haan, mujhe toh fries aur burger chahiye

Maan: ye 2013 nahi hai Geet, yahan toh yahi miltha

Maan gets some pie and tart……

Geet: yak, ye kya hai? na tikka na katta, issko kaise kathe hai?

Maan: ab inko India ke barein mein patha nahi haina? Toh spices ke barein mein bhi patha nahi hoga

Geet: ye log Hindustahan nahi aathe toh inko swadhist khana bhi nahi miltha

Maan: aur humme Shakespeare nahi milthe

Geet: itne achche banne ki koi zaroorat nahi, yahan koi tumme England ka agla king nahi banaane wala

Maan: tumme toh kush honne chahiye Geet, mein king bantha toh tum bhi meri queen banjaoogi

Geet: tumme aaisa khyaal kahan se aaya? Mein issiliye tere saath rehthi hoon kyunkki mein yahan kissi ko nahi jaanthi, aur kuch nahi, samje?

Geet tries to leave….

Maan gets hold of her….

Geet turns back and tries to release his hold….

Maan pulls her and locks her in his arms….

Maneet eyelock…..mahi……

Someone comes……

They step away….

It's Shakespeare…..

Inkki eyelock ko dekhkke Maan ko Romeo banathe hai……

He gives them their dress…..

Maan gets ready and waits for Geet…..

Geet takes a long time….

Maan goes to check her….

She is struggling to tie her dress's rope…

Maan goes and ties it for her….

Geet ko bhi kuch kuch hotha hai…….

Geet Juliet ki attire mein bahut sundar lagthi…..

Maan: aaisa Juliet milthi toh Romeo kya? har koi apne jaan dene ke liye tayaar hoga

Geet now closes his mouth….

Geet: pyaar karnewale marthe nahi, jeethe hai

Maan hugs her….Maneet passionate hug…..

Play shuru hotha….

As usual Maneet rock….

The audience is spell bound by Maneet mersmerising eyelock….

Sabko lagtha hai ki Romeo Juliet fiction nahi real hai…..

They just felt that those characters came alive by some magic……

Shakepeare is also surprised to see such a performance….

Climax scene….

Geet is about to comsume poison…..

Maan is standind behind the set…

He just enters and saves his mishty at the right time…..

Geet: aaisa nahi hotha, tumme toh badh mein aana chahiye tha

Maan: lekhin Geet, joota hi sahi, mein tumme marne nahi desaktha

Geet: par Maan

Maan closes her mouth…

Maan: chup…bilkul chup

Maneet eyelock….mahi………

Maan: jaisa tumne kaha Geet, pyaar ka jeet toh marne se nahi jeene se hotha hai

Geet: haan, yahi pyaar ka jeet hai, hey folks, do you see, We are here to live, not die

Maan: haan Geet, ab mujhe bhi happy endings hi achcha lagtha

The audience just love the twist and there is a huge round of applause even though no one knew what they were speaking….

Geet: par Maan, hum Shakespeare ko dokha nahi de sakthe

Maan: haan Geet, tumne sahi kaha

Geet: ab kya karein?

Maan: jab tak Dadu ka tablet hai humme toh chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, ye lo, khalo

Geet: ab mera dialog dekho, sare jahan se achcha Hindusthan hummara

Maan: ye kya hai?

Geet: hare inkko bhi patha chale ki hum bhi kissi se kam nahi hai, aap bhi bolo, jai hind

Maan: lekhin inkko Hindi samajmein nahi aatha

Geet: toh teek hai, ab dekho, East or West India is the best, aap bhi bolo

Maan: mere liye toh meri Mishty hi sabse best hai

Maneet passionate hug….mahi……

Now Shakespeare is confused…..

Should I change the ending?

Suddenly they fall down and disappear…..

jaise bhi ho, Shakespeare's Romeo Juliet toh bach gayi……

Fabulous thank thank u me too loved it waiting fr part 3 ab maan geet kahan jayenge ab unhe stone age me pauncha do phir part 4 me future wid maaneet married

This one is for you Suhaana''..

Hope you like it''

Kaisa ye safar hai? ' 3

Agla jagah toh ye donno saath mein pohunchthe hai'..

Jaise Suhaana ne kaha lagtha hai ye log ab stone age chale gaye'.

Yah they are surrounded by some strange people'.

Seeing their attire they think that they are some King and Queen'..

Geet: Maan, hum stone age aagaye hai

Maan: aaisa kaise ho saktha? Hum sirf 100 years back aaye hai

Geet: lekhin inka costumes toh dekho, Flintstones ki tarah dikhthe hai

Maan: shayad hum kissi jungle mein aagaye hai, aur ye log tribes honge

Geet: kya? Toh ab hummara kya hoga?

Maan: gabrao mat Geet, ye log bahut friendly dikhthe hai

Suddenly they take bows and aim'.

Geet toh sochthi hai ki ab inka safar yahi katam hoga'.

Maan suddenly covers Geet and pushes her down'.they fall on the ground'..

Maan: Geet, tum teek toh haina?

Geet: Maan, aapko lagi toh nahi?

Maan: mein teek hoon

That arrow is aimed at a wild bore that had eyed Maneet'..

Thank god they are safe now'..

They take them to their leader''.

Unkka head ek lady hai'..

Geet: ab mein samaj gayi ki ye log itne pyaare kyun hai?

Maan: kyun Geet?

Geet: dekho inka head ek aurat hai, issiliye ye log itna achche hai

Maan: ye tumne sahi kaha Geet

Head Lady sign language mein unkko kuch poochthi'..

Geet answers her back in sign language itself''

Maan: toh tumme sign language aatha hai

Geet: nahi, mein toh inse seekhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon

Maan: kya? Geet agar tumne kuch ulta seedha keh diya toh hummare jaan ka katra ho saktha hai

Geet: aaise kuch nahi hoga, dekho ye kitna kush hai, lagtha hai ki inkko meri baat samajmein aayi

Maan: lekhin mujhe toh kuch samaj mein nahi aaya, tumne inse aaisa kya kaha?

Geet: meinne kaha ki hum donno friends hai aur yahan inkki culture ko study karne aaye hai

Maan: mujhe nahi lagtha ki inkko ye baat samj mein aaya

Head Lady calls her men and signals something'.

They take Maneet to their dwelling and they give their traditional dress to wear'.

Geet: dekha, ye log humme guest samajthe hai

Maan: mein ye nahi pehen saktha

Geet: toh teek hai, aap yahi raho mein change karkke aathi

Maan waits for Geet'.

Geet uss single piece dress mein bahut hot lagthi'.

Maan bhi change karkke aatha''

Now the men come and take Maan with them and the women take Geet with them'.

They help her with her make-up'.

Hare phoolon se Geet ko sajaathe hai''

Ab they go to some temple'..

Geet ko lagtha hai ki aaj koi festival hai'.

Maan is still confused'

Geet ne kya kaha aur inhonne kya samjaha?

Ab ye toh babaji hi jaanthe hai'..

They give them something to drink'..

Geet is so thirsty that she finishes it in a second and asks for more'.

But Maan hesitates to drink it'

Geet: Maan, inka welcome drink bahut achcha hai, tum bhi try karo

Maan: Geet hum yahan koi holiday manane nahi aaye hai

Geet: mujhe toh aaisa hi lagtha, kitna suhaana safar haina?

Maan: tum toh har baat ka ulta matlab hi nikhaalthi ho

Geet: ab hum yahan hai toh humme inkki kushiyon mein shamil hona chahiye, ye tumme samaj mein nahi aayega Mr.Sadoo

Maan: kya kaha tumne?

Everybody is dancing around the sacred fire'.

Geet too joins them'..

All are dancing in pairs'.

Head Lady instructs her men'

They take Maan and they insist that he too dance with Geet'.

Geet ko unki music bahut pasand aatha'..

Geet MJ ki moowalk karthi'.

They all laugh at her'..

Geet: ye log kyun hasthe hai?

Maan: yahan aakke moomwalk karogi toh inko lagega ki tumme nachna bhi nahi aatha

Geet: kya? Mein apne college ki sab se best dancer hoon, samje

Maan: yahan koi nahi jaantha ki dancing champion ho, dekho woh ladhki kaise cute nachthi hai

Geet: Maan, aap kujhe chodkke kissi aur ladhki ko kaise dekh sakhte ho

Geet gets angry'

Maan: hare, mein usse dance seekhne ki koshish kar raha hoon

Geet: joot mat bolo, dance toh aap uss ladhkke ko dekhkke bhi seekh sakthe

Maan: teek hai Geet, mein usski taraf nahi dekhoonga, tum usse dekhkke dance karo, aur mein tumme dekhkke seekhtha hoon

Geet: ye behthar hai

They dance for a long time and Geet is intoxicated'.

She drunk that drink na'..

She is just enjoying herself'.

Maan tries to control her but in vain'.

Maan had to accompany her'..

Geet faints and when she wakes up she finds her hands tied to Maan's''

They are inside a hut'.

Yahan sirf ye donno hai'

Geet ko lagtha hai ki ye log unkko arrest karkke rakhe hai'.

Maan is till awake'..

Geet: Maan, hum yahan kaise aaye? Aur mujhe kya hua?

Maan: tum behosh ho gayi thi

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tumne welcome drink piya haina? Uska asar hai

Geet: tumne piya nahi

Maan: nahi, mujhe toh pehle hi shak tha

Geet: toh tumne mujhe rokha kyun nahi?

Maan: kaise rokhtha? Tum toh meri ek bhi nahi sunthi

Geet: Maan mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, ab ye log raat ko 12 bhaje aakke humme apne god ko bali denge, Maan hum sach mein bali ka bakra ban gaye hai

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hoga

Maan is so confident and cool'

Geet: aapko kaise patha?

Maan: Geet, ek bar iss jagah ko dhyaan se dekho

Geet takes a look around'..

This place is decorated with flowers and it feels so romantic'.

Geet: isska kya matlab?

Maan: mujhe lagtha hai ki aaj hummari shadhi ho gayi aur ye hummara SR hai

Geet: kya? Aap pagal ho agye ho kya?

Maan: Geet tumne dekha nahi ki uss agni ke samne sirf couples dance kar arhe the

Geet: toh?

Maan: toh yahi unkka pehron hoga

Geet: nahi nahi, aaise nahi ho saktha

Maan is right, seeing their Romeo Juliet look they thought that they are some Prince and Princess who love each other and had eloped from their palace''

So they decided to give them protection and get them married'.

Geet unties her hands'.

Geet: tumne issko khola kyun nahi?

Maan: kyunki tummare saath aaise rehne mein mujhe bahutachcha lagtha

Geet: tumna mujhse dhoor raho, samje?

She pushes him away and she moeves back '..

After a while Geet ehars some animal's roar'

She gets frightened and she gets closer to Maan'

Maan catches hold of her and she embraces her'.

Maan: darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Geet, tum sojao, mein hoona?

Geet falls asleep and they wake up only in the morning'..

Geet wakes up first and she finds herself in Maan's arms'

She quickly moves away'

Maan pulls her back and she falls over him'.

She hears some giggling noise'.

She finds some girls peeping thru the window'..

Geet: Maan. Maan, utto

Maan wakes up '.

Geet: Maan ab hum kya karein

Someone knocks'..

It's the Head lady'

She has come to check whether they are fine''

Geet: maan, ye ab yahan kyun aayi hai?

Maan: mujhe kyun poochthi ho? tum toh inkke basha bhi jaathi ho, insse hi poocha

Geet: Maan, tum hi baat karo

That lady claps and the girls bring them breakfast''

Geet is scared to eat that food'.

Kahin issme mein kuch m,ila hua toh'

Maan is hungry he digs in'.

Usska favourite food hai'..

Fresh fruits , honey and boiled roots'..

Maan: Geet, tum bhi khao

After making sure that Maan is fine after eating that food Geet too starts eating'..

Geet ka nasha uthar gaya toh she feels shy wearing such an unfit infront of Maan''

Geet: Maan, hummara dress kahan hai'..

Maan has kept them safe with him''.

Maan: ab chalo, hum nahakke aathe hai

Geet: aap rukho, pehle mein nahakke aathi hoon

Maan: Geet, yahan koi attached bathroom nahi hai, humme paaswali koi stream mein nahana padega, aur mein tumme kahin akhele nahi jaane de saktha

Geet: kya? Stream mein nahana hai? lekhin mujhe tehelna nahi aatha

Maan: koi baat nahi, mein tumme sikhaoonga

Geet: what? Usski koi zaroorat nahi hai

Maan: Geet, mein hoona, tum kyun tension lethi ho, aao mere saath

Maan lifts her and carries her'.mahi''''

After taking bath Geet asks Maan to leave her alone so that she could change her dress'.

Maan: Geet, ab toh hummari shadhi bhi ho gayi hai, phir itna kyun sharmathi ho?

Geet: tum jao, abhi

Maan turns back and sits'..

Maan: mein tumme akhele nahi chodoonga, tum change karlo Geet

After getting ready Maan goes and takes his lappy'.

Maan: toh cahlein Geet

Geet: kahan?

Maan shows the tablet''

Maan: agla safar ke liye tayaar nahi ho?

Geet: nahi nahi, mein kahin nahi jaanewali, mein aage jaakke kissi Dinosaur ki dinner nahi banna chahathi

Maan: toh phir hum kya karein?

Geet: jab tak Mr.Khurana humme lene nahi aathe hum yahi rahenge

Maan: toh tumne faisla kar hi liya hai ki hum yahi apna nayi zindagi shuru karenge

Maan gets closer '..

Geet: meinne kaha na? mujhse dhoor raho

Maan: mujhe bhi ye jagah aur ye log bahut pasand hai, kitna masoom log hai? issiliye itna kush hai

Geet: haan, lekin ek problem hai

Maan: Geet, aaise mat dekho, yahan koi Vada Pav nahi millega, samji

Geet: hare, woh nahi hai

Maan: phir kya problem hai? tum toh khane ke aage kuch nahi sochthi

Geet: kal hummare bachon ko kaunsi school mein dalenge? Yahan toh koi school hi nahi hai

Maan: Geet pehle bache toh honne do

Geet: kya?

Maan: hare Geet hum haina? Hum unkko sikhayebge, ab meri problem ko bhi dekho

Maan pulls her closer'..

Geet: tumme maths aatha haina?

Maan: aaise waqt pe kaise sawaal karthi hai ye?

Geet: bathao Maan

Maan: kyun pooch rahi ho?

Geet: kyunki mujhe maths nahi aatha, mein hummare bachon ko language sikhaathi hoon, aur tum Science and Maths sikhao

Maan: Dadaji ab mujhse nahi hoga, kahan hai aap?

continued on pg 7

Wow wow thank u thanks a lot fr writing fr me i cant blieve maaneet in stoneage that was fab nd u included my fav flintstones too actually this safar is 2 interesting me waiting fr part 4 abi future ki bari h

Awww its funny n awesome ...