She's leaving...But will Mr. Akdoo stop her?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad's face was stricken with grief when Zoya said "i should go back"...the tears were at the surface...as soon as she turned his way he turned away and wiped his eyes. this was the moment that he realized that the girl who came into their lives and changed so much in his household was finally tlkin about leaving and he wasnt the reason for it. Zoya sat there crying, "Mr.Khan you know i cant believe after all this time ive spent here looking for my Abhu he is no longer around...there is no other reason for staying and im sure when i tell Zeenat she would want me come back as soon as possible...i should get everything in place, thank you Mr.Khan for everything.." Zoya got up and as soon as she was about to walk away she felt a hand touch hers, Asad grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him he hugged her tightly and he said "im really sorry ZO...Ms. Farooqui, about your abhu but please dont make n e hasty decisions in this condition"...Zoya moved out of his arms and said" its okay Mr.Khan, i can finally leave your house i know you would be pleased after i leave and things would go back to normal for you, again thank you for everything you have done for me"...with that said she turned slowly n she started to walk off but she stopped suddenly and turned to let him know that she has decided that staying any longer will only prolong the pain of the death of her Abhu so she has decided to leave in two days. She finished she turn n she left him standing there, Mr.Khan's face was struck with sadness, he thought of all the times he had hurt her, all the times he had yelled at her, yelled for her and the night they were high and he told her how much he dreamt of her and think of her and phagwa celebrations, Mr.Khan thought about every moment he spent with her and his faced tensed even more. Zoya sat on her bed feet folded beneat her and she just remembered the moment when Mr.Khan told her that this was her abhu's grave, Zoya eased up crying, and pleaded to God how could he do such a thing, what did she ever do to not deserve a family of her own...why me? why me Allah?...Asad stood outside her window n heard her words and for the first time he actually saw the feelings she hid from everyone the pain of being all alone her entire life. All zoya wanted was a family of her own and that was not possible. She fell asleep crying, but she turned and twisted she couldn't sleep well, she felt pain all over her body, Mr.Khan also could not sleep he only turned and twisted at the same time as Zoya did, Zoya screamed out ABBHUUU please nooo comeee backkk dont leave meee...!!!!! Asad heard her and rushed into her room Zoya faced was filled shock she couldn't move Najma an Phupi ran in shortly after...Phupi went n hugged her and kept asking her whats wrong but Zoya could not answer...Najma gave her some water and as she drank it she kept lookin at Asad, likewise he kept lookin at her, his face was emanating worry, he thought "did i do the right thing?...by telling her"...Zoya finally spoke n said that she is fine, she promised Phupi and Najma that she is okay and to go back to bed and she was sorry for waking them ... Phupi and Najma left but Asad remained a bit..he asked her " are you sure u are fine Ms. Farooqui???...she said "yes" and "please leave me alone thanks" Asad hesitated but he left...Zoya fell back asleep and got up early. She got up early and began gettin ready, she remebered how rude she was to Asad the night and decided to do something that would please him, as it was her last day she took out her sherwanie and got ready as quickly as she could. She tied her stole beautifully, as she walked out to have breakfast everyone stared at her Asad saw her and (imagined a dream where he walked up to her told her how beautiful she is even when wearing normal jeans and top)..then phupi interupted his dream when she asked him what he wanted to eat. Zoya cam and sat at the table, the food was shared around n every once in a while Mr.Khan would glance at Zoya an smile a little...during breakfast Phupi told Zoya that she looks very beautiful, but y the change? Zoya told her that since she found out that her abhu was no longer she wanted to respect Mr.Khan atleast once before she leaves. Phupi interrupted her and said "Zoya why are you speaking as if you are leaving tomoro?"...Zoya face tensed as she answered phupi's question "phupi i jus want to thank you for everything you and najma and Mr.Khan have done for me for the past few weeks yeah phupi you are right, i have booked my flight for tomoro, i am leaving india for good" Asad got up so quickly that he shook the table with anger...he walked out and headed out the door, Phupi got up but Zoya stopped her, She said she will go n talk to him. Mr.Khan was out on the bench Zoya came up n sat next to him "he said what childish thing she said inside how can u just leave just so?...She said " this was my mission Mr.Khan to find my abhu n now i have found out everything and i need to leave theres nothing keeping me here n you hav often said u want me gone so im fulfilling your wish..." Why did you wear a sherwanie? ...because i will be here only today n i want u to remeber that i did something that u like before i left... but Ms.Farooqui u are quite okay the way u are...(mitwa moment)... Mr. khan fought back every ounce of emotion in him and told her "well i will drop u off tomoro what time is your flight"?...Zoya said at "one p.m."...Asad again looked shocked his faced tensed, she tensed and the screen froze on both of them...

second time writing please leave me your comments :D :)


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