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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Manveerians..😃😃

hws u all???

Thnks guys for co-operating wid us..😊

So We are here With our very First Joint SS...

U people may be thinking we means...

Its BUSHRA (bushra..manveer)

NIMMI (aksuji)

SONIA (princessSonia)

here's the Official Banner of Our SS...😳

n here's d Concept...

It is said that Firendship is the most Purest Relation...

Nothing is Greater than Friendship...

And Trust is an important component of it..

But if Your TRUST is broken???

What if u get Betrayed by your Friend????

Will u still be friends with your Betrayer or Rival..???

What if u fall for your Enemy???

Will you Forgive your Friend????

Will LOVE conquer HATRED??😕😕

Will MISUNDERSTANDINGS get cleared??

or will some MORE add???

For getting the Answers please stayed tuned guys...😆😉

Please leave your precious comments.. n do Hit the Tab...

it will only take 5 mins minimum to LIKE + COMMENT but it will Encourage us...😳

Suggestions and Criticisms are also Welcum...😳

LUV U all...

From

Bushra, Nimmi n Sonia...😳

Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago

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princess

@bushra..manveer

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

hiiee guys i m bushra (bushra..manveer). i m new on IF... this is nt my first work...

par yeh mera, NImmi n sonia ka first joint SS hai.. hope u all will like it...😉
i hope u all enjoy my story hum teeno puri koshish karega hum sab apna best dege
but ap sab bhi plzz itna karna like n comment karna plzz itna tu karoge na😛😛

sonia nimmi

she is my best firends n sonia n nimmi is my big sis i love both of u n i m very happy ke main ap dono ke sath story likhri hoon n i hope ap dono ko bhi mere sath kaam karke acha lage n ager meri koi mistake hoo so tell me n uske liya advance sorry n thank u so so much ke ap dono mere sath likhre hoon n u both of u very talented i hope ap dono ki wajah se is story maain 4 moon or lag jayaga ok sis n

n kabhi bhi hum teeno sis se koi galty hojaya guys so advance sorry okk n ager apko humari story pasand aye tu hit like button n leave ur preaciou comments n we hope so u like enjoy this story

n dont worry is story main love bhi hate bhi romance bhi haan action bhi haan drama bhi haan n kuch kam lage tu comment par batana hum ap sab ke opinions is story main add karne ki puri koshish karega ok

love u my deary sis nimmi n sonu sisy

n love u all😳

Edited by bushra..manveer - 12 years ago

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nimmi

@aksuji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Hello friends this is nimmi'...🤗.

I guess its my first post on DEK forum other than comments '...no doubt m also a Manveer fan so m here with an ss😛

For the first time m trying my hands at writing😳😳...in fact it is joint ss written by bushra, Sonia and myself'...the idea is mainly bushra's and m just taking some credits from it😆. Friends plz give this ss a try as this would encourage us and we'll try to do better and give us your precious feedbacks'.⭐️⭐️...be it criticism or appreciation'...love u bushi and sonia❤️ ...love u all🤗🤗

Edited by aksuji - 12 years ago

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

So guys here's the index of our SS...

Concept = Above

Prologue = Below

Character Sketch - pg 6

Chapter 1 - pg 6

Chapter 2 + impt note + WN (writers note) - pg 14

Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago

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nimmi

@aksuji

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Posted: 12 years ago

Friends if u like our story and wish to receive pms then u can buddy either of us i.e.

princessSonia( sonia) or bushra..manveer(bushra) or aksuji(nimmi) and we'll make sure to notify u... 😛😛😛

Edited by aksuji - 12 years ago

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princess

@bushra..manveer

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Members will be added soon..

for pms read the above note..😳

n also mention it in your comments..😃

Edited by bushra..manveer - 12 years ago

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princess

@bushra..manveer

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

😳😳😳😳😳😳So widout wasting ur further time..

Guys here's d prologue :-

a big mansion (its manyata's house)

all r on breakfast table

briraj:so manyata beta ap kuch kha q nai rahi hoon pari???
manyata:kaha tu rahi hoon daata..
briraj:sahi se kahao beta..
manyata:ji daata. where is dadi sahab?????
briraj:wo devgarah gayi haan Aryan or Riddhima bhi sath gaya haan unke.
manyata:ok bhabhi bhai bhi gaya..
vijay:hmm so taiyari hogi jay bhai???
jay:haan bhai puri hogayi..

manyata confuse😕😕
manyata:kis cheez ki taiyari ??
komal:aj ek party haan Rajprohit jee ki taraf se us main ap sab bhi jayaga bache
manyata:or aap or daata????
komal:apke daata baadmey ayenge or hume kuch kaam haan toh hum nai aa rahe hai.
manyata:ok maa.
briraj:or humari pari ke liya aaj humne khud ek dress layi hai
manyata:thank u dad..(she hugs Brijraj)🤗
jay:or hume mill bhi chuki humari dress jiji.
vijay:n dad where is my suit??
briraj: woh aapke room main hai...
vijay: thnks dad😃

scene shifts to

another mansion (its Uday's house)

in uday's house

unnati uday ke room main hai
uday:unnati aap ki drees bohot aachi hai yehi phehna aap okay??
unnati:ok dadda.
uday:aaj hum dono dad ke sath party main jaaenge..
unnati: hmm or aapko pata haan shayad se party main humari friend bhi aarahi hai jiski hum hamesha baat karte hai q ke wo bhi yuvrani hai..
uday: ohh aacha jiski aap itni tareef karti hai usse toh milna hi padhega. Dekhe toh usmain aise kya baat hai jo humari Choti uski tariff karte nahi thakti..finally aakhir hum bhi dekha wo haan kon...
unnati:hmm zaroor dada. Aap usse miloge na toh woh aapko bhi pasand aaegi..
uday:let' c aaj toh dekhi lete hai unhe...

uday smirks...😉

----ends----

So guys please leave ur precious comments n likes..😊

do tell us hws it??😕😕 Good or Bad??? plz ignore the typos..😳

From

Bushra (bushra..manveer)

Nimmi (aksuji)

Sonia (princessSonia)

😳😳😳

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rockingal09

@rockingal09

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

Hello 😳
Prologue ws amazing... 👏
intrstng story 😉 update nxt part soon 😃

briraj:so manyata beta ap kuch kha q nai rahi hoon pari??? exactly uska naam hai kya?? manyata yaa pari?? 😲 🤣

vijay:hmm so taiyari hogi jay bhai???
manyata:kis cheez ki taiyari ?? haa me b wohi soch rahi hu... konsa cheese?? amul cheez ya or koi?? 🤣 🤣

unnati: hmm or aapko pata haan shayad se party main humari friend bhi aarahi hai jiski hum hamesha baat karte hai.. kahi yaha meri baat toh nahi ho rahi?? 😳 😳

uday: ohh aacha jiski aap itni tareef karti hai usse toh milna hi padhega. Dekhe toh usmain aise kya baat hai jo humari Choti uski tariff karte nahi thakti.. hayee ye choti bhi na.. sachme kuch jyadahi sochti hai mere bareme

aakhir hum bhi dekha wo haan kon... toh kab or kaha milna hai uday?? 🤣 🤣

i thnk ab mujhe chalna chahie.. 😆 😆
soni n nimmy plzz update soon 😳 waitng for 2nd chap
thanx for d pm 😃

Edited by rockingal09 - 12 years ago