Originally posted by: latanzia
Oh man this is so good, i can't wait for the next part 👏😉
Update soon nah and pm me when you do.😉
THANX .
I WILL TRY TO UPDATE TODAY . SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE
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Originally posted by: latanzia
Oh man this is so good, i can't wait for the next part 👏😉
Update soon nah and pm me when you do.😉
Originally posted by: malini1996
what are u talking abt...this update was an awesome one...
whatever u write will seem fantastic to us...so u better continue soon
and plz plz plz add me to ur pm list...
Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
Superb update :-) loved how you expressed AsYa's feelings
Originally posted by: irock321
No it was written really well! Love it! Can't wait for next chapter!!
i know i am updating very late , but sorry ...😭
Please comment , not appreciation , then at least u all can criticise .
it will really help me to improve my work...
please , please please comment ...
everything is acceptable ...
i hope u all like it ...👍🏼
Asad realized what was he doing . He was holding the girl who betrayed him . He quickly withdrew himself and turned back to go away . He was stopped by Zoya's voice .
Zoya was shocked by his sudden withdrawal . She was fed up of his mood swings . She decided she would know today , that after all what was in Mr. Khan's mind .
"Wait , Mr. Khan "
Asad stopped . He didn't spoke anything .
Zoya walked upto him , and stood in front of him .
"What was that Mr. Khan ?"
"What are u talking about ?"
"Please don't act innocent . I am talking about what happened right now ."
Asad was quiet . And it irritated her more .
"Mr. Khan why did you do that ? First you were angry with me because of any Rashid Khan , and then your mood changed suddenly , and now u are going away "
The mere mention of that man's name brought back Asad in his furious mood .
"Why are you acting to be angry now Ms. Faarooqui ? That time you also didn't protested "
Zoya couldn't believe she heard that from Mr. Khan . How can he speak any such thing . Just because she didn't protested , doesn't makes her culprit .
"Mr. Khan I can't believe you said so . I didn't expected this from you ."
"I also didn't expected what u did , Ms. Faarooqui ."
"Mr. Khan I am seriously not getting , what are u saying . I know that from first day u don't like me , and u want that I should leave . But it doesn't mean u can do anything ."
"oh yes Ms. Faarooqui I can do anything . You said right I don't like u and wish that u leave the house . But my wish is not fulfilled . "
Tears were flowing from her eyes .
"I will fulfill your wish Mr. Khan . I am leaving and that to just now."
He didn't wanted that she should leave . And where would she go . Asad thought .
But then his mind reminded him she had many dost , she could manage .
"Oh thankyou Ms. Faarooqui . I am really glad that finally u are leaving ."
Zoya turned back and she started packing her bags . Asad left the room .
Zoya thought while packing " I know he never liked me . But he hated me so much , I had never thought this. And like dumbs I had started feeling for him . I had to go from this house one day . But it would end like this I had never thought ."
Asad was pacing up and down in the hall . He was growing restless . He thought " Finally she is leaving . it is nice for our family . But what if she is really innocent . No she is not innocent I saw her with that man . yes she is not innocent "
Zoya came out in the hall with her luggage . She went to Mr. Khan . She wanted to end everything at a good note . She stretched out her hand and said "Nice meeting you Mr. Khan "
Asad didn't moved his hand . He replied "Nice to see you leaving Ms. Faarooqui ."
Zoya silently moved away with tears in her eyes . She picked up her luggage and just was going to leave , when Asad ot a phone call .
Asad attended the phone call . Phone dropped down from Asad's hand . Dilshad had met with an accident on her way to Nuri's house. She had hurt her both the hands and leg . There was not any serious injury . But the word accident was enough to make Asad tremble .
Zoya and Asad both quickly drove in Asad's car , to bring Dilshad home .They first took her to hospital , got her bandaged , and then brought her home .
Nazma also returned from college . Asad , Zoya and Nazma , all three swarmed around Dilshad . Asad saw how much Zoya was crying , and how she was making efforts to make her ammi comfortable .
"No these tears cannot be lie . There surely is some misunderstanding . I will talk to Zoya clearly over this matter . There is some misunderstanding ." thought Asad .
Zoya stood up , and she went to the hall . She took her luggage and went to her room . She was not going anywhere . She couldn't leave phupi in such a condition . She started unpacking .
Asad left , as he had to bring medicines for Dilshad .
There was someone who was hiding outside Asad's house , and waiting for Asad to leave .
It was Rashid . Nuri had informed her about Dilshad's accident . He was dying to meet Dilshad , and he knew Asad would never allow him . As soon as he saw that Asad left , he hurriedly moved inside the house . Nazma opened the door . Without a word she just showed him the way to Dilshad's room . She went back to her room , and also informed Zoya not to disturb ammi , as abbu had came to meet her .
Dilshad was sleeping . As soon as Rashid entered the room , she woke up , as she could feel his presence . She tried to get up , but couldn't . Rashid hurried to help her . He sat close to her .
"How are u now ?"
"I am fine . You shouldn't have come here ."
"I couldn't have been alive without seeing you ."
Rashid and Dilshad , both were crying .
"Please don't cry Rashid . I am fine . you are crying as if I have dea….."
She was cut in between by Rashid "Never speak like that , I cant live without you "
"Then why did u left me Rashid . I know u can't leave me for money . Why did u left me Rashid "
"Please Dilshad , I can't tell u this . Please don't ask this . "
Dilshad was quiet .
Rashid gave her a file . " Take this . This is property I have bought for u , and Asad and Nazma ."
"No Rashid I can't take this . "
"Please , don't snatch away at least this right from me."
"Ok Rashid . I accept it . Please keep it in almirah , because if Asad saw it , he would be angry ."
While Rashid was keeping the file in almirah , something fell down . It was a doll , and a recording started to play .
" Rashid miya will never come to know , tkat it was I who killed Zara ………… now he has to leave Dilshad and come to us ……….. this gudiya factory raaz will always remain a raaz……….."
"What is this all Rashid ?"
"A saazish against me . Raziya had killed anyone in gudiya factory . She ordered me to set gudiya factory on fire. I did as she said . And she clicked pictures and manipulated the evidences . She has enough evidences against me , and she blackmailed me to leave you all , or she would give evidences to police . "
"Rashid this gudiya is a big proof . you can free youself ."
"No , Dilshad . Raziya has many evidences against me . And if she comes to know that u have a proof against her , then she would try to harm you . But please keep it safely . May be I ever need it ."
"But Rashid…….."
"I should leave now ……….. Take care "
As Rashid was going out of the main gate , Asad saw him………
Precap :
Zoya leaves house . Asad comes to know truth , and he decides to win back Zoya but not in Romeo or Devdas style , but in his own style, Asad Ahmed Khan style because he knew only
MR . AKDOO AHMED KHAN CAN WIN BACK MS. NEW YORK
please comment . if u all have any suggestion , then u are free to give it . I will be taking it seriously ...
i don't know about this part , but from chapter 5 or may be 6 , story is seriously gonna improve and i hope u all will love it ...👏
Originally posted by: Manpreet23
Precap <3 next part fast :P
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