A NEW FF ON KISHA : AWESOME LOVE- ch15 in pg 19

shanaya_shanu thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
HI guys as i promised you im back with another ff on kisha😉
i updated this ff in another forum of BFF
so pls if u find any mistakes pls let me know😕😃😃
okay for now im updating the character sketch😊😊



AWESOME LOVE : IM IN LOVE

CHARACTER SKETCH

KESHAV DESAI (KD) : He is a lover boy. He is very straight forward, doesn't tell any lies. He believes that love is beautiful only for some span of time but doesn't believe in life long love. He likes Graffiti and wild life photography.

KIYA GUJRAL : She is a pretty, bubbly and innocent girl. She believes that love is like an ocean and believes in life long love. She likes to play Golf.

RANVEER : He is the elder brother to Kiya and the best care-taker of her. He supports her in every aspect of her life.

PANCHI : She is the best friend of Kiya. Everytime she supports Kiya.

AVANTIKA : She is also best friend of Kiya. A crazy girl and loves gossips.

BOBBY : She is the girl friend of Piddhi.

SHARON : She is the elder sister to KD.

SWAYAM : He is the husband of Sharon. Brother in law of KD.

ARJUN : He is the boy friend of Avantika. He likes to send romantic messages.

SAMAR and PIDDHI : They are the best friends of KD. They stay together everytime.


chap 1 - pg 2

chap 2 - pg 3

chap 3 - pg 5

chap 4 - pg 6

chap 5 - pg 7

chap 6 - pg 8

chap 7 - pg 8

chap 8 - pg 9

chap 9 - pg 9

chap 10 - pg 10

chap 11 - pg 13

chap 12 - pg 16

chap 13 - pg 17

chap 14 - pg 18

chap 15 - pg 19

Edited by shanaya_shanu - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

151

Views

12.7k

Users

22

Likes

160

Frequent Posters

Aishu_Kisha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Wowee you are back with another FF😃.
KD and Kiya have different views about love.
and the Cs seems interesting.
Continue soon and don't forget to pm me.
-Razzy- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
shanaya🤗
yeahh!!! u r back with a new ff
loved the CS<3
both have diff views regarding love!!
really looking forward to the first chap <3
shanaya_shanu thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: Kishaforever

Wowee you are back with another FF😃.
KD and Kiya have different views about love.
and the Cs seems interesting.
Continue soon and don't forget to pm me.


yeah thank u so much😊
me too cant wait to post furthur chapters😆😆
surely ll pm u😊
OriginalJuhi_04 thumbnail
Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Plz include Juhi also as Samar's gf or wife...plz plz plz😊

Lovely concept😊
KD in RV of TBP's shoes😆
Kiya believing in love😊
YaRa as sibllings😃

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 12 years ago
shanaya_shanu thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: arhadlove

shanaya🤗
yeahh!!! u r back with a new ff
loved the CS<3
both have diff views regarding love!!
really looking forward to the first chap <3

oh yeah again im back 🤗
this is gng to be a long ff😊
diff views abt love and how they meet
how they patch up
this will be so exciting😉
ll update soon
-Razzy- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: reykriya21

oh yeah again im back 🤗
this is gng to be a long ff😊
diff views abt love and how they meet
how they patch up
this will be so exciting😉
ll update soon


really excited now!!!!!! <3
cherry.parul0 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
hey wooo yaar...very nyc cs... xcited for thiss ff.. update soon... nd yesss very thnx for the pm
shanaya_shanu thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
hello friends😊😊
here im updating my 1st chapter
sorry i was a bit late in updating
sorry if u find any grammatical mistakes
okay hope u enjoy reading it😉



CHAPTER 1

A cool winter morning. Streets of Sidney…. Oh yeah, it is Sidney, Australia. Suddenly from nowhere, a car appears.. the angry young man Keshav Desai aka KD is driving with great speed. Frustrated, he stops at a place where he does graffiti painting and all. He takes out the colours and starts erasing the picture of Kiya Gujral whom he loved the most😭. A police van and a car arrive, Mr. Anirudh Jaitley, a police officer from the van and Ranveer Gujral and his father Mr. Abhimaan Gujral come out of the car. Jaitley asks for the reason

J : What happened Mr. Gujral…. Kya problem hain??

R : Main bataata hoon sir, meri behen Kiya Gujral, iss KD ko pyaar kiya hain. Ussi se shaadi karna chahti hain wo. Par yeh rascal ab shaadi nahi karna chahtha hain😭.

J : Yeah KD… kya problem hain.. tell me the reason.

KD : Kyunki main uss se life long pyaar karke nahi reh sakta. Mujhe life long relationships acche nahi lagte😡.

R : Toh Kiya se problem hain kya?? U rascal….😡

They both come to fight but Jaitley controls them.

KD : Mujhko mujhse hi prob hain… kya karoon.

J : Okay calm down… relax KD. Tum apni kahaani shuru se batao toh pata chal jayega ki problem kya hain.

KD : Kya batao.. kaise… kahan se…. batao?? When I was in my LKG, I proposed a teacher but she rejected it and beat me😆😆😆.

Ranveer smirks at this and when he is about to tell further Jaitley cuts him off and says " arre baba!! Tum kiya se kaise mila… kab mila ..aur yeh sab kaise hua ki batao na. ussi se shuru karo".

KD : Okay.. sorry….

*****FLASHBACK***********

One day, KD is busy in painting when he saw a girl laughing happily. Beside that girl, a pair – a boy is proposing a girl. He gives a flower bouquet. From that, the girl (the one KD saw) takes out one flower and smiles. KD watches the girl, admires her and says to himself

" OH MY GOD!! I'M IN LOVE…… IT IS THE TIME TO FALL IN LOVE😳😳"

The girl is none other than Kiya and the pair behind her is Avantika and Arjun. KD wanted to meet her right now but she was nowhere to see, she went off from his sight.

In the college, Panchi, Kiya and Avantika have fun by watching boys all over the campus.

Panchi : Oh My God!! Itne saare boys hain… wow!!!!😛😛

Kiya : Main apni dream boy se milna chahti hoon. Kaha milega woh mujhe…… oh God!!😆😆

Panchi : Don't worry Kiya… u can find here itself….

Avantika : Hey Kiya, dekho main dikhaati huh tujhe… see that guy….his name is Vicky.

Kiya : Oh wow!! Uss ka cheeks kitne acchhe hain🤣.

Avantika: Hey vo Prateek hain. Yeh Golf acchha khelta hain.

Kiya : Okay…

Avantika : Aur vo hain Kunal. He is the best gossip player.

Kiya had a convo with the 3 guys and exchanges contact numbers. One day, as they are on their way, Kiya gets messages to her mobile from Kunal, Prateek, Vicky respectively asking her to come for a date. Out of excitement, Kiya is about to reply for 3 of them….

Panchi : Kya Kiya, paagal hogayi kya?? Tum in theeno ko love karoge kya???

Kiya : Toh phirr hum kya karenge??

Avantika : Lets play the game of chits. Nice na.

The 3 girls sit at a caf, prepare 3 chits, write the boys names and fold them. Avantika is enjoying her romantic sms in her mobile which her boyfriend Arjun is sending😆😆. They couldn't decide as what chit to pick up. They ask some guys for help. The guys are KD, Samar and Piddhi.

Panchi : Excuse me guys!! Kya tum humhari help karoge kya??

KD sees Kiya from far off, tells his friends that she is the one whom he saw at that time. They go nearer. Kiya doesn't see them as she closes her eyes off.

KD : Kya karna hain??

Panchi : In 3 chits mein se ek chit ko pick karna hoga to decide our friend's future boyfriend.

KD : kya????

Piddhi : chalo… yeh humse nahi hoga KD Bhai!!

KD : Wait…… yeh sab kya hain aur kaise hua??

Panchi explains him the whole thing that has happened. KD gets shocked on knowing that Kiya likes 3 guys. He picks up one chit but stops and takes another paper, writes his name on that chit, folds it. Kiya gets shocked by seeing this and signals Panchi and Avantika to get out of here.

Kiya : Tum apne aapko kya samajh rahe ho?? Chalo Panchi, Avantika lets go.

KD : Hey Kiya, take it na, if it has my name, waise its good na…😳😳

Kiya : Bloody hell!!😡😡

As they are going away from there, KD continues " Kiya, as long as u unfold it and see the name, I ll be there in ur heart and I'm in love with you… I LOVE U Kiya…. I LOVE YOU 😳😳😊…..

so pls read and feel free to comment guys😉😉

ll update next soon😃

hope u like it😊

..WitchGrave.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Res
Unres
Audh gaye hos kya update tha boss
Amazing amazing loved the first chappy
Confusing but good
Continue soon yaara
Pachna humko ya nahi batao zara 😉
Edited by NaughtyRa - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".