Arsha OS: Kiss Under The Moonlight

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

awww...this is one of the cutest ArSha os I've ever read 🤗

Loved the way u have described Amar's point of view...his envy yet pride for Shaks 😳

And the way u perfectly portrayed a dancer's emotions 😃

And that kiss...hayeee

Absolutely amazing os...Hope u write more on ArSha 👍🏼

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

hailaaa!!!!!!!!!!
tu or arsha
kaise hua re ye...
aku wel done yr challenge mast dia tune isko...hehehe

bt seriously vaishu tune pura justice kia h OS ke sth
short n sweet...mast
n da kiss hayeee
muaaahhh meri trf se tere ko hehehe

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

meee ttooo lovedd it... vaishh dii.. thnxx fr d pm..

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Kesha

@Radiance.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Oh wow Vaish. I really feel it did happen.

Your works are a treat to read. Hey, did they really kiss in DID, or is it just a thought?

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

First it was a shock to me that u wrote something on Arsha...

but..but..this has proven ur versatility..

i liked it.. from beginning only...

the way u showed Amar's POV..her being proud of shakti and then little bit stinginess of jealous, yes that do happen practically so u have done that in great way...

then their little interview encounter was well penned, liked it...

and then the mutual collision of feelings..so nicely framed... liked it, their drive through past days of DID... and the bind they shared then.. everything was just fab...
be it kiss or their finding comfort in each other u did it beautifully...

thanks for providing me with link vaishali...

beautiful OS...