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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandananagesh




Nice update di

but feeling bad 4 Khushi


Hmm I'm feeling bad for her too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting story...eagerly waiting 4 d next update...keep writing😊
Edited by pari97 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I find it amazing..
keep writing😃👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
wow nice update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so khushi is working under the name of kumkum, poor girl, feel so sorry for her. arnav is going to end up in the same function and will meet khushi, hope he falls for her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ ruby red. Fate does not make things fall into place so early ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh God what is Khushi doing?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u for all the lovely comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2



@ The Cinnamon Lodge



"Good Evening Mr. Raina" greeted Arnav

"Hello Mr. Raizada, I'm so glad to see you, thank you for honoring my invitation" replied Mr. Raina



"You're gonna have fun today Mr. Raizada coz we have the entertainment Queen of the town" informed Mr. Raina



Arnav smirked and was not surprised at this gesture of Mr. Raina because he was well known in the industry to be havingone woman a night.



The party starts off @ the Cinnamon Lodge



Ladies and Gentleman, let me thank you all for coming for my party, please feel comfortable and enjoy ' Announced Mr. Raina



And to entertain you, let me welcome on stage the QUEEN OF ENTERTAINMENT ' KUM KUM



The curtains of the stage open to Welcome Kum kum



BUT



The stage looked empty and only a spot light was visible''''''.



*****Back in the dressing room*****



Kush, I have some horrible news to give you" Kritika informed

"Ranvi has gotten into a horrible clash with a group of guys from College and all of them were taken into custody, including Ranvi" said Kritika

Kushi was extremely worried at the news "Kritika, now what is the situ, is there anything we could do to get him out?" Kushi asked

"Kush, we will have to bail him off and we will have to pay as well" Kritika spoke

"Kritu, does babu and didi know anything about this" Kushi asked with concern

"Don't worry Kush, everything is under control, luckily I was heading towards college for some of my work and I saw this" Kritika informed

"Kritu, how much do we have to pay?" Kushi asked

"One of my friends is heading to Lucknow, you will have to meet him now and give him the money Kush, he will give it to me tomorrow and we will bail off Ranvi" Kritika advised



Kushi was confused as to what she has to do, on one side she could not let down her client and on the other hand, Ranvi was more precious to her than anything else



Kushi walked up and down the room and finally "hmm I can convince Raina, after all he is in my hands na" saying this Kushi left to meet Kritika's friend



*****End*****



~~Back to the Cinnamon Lodge~~



Arnav and Aman looked at each other. Arnav was enjoying the sight



"okay guys, this was the surprise of the function tonight, let me call out The Queen of Entertainment Kum Kum" Mr. Raina spoke



A skinny looking girl walked onto the stage and started off with the performance



Aye, so she is The Queen hah, Arnav thought, what a name, wow, this man can go to extremes to have a woman or rather any kind of woman, but, is this the woman he said he found so gorgeous looking?? Whatever!! ' Arnav thought



##Flashback##



"Mr. Raizada, you know, you live such a boring life, single man, c'mon, look at me, I simply have fun every night, one woman for a night, you should try it" Mr. Raina spoke



"Excuse me" Arnav replied



"But you know, in the recent, I have got hold of a woman, Kum Kum, she is so damn gorgeous, I just couldn't let go of her, her attitude, her looks, her demands'.man she is such a QUEEN OF ENTERTAINMENT" Raina spoke. "You will get to see her soon Arnav" informed Raina



##Flashback over##



BACK AT THE RAIZADA OFFICE



"ha ha ha Aman, did you see his face when his Queen of Entertainment did not turn up??" Arnav laughed out

"yes sir, he looked like as if a child had just got beaten up by his mother" Aman replied

"such a skinny looking woman and he calls her gorgeous?? He is hooked up on such a woman, man Aman, I can imagine his taste now, HORRIBLE" Arnav spoke "okay Aman, I guess you should get going now, do you want me to drop you at home??"

"Oh no Sir, I will walk home, it's not that far na" Aman replied

"Oh just shut up Aman, I will drive you home, I'm not gonna get late just by dropping you" Arnav replied.


Arnav dropped Aman at his home and as he turned his BMW towards the main road, he saw a figure of a woman walking alone at night

"these women are crazy, must be adorned with weird red lipstick and standing till someone comes and have them at night, CRAZY" Arnav thought



He drove past the figure and he looked from his rear view mirror, he was surprised at the sight, "such a beautiful woman, alone at night, she does not even look like a woman who sells herself for money, she looks more like a person in misery, lost, finding her way, 'stop the car dammit Arnav, how could u leave a woman alone at this hour' Arnav's conscious spoke.

Arnav reversed his bmw, the lady looked a bit worried about a vehicle stopping beside her.'

'Excuse me Lady, but i don't think it's safe for you to be walking alone at this time, it's very late at night you see' Arnav gestured.
The lady ignored Arnav an continued to walk

'What the!!' Arnav said 'Yo Lady, can't you hear me?' Arnav spoke sternly.The woman looked at Arnav with sorrow in her eyes.
'I'm sorry Lady, i did not mean ti scare you, but it's not safe for you to walk alone at night, do you stay some where close by?' Arnav asked with concern 'i can drop you home if you don't mind'

The woman looked at Arnav and nodded in acceptance 'Great, c'mon get in, direct me to your house and i will drop you' Arnav replied.

The woman was dressed in a light blue salwar, wrapped in a shawl to keep her warm. Arnav stared at the woman, he looked into her eyes and saw innocence, the lady looked at Arnav and he looked away.'

'Please put on the seat belt lady, don't want the cops to charge me yeah' Arnav spoke.

'I'm Arnav singh raizada, the owner of the raizada group of companies, hope you have heard the name' Arnav questioned

The woman pointed towards the left, 'oh u want me to turn left?' Arnav asked

The woman nodded. 'Drop me off here" the woman finally spoke

rnav was amazed at how soft spoken the lady was.

'Thank you for the lift' the woman spoke.

Arnav was surprised at the language...

'You're welcome Lady, could you atleast tell me your name' Arnav asked'

"Kum, kushi, I'm kushi' finally the woman replied.

'Nice meeting you kushi,this is my card, you better get going. Good night' Arnav greeted and headed home.

'Kushi looked on as the vehicle drove past her, "there are such nice men as well in this world who still respect a woman" kushi thought and sighed.

"Good night" she spoke to herself and headed home.

OKAY, NOW HOW DID YOU'LL LIKE THE UPDATE?

DO LET ME KNOW YOUR CONCERNS.



Edited by lareefab - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Loved d update
Thanx for pm
yay am first 🥳
Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 12 years ago

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