KriYaansh OS - Audi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry, But I have moved my works to Fanfiction.net

The rules on IF do not allow me to write much, and I really don't want to break any rules.


So, this One-Shot has been moved to http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8981264/1/Audi-Tenu-Tak-de

Feel free to follow me on Fanfiction.net for my other stories and one-shots.

my ID is aria009hera



Thanks for visiting this link!! :)

Edited by -Anky- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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so coming to the OS...

let me whine some more...

he got the car tainted by gettingit rammed...

then he didn't even meet the girl when she came ...

i mean comeon...

audi kharab ki uske badle mein kiss hi le leta hai..

i wudn't have minded u know... and u will say... "when do u ever mind for a kiss vaish... *rolling eyes*"

so coming ti the update...

loved how u brought abt both of the povs...

how rey wanted to go... but cudn't... kinda reminds me of the age old romance... chup chup ke milna...

shahid looked thru the cycle... he was looking thru audi... zamana aage badh gaya...

loved the flow of words di...

it was beautiful...


Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres

this was really awesome

loved it ...

Edited by khusbooluvarsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res...

unres...

awww it was really cute n innocent...

ajkal ap kisi b OS me KR ko nahi milwa rhe..😆

loved it...

as usual beautifully written...

n u leaving IF...😲

m not familiar abt these sites which u hv mentioned...

so i cant suggest u nything...

but wherever u post ur works...

plz let us know abt that...plzzz...

or provide me link or nything...
Edited by ..Roop.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os
loved it
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww di it was innocently intense...awww i love it...

just loved it...

and haa fanfictions.com mei post kardena and when u update here just give the links or in fb plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha

awww di it was innocently intense...awww i love it...

just loved it...

and haa fanfictions.com mei post kardena and when u update here just give the links or in fb plzz


Do you post on FF.net Dee?

I kinda found it hard. It doesn't let me write in Hindi.. I'll have to figure my way around it.

I give my links always on FB.. I urge everyone who has an FB profile, to go LIKE the page B Queen Creations... I post all my works there..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res till morng.. DOne 😆😆
n os
it was beautiful...👏👏👏
LOVe it
but last mein kuch samh nhi aaya rey ko kya laga or awaaj😆😆
anyway LOve it❤️
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyyy Anky!!
Wow... That was definitely one of the most unique OS I've read!
I love Rey in this OS 😆
Poor guy got his beauty disfigured..
I honestly thought they would talk to each other.. or at least Kria would find out who it was..
But my head was rammed to a brake to as I read on :P
It was a nice, short and sweet piece :)
Great job!

And about the site... I'm on Wattpad and Fanfiction.net
So either one would be fine.. Though I prefer Wattpad.. the layout is a bit more appealing 😛
But either way..
Me no chodd*ing your peecha 😈
I really want to read your works... So doesn't matter where you post it, I'll read and comment :)

Take careee <3 :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anki di yeah kya tha You are quiiting If..
I just though ki you are getting a break here..
Anyways will alawys stay in touch with you by some means...

With question Plz go on with ITVF or blog..
I guess your blog is not on wordpress I dont know I can never open it here..

Or just give up in doc in ur Bqueens page...

Going to read the update..

unres

Amazing OS di..
This was fab..
And Rey he is such a silly guy..
She came to meet him but he ran off thinking abt cops and did damage to his car too..wat a crqzy guy was he..

Di You are amazing at One shots..
I love them..

Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago

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