BREWING DESIRES-UPDATED PT 10 PG 61

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I cant able to resist to give this story guys as my brain is full of the concepts and i cant sit in peace till i give this one...soon DO SAPNE gonna end and then am gonna start this one till then do tell me how is the prologue and CS...😉






BREWING DESIRES

PROLOGUE

Desire is a sense of longing for a person or object or hoping for an outcome. The same sense is expressed by emotions such as "craving" or "hankering". When a person desires something or someone, their sense of longing is excited by the enjoyment or the thought of the item or person, and they want to take actions to obtain their goal.

her touch,
i yearn for its painfull grace,

the nails,all black

as i hang here chained,with love she says

dark,all i see

waiting ,my queen

almost time,i feel it

sound of heels,tiled marbel

freedoms key,door opens

i shudder with anticipation,

steps slow,heart pounding

nails grazing,breath gasping

she lets out a purr

my breath i hold

blindfold removed

light blinds

a hand on my cheek

it sooths

my eyes meet hers ,and i see her smile

as she moves in i smell her skin

ash's and cloves

she whispers in my ear ,are we ready my dear

i can do naught but whimper,yes (full of fear)

at once its there,her nails its fire

i arch my back ,mouth open to scream

but silence is kept,for thats what she likes

stoically,im there almost a statue

i wait for her kiss,

a quick little bite is all i require

COURTESY FROM GOOGLE


Ladies and gentlemen..i present u..Mr.Maan Singh Khurana..25 yrs old,rich arrogant stunningly handsome with chocolate brown eyes,long white nose,exact M shaped pink lips..with perfect greek god stature'hot tempered guy'the one of the number 1 business men in universe'he's the private person and mingles very less with society'..

PS:Do not go with the impression that this one another dark story reading the above poem..but is an passionate story'with full of love and passion..first passion overpowers and then love overpowers them

A ripple through the
Dark threads of my Soul
You breathe there
and make me feel whole
Stir the power
within my being
Let it burn through
my veins so freeing

I won't let it
f**k with my brain

I won't let it

send me insane

I control each drip
that I swallow

and sigh with the

pleasure I follow

My sweet desire

stir the threads of my Soul

Breathe there and

make me feel whole

I won't let you
f**k with my brain

I won't let you

send me insane

Stir the power
as I swallow

I sigh with the

burn that I follow

Come to me

my Dark Desire

Encompass my Soul

let the power inspire

Find what you

cannot ever see

Feel what lays

in the depths of me

I won't ever
f**k with your brain

I won't ever

send you insane

COURTESY FROM GOOGLE


Geet Handa'stunningly pretty and 21 yrs old'..she's the epitome of beauty having a pair of hazel almond eyes with world's innocence..long white nose and lush pink lips'she's the epitome of beauty though she wont acknowledges it herself'.studying Bachelors in Architecture in London University'..




Meera Singhania a stunningly pretty and best friend of Geet Handa'she's studying Media and broadcasting subject in the same university and working as the part time reporter in London Times''


Dev Singh Khurana-Maan's brother


Vikram Singhania-Brother of Meera and has a deep crush on Geet the day he saw her with his sister'..


Nikki Malhotra-A photographer and the friend of Meera and Geet'Geet thinks him as brother though he wont think like that'






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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prologue...
would love to read more of it..
plz continue soon with it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice prolouge wid Poems.

Characters sketch is amazing.

Do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice prologue n CS ...loved it
waiting for start...continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear😊

lovely poem👏

do sapne will end me sob sob😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start
waiting for read story
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wow seems nice..waiting for more update di..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved prolouge and cs waiting 4 first part
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congrates on new one dear
awesome CS and prologue
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

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