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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
brilliant concept, sounds interesting.
please continue and pm me.
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#22
😊...emotional ...really looking forward ...pls give long update...
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Thank u for the love and comments
@sandy:read on sweetie u will know why
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Loved d update
Thanx for pm 😊
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#25
amazing prologue👏
poor khushi
waiting for d nxt part😳
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#26
awesome start.
really felt sorry for kushi, but it is life.
real struggle starts from here.


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looking forward for the story
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Thank u all for the love,new here goes part 1
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PART 1

@ The Raizada Mansion (where Arnav Singh Raizada Lives)



~~MorningPoojastarts at theMandirof the Raizada Mansion~~



Chote come out soon, Anjali bitiya has already started thepooja' Nani tapped on the door of Arnav Singh Raizada



A tall, handsome guy with silken hair walked out of the room, fully dressed in a whiteKurta.



Coming Nani, the base voice replied



~~Prayers were on~~



Anjali had finished with her prayers and turned around to see all the members of Raizada mansion were at theMandir.



Chote, as called by Anjali stood, with his hands onnamaskarand eyes closed. Anjali came upto Arnav and touched his head, 'chote' anjali called out.

Arnav opened his eyes and touched his sister's feet.

'Di for the past 20 years after ma died u were the first person i yearn to c every morning, i love u Di' Arnav said

Anjali and Arnav hugged each other and the rest of the family members looked on.

'Achcha? One fine day chote, it will not be me, but ur wife who u will yearn to look out for, haina nani' Anjali giggled along with nani and mami

'Whatever Di, but no one can take ur place' Arnav replied sternly.

'Theek hain baba" Anjali replied.

Anjali and rest of the family members left the mandir and Arnav stayed on... he prayed to god to never ever separate his Di from him ever.

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'Kumkum' shouted out a man, 'u need to get ready soon, we have a function to attend'

Ya I'm coming, replied kumkum.Kumkum looked on at herself, 'forgive me devi mayya, i have no other option' kushi looked down.

**flashback**

'Kushi we have to pay up the debts of all the wedding arrangements, i can't go to work leaving babu alone, aur ranvi's college fee has to be paid as well, how are we going to find so much money kushi' payal spoke looking extremely sad and helpless...
Didi y do u always worry, hum haina i will find job, agar my education will not go waste, u c we will very soon pay all debts, cure babu aur once ranvi is done then sab theek hoga didi, ab smile like a good girl and bring me something to eat na, I'm very hungry, kushi pushed her sister towards the kitchen with a wide smile.

After payal left towards the kitchen, kushi's smile faded away and she ran towards her room and broke down into tears...

'y devi mayya has sorrow befolded us, please help us to come through all this' she cried out.

Didi, Didi, didn't i tell u, all our sorrows will vanish and everything will be okay, kushi spoke out in excitement

Kushi, tell me clearly na, i don't understand anything. Payal replied

Didi, i got a job in the city of Delhi, i have been asked to come to work from tomorrow, isn't that great.. kushi shouted out.
Payal looked on sadly...

Didi, smile na, I'm getting ready to go to work, i leave the entire house in ur hands Di, i will visit u on and off and i will send u all the money to pay up the debts and once it's over i will come back home Di. Saying this kushi hugged her sister and ran towards her room.

Babu, please shower ur blessings on me,kushi said.
She hugged payal and warned ranvi to be good and to look after everyone at home and she stepped out of gupta mansion.

@kritika's house:

Kush I'm so worried for u, do u think u will be able to get a job there? Kritika questioned kushi

Kritu, if there is a will, there's a way. Please don't tell anyone about me going to look for a job, but tell them that i left to Delhi for a job, kushi told her best friend and hugged her tight.

Look after ur self kush, it's a strange city, be careful...Both the friends hugged each other and cried in each others arms...

**end of flashback**

Fate has made me Kumkum instead of kushi devi mayya, kushi spoke out.. 'please mujhe raksha karna'Saying this kushi sat down to do the final touch up if make up for the night...

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Arnav stepped out of his BMW and headed towards his cabin. He was greeted by all his staff as he walked towards his cabin. He entered his cabin, worshipped his parents picture and sat down to start off with the days work.

'Aman, can u come to my cabin, get hp to prepare coffee and send it to my cabin' Arnav ordered his PA.

So aman what's the programme for today? Arnav asked.

man read out the schedule and finally ended saying, 'sir, Mr. Raina is having a function at the cinnamon lounge tonight and ur invited for it sir

'What time aman? Arnav asked.

Sir it will start off with cocktails at 7 followed by dinner,aman replied


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Part 1 updated,
Uff how do url like it?
Fill in ur comments and thoughts,ur ideas, improvements...

Love u all

Enjoy

La.


prologue


Introduction
Edited by lareefab - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Good start!

Now Khushi is working as prostitute to pay the debts in the name of Kumkum..
Waiting for the next part
Edited by sandhyait - 12 years ago

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