ASYA FS: I'm Sorry, Zoya... PT 3 PG 6!!! 29/9/13

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys,
So this is a random one I typed out on my phone whenever I got a free minute or two in the last few days in transit. Hope you like it :)

INDEX:

Part 1: Below
Part 2: Page 2
Part 3: Page 6

I'm Sorry, Zoya...

"I'm sorry, Zoya. Yaad hai? Tumne mere phone par woh password dala tha?"

Zoya blushed. Indeed she did. She had relished in his constant recitation of those three words. She never thought she would ache to hear those words from him, with sincerity.

"Yes, how could i forget. You were so mad you pinned me against my bedroom wall," she said, as if to remind him that she wasn't entirely at fault.

"This time I'll say it as many times as you want. Willingly, sincerely, until you tell me to stop. I'm sorry, Zoya.I'm sorry, Zoya.I'm sorry, Zoya..."

As he recited the three magic words, he came closer to her, his voice dropping to a whimper, and then to a whisper. Until all she could hear was her name in her ear and his husky voice, full of desire.

She could feel his breath on the nape of her neck as he took her in for an embrace. His arms slid around her waist and his chin rested on her shoulder. She had tried to be angry with him for longer. To push him away. To scream and shout that it wasn't so easy. But then she knew she was trying to convince herself rather than him.

She put her arms around his toned torso, and pressed herself further into her beloved Jahapana.

"I forgive you... But I want you to promise me you won't even think of pushing me away. Ever. Again," she whispered in a stern but loving tone.

"I'm sorry, Zoya...I'm sorry, Zoya...I'm sorry, Zoya... " he continued, while a smile formed on her lips.

His lips gently kissed her collar bone, then her neck. Slowly, he showered her with kisses until he reached her lips. With his finger on her chin, he guided her eyes to meet his.

Their lips met: tenderly at first. Slowly the urgency in the kiss rose to fully heightened passion for one another.

Zoya ran her hands through his ebony, silky hair as he squeezed her waist with his strong arms. Asad ran one of his hands up and down her lower back, while his other hand went up to cup her face.

He again started trailing her neck with kisses. Lingering, more urgent this time, while repeating his new mantra: "Im sorry, Zoya... "

How was it? :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww it was 2 hot and sweet ...hehhehehe

I liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWEESSOOMMEE!!!!!!! and hot! loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was FABULOOUSS. Loved it. (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab updte...luvd de way zoya was all blushhyy tamatar part 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys,

SO I know was supposed to be a OS, but I just got inspired. I wrote a little more on a plane ride a couple hours ago. Now I'm stuck again haha but maybe I can come up with more later... So I guess this is turning into an SS? Anyway.. here is part 2 :)

I'm Sorry, Zoya Part 2: Bittersweet

Zoya let out soft moans, enjoying his electrifying touch. She ran one of her hands down the front of his torso, tracing the features of his chest. When she reached his six pack, she let out a little giggle. His shirt was a nuisance, depriving her of the feel of his skin, she thought to herself. She gently pushed him, creating a little distance between them, and both her hands moved to his first button. She took her time undoing his shirt, one button at a time, while trailing each bit of visible skin with kisses. Asad groaned. He wanted her in his arms.

Zoya pushed the shirt off his shoulders while showering his neck with kisses. Having her at such close proximity, Asad put his arms around her waist again while he trailed the other side of her neck with kisses. His let his hands lift her top a little, to feel her soft skin. With the same patience as Zoya, he lifted it more and more until it went over top her head.

He took a second to drink in her exposed skin. His eyes travelled from her neck, to her chest, to her stomach, and finally on her scarred tissue.

Realizing what he was eyeing, Zoya turned her back to him, embarrassed. Asad came closer and slipped his arms around her bare waist. Consumed by his touch, she leaned her head back on his shoulder, closing her eyes.

"Don't. Please. Don't hide from me," he pleaded her, his voice barely a whisper. "You are beautiful. From the tip of your longest hair to the smallest beauty spot on your toes."

Zoya put her hands over his, intertwining their fingers.

"My only regret is that I wasn't able to protect you, from that pain," he explained.

Zoya turned her head to face his right cheek, and planted a soft, but long kiss. She nuzzled his neck with her nose and waited for him to look into her eyes.

Asad turned his gaze to meet hers, and saw her eyes welling up. He kissed her tears as they ran down her cheeks, and looked into her eyes again. He shook his head slightly, as if to say there was no reason for her tears, and continued to kiss her tear stained face.

Thoughts? :)
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No comments in a week :( should i stop? :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u updated😃 second part was really awesome. it was heart touching as well as hot☺️ why did you end that in such an interesting point? will you continue this? i would love to read the next part☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosamale

u updated😃 second part was really awesome. it was heart touching as well as hot☺️ why did you end that in such an interesting point? will you continue this? i would love to read the next part☺️


Aww thanks :) I will just haven't really been inspired with it lately.. but if I do I'll be sure to update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful... continue soon and thnx for the pm

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