KriYaansh OS - Audi

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

freaking awsome 🤗

cant understand... why such rules are made...

dont go...😳

loved this harmless stalkerish romeo side of rey... 😃

he comes there just to get that beautiful view of her...😊

lol... reminds me of old classics- "ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga " & "ghar se nikalte hi"

isme to line bhi h- "kal subah dekha to,, bal banati vo khidki pe aayi nazar "... 😆

veru cutely described... 👍🏼

rey's desires to see her on window... to hold her... its just perfect

even kriya is restless to meet this audi guy ... 😛

ohhh... accident...

rey mila nhi kriya se...😕

i want 2nd part... milana zaruri h... 😎

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

another amazing os
loved it
n wich ever site you chose for writing ur works...do tell me...plz

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nifty-nia

@nifty-nia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awww Rey's so cute :P Bechara kya se kya hogaya pyaar me :P I wish he was just a bit carefull about the audi. Nice.
And I vote for blog

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

I hope you are aware of the fact that you write flawlessly Anky, because this piece was simply out of this world and beyond anyone's imagination.

You always come up with the most outstanding, different and interesting concepts, and this one is a live example of it. I loved the way you expressed Rey's restlessness and Kria's eagerness about the R8. Who would believe a car could be so symbolic? And yeah, I couldn't help, but laugh reading Rey falter when Kria came down and he banged his beauty, the Audi. Huge loss! :P But yeah, a really expressive shot.

Do write more OSes, and before that please update Tides & Moon, have been waiting for it. Albeit, thanks a ton for the PM, I enjoyed reading this, and you rocked! :D

Much Love and Cheers! xD

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 12 years ago