ASYA FS: I'm Sorry, Zoya... PT 3 PG 6!!! 29/9/13

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Homeslice

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Posted: 11 years ago

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YOU LEAVE US LIKE THIS?

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.
YOU LEAVE US LIKE THIS?

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I lost my train of thought 😳

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noesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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i looove it plz continue sooon

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webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hmm, don't recall reading this before, Monica. You have tremendously grown as a writer. 👏For me, part 3 was way better than the first 2 parts. More content and better emoting. Loved how you described Zoya's discomfort on being physically separated from Asad. So I take it that they are married? What is Asad sorry about! 😆 I must be tired today but could not figure it out!

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: webuser7
Hmm, don't recall reading this before, Monica. You have tremendously grown as a writer. 👏For me, part 3 was way better than the first 2 parts. More content and better emoting. Loved how you described Zoya's discomfort on being physically separated from Asad. So I take it that they are married? What is Asad sorry about! 😆 I must be tired today but could not figure it out!

Hahaha even I don't know what he's sorry about 🤣 Just thought about how he would manaofy his lioness if he ever had to apologize 😆 And then I guess I thought about what it would be like if he didn't know about the scar until after they were married. But yes they are indeed married. 😳

Thanks hun 🤗 The first two were just random things I wrote on transit 😆 This one I actually sat down and thought what I wanted to happen. I think that's why I can better put across what I want to. Thanks sooo much for the lovely feedback 😳😳😳

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Read all three parts. So romantic and nice story. Love it. One confusing r they married?
Thanks for pm continue soon

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: AAK0007
Read all three parts. So romantic and nice story. Love it. One confusing r they married?
Thanks for pm continue soon

Lol yes they are. I guess I could have made that a little more clear 😆

Thanks! 😳

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: mochhug

Lol yes they are. I guess I could have made that a little more clear😆

Thanks!😳

yeah i m confused because u no where said that they r married or am i miss any part

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: AAK0007

yeah i m confused because u no where said that they r married or am i miss any part

No you didn't miss anything. Actually when I started this it was a fluke. Something random, so there was no back story. Now that I'm continuing it, I'm trying to show they're married. Same room and all. But I guess I have to be a little less subtle 😆

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mochhug

No you didn't miss anything. Actually when I started this it was a fluke. Something random, so there was no back story. Now that I'm continuing it, I'm trying to show they're married. Same room and all. But I guess I have to be a little less subtle😆

yes yes please continue it. And update soon