Arsha OS: Kiss Under The Moonlight

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

res!!!!

I'll unres this tomorrow... pakka

so here I am.. well as u know.. there are many who dont read ArSha.. everyone has their own reason.. well u know mine..

but reading any of ur work is always a treat.. so I had to read this..

keeping in mind how difficult it might have been for u to write something in ArSha.. but there's always a first time..

coming to the entire plot.. well thats something every ArSha fan would love to get this as reality.. but this piece of work made me imagine the entire thing infront of my eyes..

I loved the thing.. Amar being envious n proud of Shakti... at the same time.. definitely the challenger has very well conceptualized the challenge n u have penned it amazingly..

not to forget the last part.. Kiss!! well that was beautifully described...

u nailed it..

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Shreya

@krasforever

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

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this was awesome Vaish👍🏼

it felt so real...

i think u have written something on ArSha for d 1st time n it's beautiful

their kiss was amazing

Amar's little disappointment n jealousy was beautifully described...

loved it❤️

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

u did it... u did it.. u did it...!! yayy!!

me toh ekdum loved it...was indeed very real... and felt as if aisa sach mein hua hai..!

ArSha ... no words... u potrayed them upto the mark..!

i rarely read ArSha works...only KR...

But to get something like this from u...considering certain things, it was a treat indeed!!

and yes...the main point of it all, their kiss was magnificent and soo, well i again, REAL!!

could totally imagine them...

write more stuff which is not exactly in ur league, ur doing an osm job in those too!

waiting to see more of ur completed challenges.. good luck! 😊

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malificient

@malificient

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Posted: 12 years ago

😳Awww they just are ADORABLE!!!!! Love them to the core!! So cute they are like the perfect couple!!!! Oops not like they are but wish it was true anyway must say Vaish fab OS!!! Loved it *muaaah*

And how can I forget to mention the kiss was just heavenly!!!

And must say the whole OS looked like an imagery just happening in front of eyes!!!

Loved it!!!😊

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Yamna

@..-Chabhilal-..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Very sweet and cute update
loved the OS
thnx 4 da pm

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

shakti di calendar launch will always gone be special to me...😊

But the way u had written an os on this situation... Great thought...👏

everything was so simple yet so beautiful... from start to end... 👍🏼

For ArSHa there is no need of words, there presence is enough for each other...😳

Both miss DID Days... even i miss those old memories...😭

will love to see my ArSHa back creating MEGIC with each other... ❤️

Wonderful! Loved it!

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww... arsha

tune likh bhi liya?? 😲

how sweet... gud job honey..😃

tujhe tera pehla arsha writeup mubarak ho...🥳

special thanx to aku...🤗

achha hua .. jo main teko ek baat batani bhul hi gyi.. varna ye kiss na hoti...😆

gud gud... bahot deeply likha h..😃

old arsha os ka experience.. haina 😉

d3 is the best thing happened to them...😛

romance karne ka achha chance mila tha...☺️

but.. amar ab zarur regret karta hoga.. jab koi aur h co-star 🤢

i'm also proud of shaks... this gal is on fire...👏

tune to inka past bhi la dia samne.. 🤣

DID ke time ki kissie... d3 k time kya control me they??? 😎

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Mjhe 1st pg pe res karna tha... :/ ... Jisne challenge kiya ussi ka comment dusre pg pe... Huh... 😭

Cmng to ur OS... Firstly..dhanyavaad ise acept krne k liye... 🤗

I knw it was ur first attempt..bt dats wat a challenge means...and u've done a great job ladki... For the first time... I loved it..!!! 😳

Kunwar's pov... How much he is proud of her...bt on d other hand...he somwhr envy her... You knw its the reality..!!!

Evrything ws way too nicely described... And that iv..haha...i can nvr forget that...

Uske baad der Magical..oops... Megical kiss... Haayyyeee... 😳

DESTINY..!!! DESTINY..!!! DESTINY..!!! ... Arsha = Destiny

you did a great job ladki... *pats your back* 😆

P.S. - I know acc to the rules if writer is successful in successfully completing the challenge of challenger..thn they cn mke der reader do nything... So... M ready..!!! 😊

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago