if you were given oppurtunity to rewrite

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Posted: 12 years ago
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pv story...what you like to change???


me i would like to make arya separate from sm and start own bussiness after prasanth fiasco and aakash entry and jpint colobration with sm membes to fight arya as gussiness rival's is treat to watch...


pls share your wish 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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you know what, i agree with you..i wished they showed us AarYa leaving the mansion rather that the stupid kidnapping..from there, the PH could have portrayed how they cope up with life on their own and the Dubeys being there for them and Gyatri not being able to be away from them instead of bringing in new entries especially this Aakash thing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the track where Aarti falls in love with Yashji was a bit too rushed, also I would have liked a track on a track focusing on Aarti's past (childhood) as an orphan or maybe about her real parents. Another track of Aarti helping Yashji in the office would have been nice. I wouldn't have had Aman and Mansi disappear so soon. Also a nice slap of reality for Prashant's Taiji before she was removed would have been nice.

Forgot to add the way the custody battle was sorted by the trust game was really absurd. So I might have changed both that track and Pari's case.
Edited by Gkathria - 12 years ago

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