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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: bhuvii
Shaffy you rock ...
it felt so good to read this part ...
wow..
its awesome...
the way mayanak handled the situation was awesome...

Thanks...let's see..now...how he will manafoy his parent's

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: Faria.
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Shafy meri Mayur _ un dono ki angel ko itna maat ukh de

Yaar aur kitna dukh sehegi ye log- enough is enough na!!!!!!!!

The lil shreya got scared by the behavior of her grandparents '

Nupur also got hurt by them..:(

My poor mayor.. sob sob sob

But the last scene was quite beaitufuk-yes I m talking the scene where the slept embracing each other .. very nice update

Keep it up

These are the circumstances dear..

which will bring them very close to each other...

DOn't worry from now onwards they'll not have any bad time..their good fortune has been started...

Thank for liking the part

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Part 43 Page 127

Lover Never Looses

Part 44

There was complete dead silence in th mid night..no one to be seen on the street..it seems that even trees around were also asleep..and not bothering about the happenings of surroundings'When a person wearing black overcoat covering his whole body'where his face was also not able to visible in the Dark'

He sotly with creeping legs enters a gouse..flashing a dim light torch over here and there may he was searching something'may he was a thief'when suddenly his eyes fall on something'he clutched his torch tightly and took out a think very sharp small knif from his pocket as if ready to target whoever will come infront of him'he glanced over the area and then move towards the stairs..

He stopped in front of the first room..as if scanning from his eyes'and then moved forward towards the second room it seems that he knows no one was there'.he moved towards the second room..and slightly without making any noise he opened it'.

An evil smile played on his lips when he saw the sight infront of him'.Suddenly Shriya felt someone presence in her house'she slightly open her eyes to found someone in black was standing infront of her'.she get panicked and clutched her Dadaa's shirt more tightly'.

That man approaches towards her..while..she was all in sweat was clutching her Dadaa more tightly'her fear increased more when she saw knife in his hand that is covered with blodd'a sudden fear engulf in her'she looked towards her parent's only to see her far come true'.

She frightenly looked towards the man who was approaching towards her with an evil laugh on his face and was saying,"Ab tumko mujhse kon bachayega'"

Shriya..scarly:Nahi..jao yahan se'she shook her Dadaa"Daddaaa..utho na'..please.." She tried to walk up her father but he was fall asleep and was also his body was covered with blood but still she tried to wake him up'she knew he will woke up nad will save her from this bad man who is approaching towards her'she vigrously shook her father but wasn't getting anyresponse from him'she even cried for her mother..but her cindition was same as of her father'

She was crying..screaming for them..when evil man said laughingly,"Ab vo nahi uthenge..ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta hahahahahaha'"Saying he approached towards her'

Shriya screamed loudly making her lungs out..and jerkly sat on the bed fully covered with sweat and was crying misreably'.

Both Mayank and Nupur woke up'from their sleep as soon they heard Shriya scream..Mayank switched on the table lamp only to see his daughter sitting like a fear kitten was crying and sweating miserably..he touched her shoulder'but she jerked it off..thinking'that bad is approaching to take her and said,"Please..mujhe chod..do'"

Mayank made Shriya to sit on his lap..while Nuour caressed her'face..making her to believe that no one is there'.

Nupur..lovingly..hugging her caressing her back:Shona kya hua..shona'

Shriya still crying a lot opened her eyes'seeing her mother fine she relieved a bit and hugged her ack and said,"Mamaa..vo mujhe le jaayega'"

Nupur..carressing her back making her comfortable..:Koi nahi leke jaayega mere bacche ko..mein hoon na'

Suddenly she realises..what bad man has done with her father she instantly broke her hug and asked her mother in scared tone:Mamaa..Dadaa..kahan hain'she looked here and there and screamed his name,"Dadaa'kahan ho.."

Mayank softly put his hand on her shoulder and turning towards him he said with atmost care,"Mera bacchaa..mein yahi hoon..aap daro nahi'" Though Mayank heart was aching seeing her child in a such a state..she must have seen a very bad nightmaire..he hugged her trying to sooth her pain and said,"Mein hoon yahin per ho'"

Beleiving that he father is here only she hugged him tightly and said in her sob,"Dadaa..vo bad uncle mujhe le to nahi jaayenge'"

Getting her actual fear they both get disheartened and were very much feeling guilty as somehwere all this is happening due to the evening incident'composing themselves Nupur placed her hand on her back and sais,"Nahi koi nahi leke jaayega'.Ajao..so jao'aisa karo tum huamre beech mein so jao..mein aur Dadaa..dono apni princess ko sabse se bacha k rakehenge'." Making her laid on the middle of the bed between them'

She said still in a feary voice,"Aap dono please kahin mat jana'."

Mayank..caressing her face said,"Nahi kahin nahi jaayenge'"

Nupur'touching her head said,"Nahi jaayenge.." when suddenly she realizes her head is burning hot..she place her palm on her neck to realise she is suffereing from very high fever..her expressions changes to shock '

Seeing her so worried Mayank asked her,"What Happened.."

Nupur..worriedly..:Mayank thermometer do mujhe'"

Mayank:Kyu..abhi..!!

Nupur:Jaldi..please'.Shriya'jaldi.."

That's it no words were needed..now..he immdiately rush to get the thermometerand was prying that his fear won't come true'. After a minute or two when he saw the thermoneter'he so knew..that his fear become true'his daughter was suffereing from high fever'he felt so much as a failure'.his heart was aching'even Nupur too got worried'and was panicking'as Shriya was now had started shivering'

Nupur:Mayank..isse to bahut tez bukhar hain'aur ye to ab shiver bhi kar rahi hain'."

Mayank:Ek kaam karo'tum thandi oattiyaan le aao..mein tab tak doctor ko phone karta hoon'

Nupur:But itni raat ko kon aayega'

Mayank:Benji

Nupur:Benji..!!!'

Mayank:Bhool gayi'he is a pediatrist..vo bachoo ka doctor hain'

Nupur:Haan thik hain..please use bulao jaldi se fir..

Mayank:Haan mein bulata hoon..tum pattiyan le aao..

Nupur:Haan meinlaati hoon'.Hey bhagwan meri bacchi ko jaldi thik kar dena'.saying she moved to kitched to grab cold water and strips to apply on her forhead..

Hope you like it

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Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

they should have kept shirya infront whn all was happening tht was really childhish of them...poor girl

cont soon

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
they should have kept shirya infront whn all was happening tht was really childhish of them...poor girl

cont soon

they really don't knoe Di that this will happen...don't worry..shriya will be fine...

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Humayra

@Humayra

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Ye kya hua!! Mujhe laga tha ki evening wo incident Shriya ki upper bohot bada affect karega..

Hope Shriya will be fine..

Benji is coming.. Plz don't make him behave the way MayUrs' parents did..

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah !!

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deepika

@deepa0507

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

it was fabulous update deary

ohhh it was dream i thought its real

ohhh no us incident ka effect abhi bhi he shriya per

hope she is fine soon

thanks for pm and sorry for late

love u

deepa

Edited by deepa5 - 12 years ago

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: MyInspirationz
Hmmm... nice update 😊

Thanks

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: Humayra
Ye kya hua!! Mujhe laga tha ki evening wo incident Shriya ki upper bohot bada affect karega..

Hope Shriya will be fine..

Benji is coming.. Plz don't make him behave the way MayUrs' parents did..

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah !!

Evening incident k wajah se Shriya could able to recall Dhruv and had a nightmare...

Well i don't know how is Benji is going to react

till now haven't started the next part

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: deepa5
it was fabulous update deary
ohhh it was dream i thought its real
ohhh no us incident ka effect abhi bhi he shriya per
hope she is fine soon

thanks for pm and sorry for late
love u
deepa

Hmm...the incident has really effected ..her...

She'll be fine soon...

Don't worry...

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