THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 108

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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you. my first flowers of this story!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

res now varna by the time i come to comment this thread would have crossed 150... šŸ˜†


EDIT:
arz kiya hai...

elephants fear mouse aur ladki ke liye dhoondho spouse
elephants fear mouse aur ladki ke liye dhoondho spouse,
fasten your seabelts kyunki aayi hai mahodhaya in the house!
šŸ‘Aisi shaiyari sun ke Mari ka shayar bhi bhaag jayega...šŸ˜†

Avi... i cannot help say ISSHHH after this update 😳
you seiously are going to make me melt by the end of this story šŸ˜†
every move described amplified into thousand emotions while i read it. it was like sliding on the snow no hichkichs. its so hard to find such a soft Maan. 😳
Teenage love, innocent kind, sigh...😊
anyways i just realized me and u have something in common... a very J Maan 🤣 farak sirf yahi hai ki your maan is a soft cuddly J Maan and mine is an angry possessive J Maan šŸ˜†

That's why I started with the soft love... after the MU is resolved he will be MSK... two-in-one... Avi thodi si toh smart hai...šŸ˜‰
right on music selection Avi! it was just icing on cake 😃
I loved that song for them
i could ramble on more about Maaneet but nothing would aptly describe them and this update. so i am going to save all my blabbering and just say... simply beautiful!

lol a new love connection b/w Mr. Shetty and Ms. Iyer... šŸ˜† btw its NamaskaraM not NamaskaraN i dont know if it was a typo but just correcting if it wasnt šŸ˜†
Thanks I fixed it...
keep writing Avi šŸ¤—


Thank you! Sorry, I forgot to respond soon enough...šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

😃😳

Humra boggie reserbation iha hain.šŸ˜›

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I love, love love this picture. Just beautiful. The lighting is just perfect.
And this was the image that was in my head as I was reading the update.😳

I love everything about rains. The dark clouds, the wet roads, garam gaam chai and hot pakoras, or just sitting inside listening to the sound of the rain as it lashes everything outside with my favorite book, or curled up next to my favorite person and last but not the least, Spiderman's hot upside down kiss in the rain.šŸ˜‰
These are a few of my favorite things.

What is it about rain and romance I wonder?They are synonymous to each other.
And as I was reading, about Maan and Geet's, A walk to remember in the rain, for a few moments I was lost in their imaginary world aided in my flight of fancy by the beautiful gazal of Jagjit Singh
A perfect song for this shy couple.😳
The whole update was surreal for me and yet I was caught up in Maan and Geet because of your detailed explanation of every nuance of emotion they were experiencing.😳
From the awkward umbrella holding, to the stolen glances, to the veil everything was just perfect.

Now as for Maan being jealous of SRK. I had a good laugh at that one. Just last week I had an argument over the hotness of Gerald Butler with my husband, to which he completely disagreed calling him a grizzly bear and we finally settled the argument by agreeing to disagree.šŸ˜†
As for SRk, I am an SRK fan since I watched him first in Fauji. My sister and I used to drool over him and my father thought he looked like a monkeyšŸ˜†

P.S Lucky girl Naureen.šŸ˜‰

Ok off to read the next one, though I missed Dev and Tara.😃


I love this pic. Almost thought to use it but I wanted her in white to reflect his thoughts..
Aaj mein upar
aasman niche
aaj mein aage
zamana hai piche...
tell me o Khuda
ab mein kya karu
Nisha your comment made me feel like this...
Thanks my dear for being here for me in every way...šŸ¤—
You know what I mean... lub u a lot...šŸ¤—
You missed Dev-Tara, jumping in the air and fist pumping Dev style...😊
they are next...😃
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

I love this pic. Almost thought to use it but I wanted her in white to reflect his thoughts..
Aaj mein upar
aasman niche
aaj mein aage
zamana hai piche...
tell me o Khuda
ab mein kya karu
Nisha your comment made me feel like this...
Thanks my dear for being here for me in every way...šŸ¤—
You know what I mean... lub u a lot...šŸ¤—
You missed Dev-Tara, jumping in the air and fist pumping Dev style...😊
they are next...😃


Avi you are just like me, bogged down by nitty gritties. I also don't like using pics if the dress colors don't match to what I have imagined and so I have even stopped using themšŸ˜†

Insan wahi ruk jaata hain jaha usse pyar milta hain, and that's why I am where you are.😳

Me loves you lotter than a lotsšŸ¤—
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 5- Slowly and steadily, I am catching up with the updates. You have updated like a storm! I think this is my favorite so far. I like Maan. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

I lied, I love Dev. lol

It's a secret but me too...šŸ˜†
My love for second leads.. you can relate I am sure..
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 7 - lovely part
the song was perfect for their sitution
thnc to prf shetty that he allowed to maan to get her back to hostel and they walk talking silently with each other
loved the last scene when he turns back to see her at window, see her caring for him

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 7 - lovely part

the song was perfect for their sitution
thnc to prf shetty that he allowed to maan to get her back to hostel and they walk talking silently with each other
loved the last scene when he turns back to see her at window, see her caring for him

Glad you liked it Madhuri.

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