Originally posted by: meevee
A BIG Sorry Rutu for the delayed response...luvd the mushy mushy romantic OS there...very much to my heart's liking and one which I add to my had-wished-for list to have seen TanHa enact - they wuld hav seriously rocked it...well letting bygones be bygones, brilliant concept, wonderful execution...Swayam is a sweetheart as ever, but Sharon at her vulnerable best, with her innermost core bared open was awsum, one of the very best on Sharon that I have read...thanks for the PM...and yes, wuld luv a sequel to this one...the steadily stable Swayam and emotionally swinging Sharon make a killer combo as ever - well done once again !!!
No need to sorry Meera, I'm happy that late hi sahi you read and commented. And I how I wished to see TanHa enacting the scene, but *sigh*. Anyways thank you for the always lovely commentsđł
Originally posted by: nikita_arsha
Pehle toh, I'm extremely sorry for being late. Sorry Rutu, I was busy with exams.
Coming to the OS, it's truly marvellous. I loved the opening lines. The inhibitions that surround Sharon were beautifully captured. Her insecurities and grief were perfectly penned down. Swayum's part was also nicely done. The dialogue that followed between them was quintessentially our SwaRon. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The very theme of the OS is profoundly engrossing. SwaRon and rains, reminds me of the Ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si sequence and I'm off to watching it again.
And there you are, asking whether you should continue it or not? Huh, start typing woman or else I'm coming after you with a hair-drier to blow you away!
Its okay Nikita, at least you read and commented, that's more than enough for me.Thanks for the comment. And although I'm lanky like Shantanu but I'm strong enough not be blown away by a mere hair-drierđ
Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Rutu!!! I am really sorry for commenting so late! Bt My friendd...another masterpiece mahnn!! Hugs to you for writing such an adorable and sweet OS! I loved your concept that from sharon hating rains to swayam promising him to make her believe in rains again. And the car bonett's scene was actually very romanticc!! And dat joke on swayam being cheesy was amazingg! On the whole i loved everything <3<3<3
Surbhi!!! No need to say sorry, its okay re. Thanks for the commenting dearđł
Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon
EDITED.
Ruts đł
sorry for unres'ing last. you know how lazy i am. so please bear with me.
coming to the review for the update from mah side,it is a same boring comment as always as you like usual stole the show. you caught the very right chord again. the OS was awesome with the right amount of sadness,humor and love to it. a typical SwaRon OS. the gloominess was brought out well and what to say about Sharon inhibitions regarding the rains they were super-awesomely penned down. it was an over-all AWESOME OS.
P.S:I won't give a long comment because my unnecessary chit-chat couldn't cover much of it. sometimes somethings are better left unsaid.
FINALLY the first post grabbed on my OS got unreserved. I'm grateful to the almightyđ. And I love to read big comments re, even if you find them boring, but for me they mean a lot
Originally posted by: tanzz15
Ding... đ¤
Sorry for being super duper late!!! đ¤˘
Ruts OS's are always a treat to read.The same thing happened here!!I read the os last night and simply it made me cry.I loved the way,you took a simple base to write this amazing stuff.This one had the perfect amount of love..intensity...pain..sorrow..and silent love...
Loved the simple atmosphere yet intense one...sharon's pain was perfectly portrayed and u did full justice to both our loving characters...Rain was used a the perfect media to hold them together...their love...
Excellent job Ruts... đ
Will be waiting for more Ruts specials!!!! đ
Dongđ¤
Sorry's are not required re. But I didn't intend to make you cry, sorry for that, but I hope the end managed to paste a feeble smile on your faceđł Thanks for the comment
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