ASYA SS PATH TO TRUE LOVE NOT TOO EASY ch 7 (28/4)

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Hi this is my first try . I will start real story only if I feel dat it is worth writing .
Please tell I should continue or not. As I have joined few days back and don't know much about it .



All kinds of comments are welcome . Please tell me how it is .


Chapter 2: page 2
Chapter 3:page 4

Chapter 4:page 7


chapter 5:page 10

Chapter 6 : page 14]
Chapter 7 :pg 20



Asad could not believe it . He was in love with Ms. Farooqi . Yes he had admitted it , that he was in love with her , inspite of d fact dat she was crazy , messy . He knew she had a golden heart , and that was enough for him . He could not wait any longer . He had to tell her . He had to admit his love in front of his life . His life . His Zoya...

He opened the door of her room . She was busy on d phone , so didn't felt his presence . He heard her say " yes dost , I will be meeting u at dargaah in half an hour . Bye..."
As she turned back she saw a smiling Akdu Ahmed Khan . Yaa she saw it correct , he was smiling . After all the mangalpur incident , an awkwardness had came in their relationship , or in their so called friendship relationship .
She smiled and said " hi "
He copied the same .
She asked " u here "
He said " yes Zoya , I wanted to talk to you "
When did that happen . Why did he call him Zoya . May be Mr. Khan had gone crazy , she thought . But she had no time for this . She had to hurry to meet her dost .She said " sure Mr. Khan . But I have to hurry up just now . I will get u back after some time "
" fine Zoya . I will wait ."
" Allah miya . What's wrong with him . So calm . He can't be Mr. Khan . May be he was kidnapped and he was his duplicate ." She thought and laughed at her stupid joke ...
She left .


Asad was pacing up and down his room . He was thinking , how was he gonna propose her . Then he had a superb idea . He had heard her that she was going to dargaah . He would follow her to dargaah . He would admit his pure love , at the purest place possible in the world , in front of his god . Yaa that was perfect . He would give Zoya a promise that he will love him forever in front of his god . He left for dargaah .
Little did he know that god was playing games . The path to true love is not so easy ...
chapter 5:page 10Chapter 6 : page 14chapter 7:page 20
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Posted: 12 years ago
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arz kia hai,

"ye ishq nahi asaan bs itna samjh lijiye
ek aag ka darya hai aur doob k jana hai"

do continue

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONTINUEEE!

Though i can guess the next 🤣

Good one i must say 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
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Hummm sound pretty interesting

Continue soon pm me plz
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Thanks to everybody who commented . There goes another part . Hope u all will enjoy . Please do comment


Asad was in the dargaah . He was searching for his princess .and then he saw her . He saw her standing near a tree . He moved towards her . And then he stopped . He was shocked. . He saw his abu , sorry he saw Janaab Rashid Khan there approaching to Zoya . Why was he there ? Zoya was new in Bhopal how could she know him . He heard them talking .
Zoya "hi dost , why are u upset "
"Nothing dost"
"Did u met the person whom u love"
"No dost , and neither I can ever get her "
U will surely get her back . I am there na to help u "
"No , nobody can help me . My son will never let me near her "
"Of ho dost I am there naa , . Tell should I trap ur son in my love , and then he will listen to me. " Zoya joked to make him smile .
Rashid gave a faded smile . He knew this kind hearted girl was trying to make him smile .
Rashid got an urgent call nad he had to leave . Zoyaalso left . But there was one person who couldn't move
Asad couldn't believe it . The love of his life had betrayed him .his world had finished . His heart had broken into pieces .he culn't believe .
But the picture was clear infront of his eyes. " rashid Khan was a pawn in Mr. Siddiqie hand . He didn't had much rights in that house . So he planned to win back Dilshad . And this girl was helping him ." He always knew that Rashid was greedy . But he couldn't believe that Zoya did this . She was a great actress he thought . So easily she had won everybodys heart . And even his heart .
But he couldn't break . He had to live for his ammi and sister .he. wouldn't break because of plans of Ms. Faaroqi . He hated her . He wiped his tears that were flowing from the corner of his eyes. . And thoght that she was not worth it .
He will teach her a lesson . He will make her regret what she has done .

He was driving harshly . He could not tell this to ammi and Najma , or they would break . But he wasn't going to spare that girl . he would not break because of Ms. Farooqi .
The flashes of her pretty face flashed in front of his eyes . And then he remembered how she had faked everything , and trapped him . His train of thought was stopped by a loud horn . There was a truck in front of him . In order to balance his car he took a turn and ended up hitting a tree . And his head was bleeding . But he couldn't feel the pain . There was so much pain in his heart that physical pain was nothing .


Zoya was alone at home . Phupi and Najma were out for a wedding . She was waiting for Mr. Khan . He had to talk something . There was a knock on the door . Finally Mr. Khan was there . She opened the door . She was shocked .

Mr. Khan's head was bleeding . She was worried for him . She couldn't see him in pain . But then she saw something else . She saw tears in his eyes . He was not a man to cry over an accident . But there was something else .there was pain , anger , hatred in his eyes .

She wanted to ask what had happened . But she first wanted to heel his wound . She cried out " Allah miya, how did this happen Mr. Khan ?" She raised her hand to touch his wound . But he held her hand tight .
He didn't saw in her eyes . She said "aalah miya..." . But was silenced by his glare . He held her hand and threw her far away from himself .
She hit the table and got a cut on her hand with a vase . He looked at blood flowing from her hand . He wanted to hold her and bandage her wound . But he couldn't do it .

He left for his room . Back in his room , he hit a glass vase tight . He took a piece and pressed it tight with his fingers . Blood was flowing from his hand. He deserved it he thought . He had hurt Zoya . Yes he hated her , but he also loved her . He still couldn't see her in pain . His heart stabbed when he saw her tears inspite of d fact that she had cheated him .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wooohhaa this is EPIC.

Perfect Perfect Perfect

I Hate Cause i LOVE HER

Perfect Asad!

Continue.

10/10 tonight
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my my!!!

i hate you, but i love you love you..
Asad miya is in a dilemma, well he has to be there, because he reacts first and understands later.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow that is totally different angle love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow dis ws outstanding. Cont soon cnt wait 2 read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing. Great job!!! Please pm me for the next part.

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