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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

awesome..Part..

loved it...

Great..
they broke the riddle..which Nupur gave..
awesome..
Finally bechari benji..ki vo entry legi..
Looking forward...



thnks alot dear

yes nupur is giving them ridles
han beji ko koi mil gaya
😆


thnku


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123

nice update

liked the flash back
so benji has diya
its getting interesting
nupur is awesome
continue soon thanks for the pm😊



thnks alot dear
glad u liked it
so ur feeling it intresting thts worth all the affords

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

mayur moment is so beautiful. plz dont let any bad happen to nupur. mayank has to save nupur and hostages. he is hero.



thnaks alot dear
wah wah han ji donot worry he is the Hero nothing will happen ..hope so

Originally posted by: THIS-IS-LIFE

i know i am too late 😆


but still congo for new ff 🥳



thanks alot dear
ap aya ty yeahi bht hai


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Posted: 12 years ago


thnku



thnku

Originally posted by: Dalia.

very interesting story
loving it



thnks alot dear
glad u liked




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa5

firstly hat of to u di

kya dimag paya hai apane its amazing writing
wow ha di main bhi sahamat hui pls benji ko is season me koi to do finally mil gayi usko "DIYA"
wow kya NUPUR ne dimag paya hai aur isme uske baby ka bhi hat hai as a say benji i agree with him di
aur dimag to mayank ka bhi tejj hai

thanks for lovely update di

love ur writing skill and like ur intelligent brain

thanks for pm me and remember me
and sorry for late

love u
deepa




thnku so much dear😃
lol.. benji ko mil gai na ab diya...
lol,...,han nupur us k baby dono mil ker khub band baja rahy hain hain

thnku for liking n enjoying
thnku
lov ya too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

loved the convo between benji, mayank and samrat lolzzz..


but the way nupur conveyd the msgd wow too good...

lovely update...



thnks dear
glad ur enjoying it


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi evryone

im really sorry for being so late... was caught with myself and with things... now hopefully i will be regular and CSI will get its regular speed of alternate day updating ...

rplyed to u all


Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter: 7


Benji: mjhy kuch batana hai tum ko

Diya: kya bolo…

Benji: I work in CSI…

Diya: WHAT… tum ny mjh se jhoot bola..she was hell surprised….

Benji: dekho mein ny tum se jhoot nhi bola sirf sach nhi bol paya..

Diya: benji…. This isn't good.. I mean tum mjhy se jhoot bhi bolty ho…

Benji: im sorry nah.. I didn't mean to..ab asa tu na bolo nah

Diya: tu ab batny k kyun khasht uthaya…

Benji: we need u at CSI… we need a big hacker …

Diya: for what…

Benji: ur in this or not…

Diya: fine… but is k yeah matlab nhi hai k mein ny tum ko maaf kerdiya..huh…

Benji: thik tu tum air force base per jao… waha special plane will bring u here

Diya: kya kyun.. waha kaun hoga aur asay kasay

Benji: daaar kyun rahi ho meray pass hi tu arhi hai.. kuch nhi hoga I have done arrangements ..

She smiled …

Diya: hmm bye..

Benji: cya…

He didn't knew samrat n mayank were beside him…and were grinning wide listening to his conversation.. they both look at each other and nodded in ab tu gaya yeah..

Samrat: uff… meray pass hi tu arhi hoo….

He entered holding his heart saying this dramatically

Mayank: daroo maat bhi tha samrat us k sath….

Samrat: meray pass tu arahi hoo… uff… mein mar jao

Mayank: teray pass hi arahi hai … yaar tu sath layata mein mana thori kiya tha.. bhabi hi tu hai …

Benji dropped his jaw having them there…

Benji: tum dono k sharm nhi ati …meri baatein sunto ho

Samrat: acha tujhy khabi aai jab tu hum dono ki personal life mein ata tha…

Mayank: baatein tu door ki baat hai tu tu apni ankhein seekhna (eye candy) bhi kahbi miss nhi kerta

Benji: mein kaha aya…jhotay

Samrat: jhoota …saaly ab tu dekh hum teray sath kya kerain gay

Mayank: chun chun ker badlay lain gay… anay tu day bhabi ko… samrat ghray parvish ki tayri kertay hain

Benji: khabardar tum logo ny asa kuch kiya kyun tallaq kero gay

Samrat: tu shadi tu ker pehly…

…………..

This was failing her health showoff … eerrr it was failing.. wht to do now… she needs to get to mayank.. but before she take any extreme measures she has to do sumthing first..

Nupur: mjhy washroom jana hai…

Thik hai… tum is k sath jao.. aur tum larki andar tak jao is k sath… agar koi chalaki kit u tum dono maray jao gay samjhy….

Priya: tum pls jaldi kerna warna yeah log mjhy bhi choray ga….

Nupur: tum itna darti kyun ho… kuch nhi keray gay yeah log relax

Priya: ajeeb ho tum … ek waqt itna panic kerti hoo aur ek waqt itna relax…. Mjhy tu ajeeb hi lagti ho tum

Nupur: kya kero mood swings u know…

Bhai sehab… mjhy thora time lag jay ga.. tu ap pls is k maat mardayna… ab mein is halat mein bhag ker yaha se tu nhi jasakti .. hai nah.. common sense…

Guard: thik jao… baatein kam kero

Nupur: bus ap chup kero aur chalo…

Priya: tum bulkily impossible hoa.. tum k daar nhi lagta in sab …

Nupur: nhi… I have seen more than this..

Priya: matlab..

Nupur has to cum this area of washroom… this particular area.. tht why she deliberately ask priya to take this way so tht they can cum to this side .. alittle away side of washroom.. one of terrorist man was with them so they have nothing to worry abt any thing tht can nupur do.. pls a pregnant woman they know cant do anything..

Nupur went inside…... She knew pretty well why she has came here…

Nupur: tum meri help kero gi… yeah humary liyan hai

Priya: kasi help…

Nupur: dekho yaha uper mein nhi char skati… yaha se dekho gi tu tum ko kam se kam 5 wings clearly nazar aay gay… aur tum is tarah mjhy yeah … goor se … correctly yeah baatao k waha kitna admi hain…

Nupur stood infront of one cabin of toilet and asked priya to sneak though the ventilators..and she droped her jaw at nupurs plan

Priya: kya… tumhara deemgh karab hogaya hai kya… aur tum dekh ker ker bhi kya lo gi…

Nupur: mein kya kero logi is baat per sawal maat kero… tum sirf help kero pls…

Priya: aur humain kisi ny dekh liya tu… aur ya camera hongy

Nupur: pagal hogi kya.. female washroom mein kahbi cameras hongy.. koi nhi dekhy ga… is k angle asy design kiya tha k waha se koi tum ko nhi dekh sakta….

Har agay k wing mein glass asay lagy hoay hain k next to next k view nazar ata hai… pls… till the outway yaha se pora dekhta hai

Priya: tum ko kasay pata yeah sab tum ho kaun

Nupur: aay khuda… by god tum tu meray pati se bhi zayda behass kerti ho.. dekho meri maa jo mein kah rahi hoon tum kero gi k nhi… is se hum sab yaha se bhar nikla sakty hain ab yeah maat pochna kasay…

Priya was hell scared, plus she was getting more scared of nupur now… wht she is .. wht she is doing she cant get a thing… she was making her more n more nervous

Priya: mhjy se nhi hoga

Nupur: huh.. fine mein khud hi charh jati hoon… jo hona hoga hojay mjhy… tum ko tu un sab logo ki fikar nhi

She move inside the toilet and was about to climb up…

Priya: rekho… mjhy samjh nhi ara k tum ker kya log

Nupur: priya…. Jo kah rahi hoon kero bus…. Pls.. trust me…

She nooded in yes and climb up… and her eyes widen to see it was indeed giving a view of farthest corner… it was strangely wide view…

Priya: per mjhy samjh nhi araha hai k kaun sa pehly hai kaun sa bad mein..

Nupur; its oky just tell me.. colour code hai waha… top per is view k tum mjhy us se batao oky ..

Priya: oky….

Nupur took all the information that priya was given it was scattered yet she took out a eyes pencil and drew the area on her hanki… she ask priya to cum down .. and she made it more clear way with her help

Nupur: asa dekh raah tha…

Priya: han kuch asa hi.. bus yaha mjhy samhj nhi aya koi aur tha k nhi.. as woh kisis se baat ker raha tha….

Nupur: yaha…. is jaga koi tha… koi bhi koi shadow kuch bhi

Priya: nhi waha koi bhi nhi hai…. Im sure

Nupur: great …thanku so much priya…

She took the hanki and flashed it …. And then came out and went to take her position… she again start to make her self appear in distress,.. she started to lie down that sat up than lie down for sumtime…. She has to appear she is panicking again… they have not let her talk to maaynk again…. She has to… it's the final chance she wants to avail…. Only few hrs and than they will get what they want…. And this inst down.. it will be a loss huge loss for them…a huge loss of mayank.. just one time and everything will be cleared to mayank… she has to find a way… and tht so quick..

……………..

Benji: diya agai hai mein us ko lya nay jaraha hoon

Samrat; sharaft se seedhy yahin ajana samjha

Mayank; han pata chala us ko Delhi ghomny chala gay….. tujhy bht time mily ga tension maat lay…

Benji: really humari date tu arrange keray ga mayank….

Mayank: nhi teri shadi hi ker do ga… tera bulkily behorosa nhi hai khandan k naam meti mein miladay ga…. Islyn tu kah rahy hain zayda dair us k sath tera akley rahna thik nhi hai ….

……………

Mayank: samrat tuny waha officer se baat ki any thing..

Samrat: they said there is nothing.. unhony communication break kerny ki khosih ki… but nhi horaha hai… har baar woh alag frequency use ker rahy hain aur itni lambi baat hi nhi ker rahy hain

Mayank: yaar itna high tech way of doing all this… we need motive… there is huge thing…

I want details of evry flight there was …confidential unplanned all… dobara check kertay hai…

Samrat: oky … yeah dekh… us waqt there were 4 international flights.. and 3 local that were going on board…

Obliviously many were going to so … passenger ki list yeah hai… jin hony ny tickets kiya thay…in mein se kitny waha they we donot know…

Mayank: in mein se koi asa passenger jo important ho… kisi k koi criminal record ho….

Samrat: nhi.. important han hain…. 3-4 business delegates hain… aur kuch foreign press people hain jo conference cover kerny arahy thay…

Mayank: yeah airport almost around subha 7-8 k mid capture hoa hai… as us se pehly taqreban 6: 45 per mumbai Delhi flight land ki… aur us k bad hi .. around 7: 30 woh private plan crash hua…. So lets assume around 7- 7: 30

Samrat: us se pehly ki almost 3 hrs pehly se security office k main frame was hacked or hum wohi dekh rahy thy jo woh dekha rahy thy

Mayank: han… aur mein kal raat gaya nhi security office to check evry detail… per un k kasay pata k asa hua hai… mean mein har raat jata hoon

Samrat: sum one was keeping eyes on u… aur agar tu chala bhi jata tu kya hota…

Mayank: ek bht bari faulty thi yaar us CCW footage mein…. Ek hi banda bar bar waha se jaraha hai… that made me know k security tu almost subha 4 bajy se hi fail hochuki thi… agar mein dekhta tu bht kuch pehly hi rook sakta tha… kahina kahin I was bit over confidence… dam

Samrat: tu har roz ek hi time per jata tha

Mayank: tun ny itna bewqauff samjha hai mjhy… no mein ghar se hi handle kerta tha…

Ek min ek min…..

Samrat: wht…

Mayank: do din se I have to go to bureau to handle this…. As mera laptop crash hogaya tha

Samrat: is k matlab yeah hai k is sab mein koi bht bara computer programmer bhi involved hai… tu akar by chance bureo chala bhi jata tu woh security original per shift ker dayty aur tujhy shak nhi hota….

Mayank: right… is waqt humari help sab se zayda diya ker sakti hai… wasy benji ny check kiya tha sab

Samrat: han kiya tha.. but he said he need a street hacker kinda person.. cause yeah pora setup thora strange hai woh study tu ker raha tha….

Mayank: yaar I m doubting one thing…

Samrat: donot tell me…

Mayank: yess… check kero previous records of our department… kaun asa officer hai jo in sab involve tha…. Plus khabi in my carrier mery sath kam ker chukka ho… in high tech security plan…. Do it Samrat.. us ko almost mera har move pata hai jasay woh meray sath k banda hoo. Close..

Samrat: thik hai mein check kerta hoon… tera matlab hai k koi yaha k banda hai..

Mayank: aur is baat se nupur per thread aur bhar jata hai… dam it… woh nupur ko pehcan jay ga.. zayda dair nhi lagy gi.. aur jis tarah woh yeah sab ker rahi hai she will become more prominent

Samrat: woh mission per hai mayank

Mayank: tu man sakta hai yeah baat….

Samrat: nhi.. per bar bar soch ker kuch help tu milti hi… us koo aur un sab ko bachny k liyan yeah important hai….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting updt fiza
waiting for the next updt..cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update..
Now SaYank got the chance to tease Benji.. Mauke ka pura faida uthya ga ye loog..
Hope Nupur ko koi problem nahi hogi..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the way nupur was trying to collect information
very nice
interesting part


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