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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: pia.raha

heyy veryy nice prologueee,,congraaatss to bushraa,nimmi and soniaaa!!!!!!! yaa do pm me,sonia i am in ur buddy list😊😊

we r glad u liked it..
n will pm u dear...
thnks 4 d comment...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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we will dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow nice starting
thanx fr pm n cntinue soon

we will di..
thnks 4 d comment...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sabakhan16

At first sorry for the late comment.😔😔
Coming to the chapter...chapter one was very good..and i believe that it is going to become a fantastic ss
and thnx for the pm..and plz add me in your pm list..again plz..😊😊
and again sorry

we will dear..
n dnt be sorry...
atleast u commented..
bdw thnks 4 d comment..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Sonu..when I said I'll update when you update I mean the other one not this SS...

bt u dint mention wch SS..'
so nw Update...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Udayveer singh: India's most eligible bachelor and a young bussines tycoon,uday is a very arrogant person,who is a playboy and changes girlfriends as frequently as clothes and has loadss of attitude.He only respects his dad and loves his sister unnati who is his weakness and his life.His one smiek makes girls go weak on their knees.His one speciality is he gets what he desires ,either by hook or by crook.21yrs old Yuvraj udayveer singh is yuvraj of jaigarh riyasat n currently doing MBA from HARVARD UNIVERSITY .



Manyata: A sweet ,cute ,fun-loving ,caring girl and an an amazing personality who respects her elders and loves her siblings.She is a very cute hard working girl and always ready to help others.She is an angel without any attitude even after being a yuvrani.19years old Yuvrani manyata singh is yuvrani of devgarh riyasat and is best friends with unnati.




Jay Nandini: Jay is rajkumari of devgarah riyasat and loves her sister a lot but she is the one with with lots of self consciousness and attitude being a rajkumari.

Vijay: Jay and Manyata's real brother. He loves both his sisters manyata n jay and is very sweet and caring brother.



Aryan: Manyata ,Jay and Vijay's cousin aryan is an orphan so lives with manyata and her family . Jay, manyata n vijay treat aryan as their elder brother. He is maharaja of madhavgarh riyasat. And especially pampers manyata being his favorite sister.



Riddhima: Aryan's wife. A nice sweet and adorable lady who is madly in love with her husband aryan and is maharani of madhavgarh. She equally adores manyata and her family.



DS: Jay ,aryan ,manyata n vijay's dadi .Queen of devgarah n madhavgarh ,she loves everyone. A true leader with high principles and and cares for her riyasat more than anything.

Komal: jay, manyata mother n vijay's aunt ,treats like her son, housemaker of this family and loves her family.She is maharani of devgarh riyasat.



Brijraj: A very short tempered person who loves his wife, mother and children dearly,lives by seeing the faces of his children and can doo anything for their happiness.Highly respects his mother Mrinalini devi and is maharaja of devgarh riyasat..



Giriraj: Father of uday and unnati,a very cunning man giriraj always looks for his profits and has married again after the death of his first wife and has a son from his second marriage.He is maharaja of jaigarh riyasat.



Unnati: A sweet ,caring and fun-loving sister of uday and daughter of giriraj, unnati is rajkumari of jaigarh riyasat and is best friends with manyata.Unnati is life of her brother uday .


Shruti: A clever ,cunning woman who is only interested in money.She is giriraj's second wife and hates hates uday and unnati and only her son.She is not maharani of any riyasat. Earlier a small businesswoman she is now wife of Giriraj.


Akash: Shruti n giriraj's son ,is obsessed with manyata and believes that he is in love with manyata '. although manyata treats him merely as a friend and is unaware of his feelings for her but he is actually crazy for her and can go to any extent to make her his''.


Meneka:A sweet pretty woman ,vijay's mom and manyata and jay's bua.meneka is a sweet n caring lady who loves all the kids equally n is happily married to Rishabh ,a reknowned businessman from a non rajwada background.
Rishabh:Vijay's father , son-in-law of devgarh riyasat n married to meneka,rishabh is a known businessman in the telecom sector.He is a man of strong principles yet very gentle.



sorry friends I know we r super late but we just got caught up in our studies n other things....so sincere apologies friends but we will definitely try to be on time with the chapters...hope u like the cs, chap 1 will folloe soon and will be posted by sonia very soon ...maybe today or tomorrow...plz try to encourage us ,we'll try to come up with the best that we can to keep u all hooked up to this ss...love u alll
Edited by aksuji - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Thanks everyone who liked d the Prologue..🤗

thnks for ur Support..😃😃


We will try our level best to stand up to ur Expectations...😳


Urs,

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Hey Manveerians,😃

hw r u all??

I knw we r very late..

but Sorry was busy in Studies..😭😭

plz do check the Writers Note in the next post...

So nw widout wasting any tym..

here's Chapter 1..



The golden sunrays are Making their way in the City of Dreams... yes its Mumbai... Where daily thousands of people come to achieve their dreams, to gain success, money, fame..etc.etc.. Its also the Heart of Bollywood n Teleindustry. The Economical importance of Mumbai is not hidden from anyone of us. Its known for its Businessmen's. Now here we are standing out a were Beautiful mansion well its more like a Palace.. And it belongs to none other than one of the most Powerful, Influential and Famous worldwide, The Devgarh Royals. As we move in. We can see that all the things here define Pure Royalty . The palace belongs to Rajmata Mrinalini Devi and her Son Maharaj Briraj. Rajmata Mrinalini devi is fondly known as ' Dadisaab' or 'DS' by her Grandchildren. She is a Regal Queen. The one whose Perfect example of Beauty + Brains. She being the widow of Late Maharaj Ranvijayendra Singh at a very young age handled The Vast Devgarh Riyaasat and her Two kids single handed . She is the one because of whom Devgarh is at the Top position today. Along with And her Elder Grand Daughter was her Shadow. She possessed the same Sparks, the same Elegance, the same Influence on people at this young age of 24years which her ' Dadisaab ' has.

So in all the Devgarh family were on the breakfast table. All the elders were present which included Dadisaab, Briraj, Komal and Menka. But the youngsters were nowhere to be seen.

Brijraj:- Aaj bache kahi dikh nahi rahe ahi??

Menka:- Haan kaha reh gaye yeh teeno???

DS :- Seema ji sare Bache kaha hai???

Seema ji :- Ji hokum woh Rajkumari Jaynandini tyaar ho rahi hai. Rajkumar Vijeyndra Morning Walk par gaye hai.

Komal:- Aur Rajkumari Manyata kaha hai??

Brijraj:- haan pari kaha hai???

Seema j:- Ji woh hume nahi pata. Humne unke Kamre mey Dekha tha par woh waha nahi thi.

Till then Vijay Bhai enters in his track suit and join the elders.

Vijay:- Yeh kya aaj humare Dono Bhai's nahi dikh rahe hai?? Kahi dono Outing par nahi gaye na humme chodke.

J enters saying :- Waah Vijay bhai.👏👏 Thanks for the idea. Hume zarur try karenge. Good Morning Ds. And she wishes the rest also.

Brijraj:- yeh pari abhi tak nahi aayi???

J:- Dad this nt fair aapko sirf Jiji ki padi hai jaise hum toh aapke kuch lagte hi nahi.😭

Manyata arrives till then and hears what J is speaking. And says,

Manyata:- Aare J aisa bilkul nahi hai. Bdw Good Morning everyone.

J:- kya jiji hum toh Dad ko ched rahe the.. aur aapne pura plan flop kardiya.. Oops Sorry(she realises she didn't had to say this)😳

Brijraj:- J beta. Aap hum ched rahi thi??? Thik hai phir humne jo Aapke liye gift laya hai woh hum return kardete hai.

J:- Gift nahi Dad. Hume toh sirf mazak kar rahe the. Please gift return maat kijiye. I really loved it.. Bdw Thanks dad.

Vijay:- aur mamusa aap humare liye kya gift leke aaye hai??

Brjraj:- Humne aapke liye suit laya hai. Aapke room mey rakhwa diya hai. Hope you will like it.

Vijay:- oohh thnk u Mamusa . You are the best. By the way , Manyata Bhai subah se aap kaha thi. Hume bhi toh zara bataiye???

Manyata:- uff vijay bahi hum vahi the jaha roz hote hai.

Ds:- Brijraj aap pari ke liye kuch nahi laye???

Menka :- Aisa possible hi nahi ki Dada J and Vijay ke liye kuch aaye aur Manyata ko bhul jaaye??

Komal:- bilkul Sahi kaha aapne Menka. So Maharaj bataiye na kya laya aap??

Briraj:- woh toh hum batane se rahe. Pari bdw aapke gift aapke wadrobe mey hai. Aaj sham ko party main aapko wohi pehana hai. Agar aapko pasand nahi aaya toh phir kuch aur pehen lijiye.

Manyata:- Daata, aisa kabhi hua ki aapki layi hui Gift hume pasand nahi aayi ho. Aapki choice best hai. Kyun hum sahi key rahe hai na J n Vijay bhai??

J:- haan dad jiji is ri8. Bdw party kitne baje hai???

Vijay:- haan mamusa bdw mamusa J bhai ko toh abhi time batadijiye fir jaake kahi woh time par tyaar ho payengi. I tell u kitna time leti hai yeh. Iski Shadi ke din bhi agar itna Time lengi toh shayad Dulha shadi chod kar bhag jaaega😆😆🤣.

Everyone laughs. J is embrassed + annoyed.😳😡

Manyata:- Bdw data yeh party kiske liye hai???

Brijraj:- Pari yeh party Maharaj Prithvi ji ne rakhi hai so aapk sabko jaana hai.

Manyata (confusedly)😕😕 :- Toh kya aap, maa, bua sa aur Ds nahi aarahe hai???

Komal:- Pari humme aur aapke Daata ko abhi kuch kaam hai aur Menka bua Maasaheb ke saath bahar ja rahi hai. So aap teeno aage jaaiye hum aur Maharaj aapko baadmein join karenge.

Manyata:- thik hai.

Ds, Menka , Brjiraj , Komal all leave. Only our Three Musketeers are remaining.

Vijay:- So J bhai hogayi sari tyaari???? And winks at her.😉

J :- Yes bhai, she winks back. So jiji humme aaj 7 baje nikalna hai.

Manyata :- Okay J.

Scene shifts to another Big mansion or u can call it a Hotel moreover. This another than one of the Famous hotel 'Uday Niwas' which is owned by Yuvraj Udayveer Singh of Jaigarh. He stays her with his Dad Maharaj Griraj and Younger Sister Unnati. As we enter we see the Private Elevator taking us to the toppest Floor of the Hotel. The whole floor is Uday's room.

Entering we see all the things which define Royalty with Sophistication. We see a Cute, Handsome, Hot Hunk sleeping on his King size bed. A girl enters the room goes near the bed and calls,

'" Dada wake up. Dada subah ho gayi. Ab toh uth jaayiye."

Boy:- " Choti bas aur thodi der. Paka hum thodi der mein uth jaayege." He speaks in a sleepy tone.

Yes till now u all must have guessed the Boy is none other than our Prince Charming Yuvraj Udayveer Singh...😳

Unnati :- Dada aap jaldi se uthiye warna hum aapse kabhi baat nahi karenge...

Uday :- (sleepy tone) Choti dekhiye plz hume thodi der aur sone dijiye hum pakka uthne ke baad

Aapki baat sunege.

Unnati :- nahi dada...(pouts)

Uday ;- dekhiye plz choti..(murmering in sleep...)🥱

Unnati :- Ohh Dad aap yaha kya kar rahe hai???

Uday suddenly gets up wid a jerk.. and looks around his room only to find a Laughing Unnati standing near his bed...🤣

And then it dawns him that.. it was Unnati's prank.

Uday ;- choti ... rukhiye aap hum ab aapko nahi chondenge...he says while running behind Unnati.😆

This goes on until a Servant comes and disturbs them.

Servant:- Rajkumari sa yeh rahi woh dress joh aapne mangvayi thi aaj sham ke kiye..

Unnati :- thik hai isse Humari room mei rakh dijiye.

Uday:- Aaj sham ko kya special hai??? Choti kahi tum Date par toh nahi jaa rahi ho na???😲😲

Kon hai woh bataeye hume...??? hum usse chodenge nahi. 😡😡Servants bows and walks out.

Unnati ;- OOffho dada hum kahi Date Vate par nahi jaa rahe hai. Aap bhul gaye ki aaj Shaam ko Maharaj Prithvi ke ghar party hai aur unhone hume invite kiya hai.. Dad koi kaam se bahar gaye hai

So woh directly wahi aane ki koshish karengi. Par hume aapke saath jaane ko kaha hai.

Uday :- shit mein bhul gaya tha. Thanks choti yaad dilane ke liye. Bdw aap konsi Dress pehen rahi hai??

Unnati:- hum woh joh Aap US se laye the na woh pehen rahe hai.

Uday :- good woh aapey aachi dikhegi... humme dekhna hai humari choice aap par kaisi lagti hai.

Unnati:- Aachi hi lagegi afterall apki choice hai. Bdw dada waha humari frnd bhi aa rahi hai. Jiske bare mein hum aapse baat karte hai na woh.

Uday:- oohh par woh kaise aa sakti hai??

Unnati :- dada woh bhi ek princess hai so she is also invited there. Aap ko unse milke bohot khushi hogi dekhna.

Uday :- choti woh toh milke pata chalega.. Aur bhi tak aisi koi ladki peyda nahi hue jo humme Khush kar sake...(and gives his Sexy smile)*drooling*

Unnati :- dada sachi. Aap usse dekhoge na toh dekhte hi reh jaaoge.. chalo ab hum chalte hai bye dada. Aur hum sach keh rahe hai.

Uday;- hum bhi dekhte hai itni kya Khaas baat hai aap mein jo humare Choti aapki tariff karte nahi thakti...

It will nice meeting u Miss...(gves his Signature smirk) ...😉


----- The End-----


So guys hws it??😕😕

i knw its very simple..

Sorry will update the next chapter as soon as possible..

till then leave ur precious comments..

n dnt forget to hit the Like Tab...😉


Urs,

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Sonia (princessSonia)..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Guys there's a sad news..
We (i n nimmi) r feeling very Sad to inform u all dat
Our first partner Bushra (bushra..manveer) has left IF..😭😭

So we (Nimmi n I) have decided to continue the SS..
if u all hve any objections regarding it..
plz mention it in ur comments..

Tell us we shuld continue this SS or Discontinue it...


P.S. n Sorry pms for the CS + Chapter 1 will be send latr..😳

P.S.S No bashing any member...

Urs,
Nimmi (aksuji)
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Sonia (princessSonia)...

Luv u all my dearies...
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
res .. 😉
n yeah plz continue ur SS...

1st chap ws awsome 😉 😳
so nxt part me manveers meeting hai .. yehhh


hmm so whn r u gonna update 2nd chap?

and it should b long update..

waitng for nxt part..
so update it soon and do pm me

babyee...



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