MG-Innocent Love #9 EPILOGUE pg35/Apr24 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
that was simply great!
innocence and love submerged into one wonderful story of love!!!!!
amazing
waiting for more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for more mannet moments
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Part 58
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Part 57
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Maan and Geet had enough time together and now they were badly missing Maanya and thus they left for home a week before.

They went directly to KM and Maan was about to pick Maanya but seeing Geet's motherly eyes, he let her do it first. Later they both played and played with Maanya. In the mean while Vicky and family kept asking them about the tour. Geet explained the places and what Maan did for her, all surprises only excluding their sensored Part.

"main part tou cut he ker diya tumne" Viccky teased her, hearing which Geet gave him the stern look. Man was enjoying being with his family and especially Maanya. Maanya again immediately gelled with him and was all over him, trying to eat his nose, face, pulling his hair. Maan lay down on carpet, made Maanya seated on his belly and he played with her, trying to sing something for her in his voice' his sexy and sensous voice seemed really besura while singing'.

But Maanya was enjoying while others shouted at him to stop, he didn't. Later Annie to came and Geet and Annie got busy in their girly talks. None had seen Maan this way, even at home he was so professional. Even though he loved them all but he had never opened up this freely to them.

"Yeh sab Geet ka asar hai, insane banadiya isse robot se" his dad said. That was his way to show love to Maan, they never talked staright but then there was deep bonding.

Maan took Maanya in lap and sat straight, combing her hair with his finger he sincerely said

"Sacchi Dad, Geet has taught me how to lead a life. In dono ne tou meri zindagi ko naye Maine he de diye" His mother pulled his ears

"Aur hum kuch nahi hai" "nahi mom .. woo" they all had good family time. Later Maan went to Geet and Annie. Annie did not even look at him and got up from her seat to leave'.

"Chutki" Annie stopped for a moment but the again started to move

Maan ran behind her and stopped her. Then took her to room and made her sit

"I was your baby sister, right? World's most beautiful baby sister, this is what you said right?, what happened to all that"

"You are still" "no, you care damn about me.dad and you had rift, you took your family and left KM, did you ever realize that people here also missed you."

Annie was a sweet girl Maan knew and she was also very attached to Geet and was happy for Geet getting her happiness but he has in all this guilt trip has ignored her and his family. Annie was hurt coz before marriage she was his object of pampering. He has ignored his siter and she was badly hurt. Annie turned away from Maan and slightly wiped the tears near her eyes.

She turned to him and gave a smile "Bahi, I just speak anything, you know na. You just got so much happiness and your messed up life just got fixed aur main tou bas appka mood hee bigad rahee hoon" Maan brought her closer

"you can never spoil my mood. I am all for my whole family now,complain as much as you can and your bhai is here to fix everyone's complain. Mujhe riste sambhalne hee nahi aate, ek sambhalta hoon dusra rooth jata hai"

"Ok just tell my punishment, your Bhai is ready" "Move back to KM, Maanya ko bhi humse dur le jate ho" Maan thought for a while

"I will talk to Dad and convince him" "I am just moving in, don't worry" Maan was confident as he was not guilt ridden now.

Everyone, including Geet were shocked at Maan's decision but they were all happy.

As days passed by, Geet was learning all ways to be a good wifey. Maan was busy with loads of work and in mid of these he was enjoying how is sweet wifey was trying to act all wifey wifey' she looked cute even in those acts as everything she did was accompanied with her innocence.

Maan would come from office in evening sharp at 6pm, he had made rule to not work beyond that as he in any case could not ignore his family for work. Maanya would be all his center of attention after office, followed by Geet and then whole family.

He would play with her for hours and Maanya would be all over him for hours. He would feed her dinner everyday and this itself took an hour of time, minimum. Geet in the meanwhile, like a good wifey, give him coffee and snack and leave for kitchen. Maan could not help admiring her. Geet and typical wifey didn't match actually but it looked more adorable to him with the effort she was trying to fit in that role.

She has to prepare at least one prepearion herself. She would signal it to Maan at dinner time and it was unspoken rule that he have to have that dish most.

Maanya would get tired playing with Maan and others and would sleep early. When after wrapping up, when Maan would come to room, he was soon followed by his sweet wifey, with bowl of oil in her hand.

"Mishty, I am fine" her cute acts of becoming a typical wifey had made him name Mishty and this is how he had recently started calling her

"Fine kaise, whole day you take so much stress in office and then again at home, you give your time to everyone and then caring of Maanya, is it any easy task.Am I that bad a wife that after your whole day of stress I won'y help you realx"

Maan smiled and he knew there was no escape so he would surrender and lay as she instructed so that she can massage his head and back from the oil. But this massaging would end up in Maan loosing him self and then she ending up being passionately in his arms'

"This is the way of relaxation I need after whole day, samjhi" Geet would blush and hide herself in him, in her world.

Maan would be in office till 6 only but only in those hours he was handling so many things. He mostly prefered working from behind the scene and let Viccky do the public facing. After all viccky have given his much more to the company. Maan would interfere only in very curious decision, or if the finance was really big, ways to show effect on share market and his main concern was the Khurana enterprise be on top.

Viccky did all client meeting and Maan only met clients when it was really needed or else he would work on policy and scope of new projects. The projects that Maan would deal with would be of national and internation level and which would affect national and international economy. Rest was all handled by Vicky.

After Maan joined, Raj would relax and enjoy his family and clubs. Though he kept his eyes on figures, but with Maan around he did not need to, he knew.

But after all this when he came home, none could even figure out what big figures of money game he played with, he would be a typical, husband, father, son and brother.Every one knew, after six Maan should not even be contacted regarding professional issues and they had to abide as all needed him more than he needing them, that's how he had created the situation. Even Viccky who would be engrossed in office work sometimes at home, was not allowed work related issue to Maan afer 6pm.

One day in office

"Bhai why are you working so hard to setup and expand business in UK. I mean we have established business already there"

"There is much scope there for us which need to be exploited and above all there is a big personal reason."

Vicky did not get what personal reason Maan could have.He left.

Geet had placed her choice of being professor in the University of London, but for that Maan have to work on to expand business in UK and proper office from where he can enhance his company there and also keep proper control on what goes in the main office, here in Delhi.

Maanya whole day would be with Geet mostly, tailing her where ever she goes. Though she would play with others but then when her eyes would go to momma she would run and spread her hands for Momma's arm to pick her up.

But be in evening and Maan entering the hall, she would run to him and then would go to none. She would clutch him tight, not even allowing him to open his shoes until he he hold her like that for at least 10 minutes. Maan would then get all fresh but Maanya following him with her alien words filling his ears like music. She had by now learned to say dadda and mumma. To other she would say.. babba.. kakka or whatever came to her mouth.

Maan would have his coffee, snack all with Maanya on his lap or on shoulder. She would take the horsy ride tour of big KM hall on his back.

Every one who would see would laugh on him but Maan cared less. They were now used to see this new side of Maan.

Later when Geet would free her self from all her wifey work, they would have family time together which would include, either one of them or both of them running behind her to feed her and Maanya after few bites would enjoy, running, hidding and laughing. She had found many safe places where it was difficult for them to catch her.

When Maanya would sleep, Maan's whole attention would focus on his Mishty with whom he would be dieing to be from long but would live her satisfey fulfilling her wifey dreams.

Today, Maan was getting little to desperate to be with her and as Maanya went to sleep, geet moved to kitchen. Maan today lost his pateince. It was time he knock some knowledge in her mind. He went to kitchen in pretext to take water, then slighty held her hand. When she looked, he gave her stern look to follow him. With this look of his, she did not have guts to deny him and she quietly followed him.

The moment they reached the stairs of terrace, Maan picked her up in his arms and directly headed to terrace an the closed the door of it, next lying her on the big swing

"Maan but abhi dinner'" her words vanished as Maan passionatly took her lips within his. Today he was badly in need of her and he had no patience to hear her fears'

His hands roamed on her bare waist between her blouse and saari, inside her pallu. He was sucking on her mouth soon taking her completely in his own world.Their hands went inside their clothes to feel the skin as their lips were glued. They got closer and closer to get more and more of other. Maan lost himself and pulled her pallu completely down and kneaded her globes harshly taking out groans as Geet moaned and cluthed his shirt.

He left her lips and bit her clevage, Geet bent backward to give him more access. As his one hand worked with her globes, his other hand went inside her Saari, from her leg to up her thigh, kneading her soft skin there' Geet could just clutch to him and moan to get more. Maanw as about to unbutton her blouse whn they heard knock on the terrace door.

Maaneet fixed them self and Maan opened the door to find Annie

"I have been looking whole place, it's dinner time and you both are here"

"Woo.. we were discussing something importand, needed some peace." Said Maan and topic would have ended here but Geet wanted to make sure of Maan's word

"Haan haan, we were just having serious talks only, nahi tou yahan what else can we do. Iss terrace pe and that too before dinner, what else can one do. Koi serious baat he thi, aisa waisa kya hoga "

This definitly placed stamp on Annie's doubt on what they were doing, Maan turned his face to other side, very well knowing what actually got conveyed by his Mishty's innocent words to save them.

Annie laughed "Yes Geet, what else can one even do in terrace, hai na bhai'" Maan took quick steps down the stairs.

Later in night, in Maaneet's room, Maan pulled geet closer

"Maan, abhi to we just escaped you forgot" "we escaped or not, yeh to tum chor he do Mishty"

"Geet I really have something important to say" "What? " "See eight months have passed and you have enjoyed your wifey duty, you are fabulous in this but"

"But? Did I miss something in my duty" "Geet, you were perfect, abb chup chap suno. Now you lived life of house wife, right" Geet nodded in yes

"So now, after Maanya's B'day, you must live all this and concentrate on your preparation to get admission in the university you have choosed. You just have few months now."

"Maan, have I not been a proper Housewife" He cupped her face, but his voice was stern

"Geet you are perfect, but if that is what you want for future. If you want to be what you had said then it's high time you should get on with your books other wise, you are a perfect wifey and you can enjoy what you are doing. All I want is for you to be happy and not regret later."

"No, I am sticking to my decsion, that's for sure" "So after Maanya's B'day, right" Geet nodded in yes.

Later they hadd a grand 2nd B'day celbration of Maanya. Many kids were there and Maanya looked like fairy, with wand in her hand, running here and there.

This is a very long update and thus I definitly expect longer comments from you all and more likes.

My big thanks to all my readers and new readers, who loved my work and appreciated it. These things keep me motivated towards writing.

Anu

Next: Epilogue: Will come in a day or two.

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ossum dear
really loved the way maan mingled with everyone
and moreover he extending buissness to london
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update yar
but i'm gona miss IL a lotCute smiley 036Cute smiley 036
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
vow so sweet maanya
cute little doll is celebrating birthday
nice to see maan is extending business in london
awesome dear
plz give long hot passionate and happy epilogue dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely part
maan giving time to family
loved maanya maan's bonding
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wht it ended so soon it was short...annies interruption nd geets clarification was best ...maan nd maanya's bonding was cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update maneet romance geet wifey duties maanya maan bonding family and maan finally together good rule of maan after 6 no work and finally geet study time



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Posted: 12 years ago
botj the parts is amezing but shocking also that u are ending this i m very much sad by this

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