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👏congrats for new thread dear,,,,,,,,new beginning with maneet...love it...
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Congrats
Waitg for d update 😊
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congrats for new thread👍🏼
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Congooo for new threaddd

n as i said earlier u r taking story in a smooth way :) plz maintain this way only dont jump and go jet fast speed. If you go fast the flavor of the story which u maintained il lost. So keep this in ur mind i am loving d way you are taking the story

Loved Maan Suhana convo u really handled both conv awesome and in a matured way

I loved Suhana concern and Maans replies

Waiting for the update Nehaaa zaldi dedo



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, thread 4, thank you guys. It's you all who supported me and motivated me to write the story. I hadn't thought that I will get such an amazing response on the concept' but you all proved me wrong and bestowed me with a more overwhelming response.

I wasn't going to give a suhana geet's chat now but seeing more demand for it, and since holy is on calendar, here is a gift from my side.

HAPPY HOLI GUYS

PART 22

Geet and suhana were in kitchen, cooking the night meal while men were in hall watching IPL and discussing which team will defeat whom. As any team would hit a six, they will scowl in happiness giving each other a hi-five as if they were the one who were in the ground.

Geet was standing in the kitchen door, with a smile on her face as suhana was making dough for chapattis. Suhana saw her sister who was standing so silently instead of starting her BAK-BAk, her favorite hobby and she came to stand beside her after completing her task.

She saw that soft smile that formed on her lips seeing maan laughing holding his stomach at some silly joke of ishaan. She nudged her shoulder breaking her sister's reverie as she looked at her with raised eyebrows.

Geet came out of her thought and looked at suhana who was giving her a "caught-you" look. Geet just shook her head at her sister and said, you know what dii, I am seeing him so free after a long time or to be precise first time. May be in last one and half month, a smile would be a rare glimpse only, or sometimes when he would laugh, it would also be restricted, but today he is so free, do you saw that light tear that touched his lashed due to his hard laughing, and she again turned toward him and pictured a KODAK moment then as that soft smile remained intact on her lips.

Suhana saw the seriousness in her words and saw the relaxed man who was really so relaxed sitting with her husband who was free too. She had herself never seen ishaan laughing like that except few friend gatherings. At home or other place he would just be an introvert only, may be two introverts are the best friends, she thought and then again turned to her sister.

Geet, I talked to maan ji in evening, she said as she saw the smile on her lips going away. Geet turned to her sister now and waited for her to continue. Suhana took a deep breath and said geet he is a nice man, even nice word is less, he is a great man. Pata hai geet, men are said to be emotionally strong, they had a great ability to hide her feelings in their hard shell but you know he is one such men who being hard is soft too. He had tried his best to conceal himself but I did saw the emotions and feelings he bears inside him for you.

Geet, suhana said as she held her sister's hand, before coming here, I thaught that it's you whose life is destroyed, it's you who is cheated and is in pain, but now I think it's maan who had actually faced a betrayal and pain. teri to shayad life ban gyi hai is shadi ke baad, all your dreams, your wishes which never were fulfilled are your reality now, you are in biggest school in whole country, you are wearing what you like, you are doing what you wish, no restriction, no forcing is there, but what about him geet, his perfect life had actually crashed the very moment he married you. He is sacrificing his happiness, his life for your single smile geet. He is lying to his own parents for your well future. I am scared geet now for his obsession, his possessive that he holds for you.

Geet's eyes filled with tears, as she heard her sister's broken voice. She glanced at maan who was still busy in cricket, his squeal echoing in whole flat. She looked back at her sister, and moved inside the kitchen, looking away from her. suhana followed her and turned her, making her look at her and saw her tears. She wiped them and said, geet soch agar tujhe sun kar ye haal hai, soch geet wo to is sachai ke saath ji rha hai. Tu mane ya na mane, but somewhere you know too, ki every hour, every second which he is living, he is living with you in him.

Geet looked at suhana, as again tears down her face, aapko kya lagta hai dii, I don't know what is going in his mind. Geet aap to aaj aye ho aur aap unhe samaj gye, I am seeing him since last 50 days, won't I know him atleast this much dii. Mai chahe aap jitni samajhdar nhi but mai itni bevkuf bhi nhi. Geet said as she took onions and cucumber to cut salad.

Dii when I stayed with him khurana mansion, I used to blame him for all this, because somewhere my mind used to say that if he hadn't agreed to the marriage, nothing would have happened. But then when he took me here, I actually realized that I should be thankful that he accepted that marriage otherwise may be chachi would have married me to someone else and then my life would have been worst. May be I would have been in someone's house doing cleaning and washing his clothes, with no life of mine. He is my protector, my well-wisher, my guardian dii.

Suhana heard geet 's words and said, geet you are not understanding my words. I am saying about this relation geet. He believes in this marriage, and he wants it to be successful. Pata hai when I said that you don't believe in this marriage, I expected him to say that he will make you believe in this relation, but he just said, he will let you go; he won't do anything which is opposite to your wishes.

Suhana cupped geet's cheek and said, He loves you a lot geet, he really loves you a lot, and I will advise you geet don't let him go away of you, he is a gem and you won't find anyone even a percent like him in this world again geet.

Geet pushed away suhana's hand and turned around and said, aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho dii. Geet, isme galat kya hai, one day you have to be with someone then why not him??? Atleast we will be assured that your husband will never live your side; suhana said tried being understanding.

Geet held suhana's hand and said, dii aap bhi whi baat kar rhe ho jo chachi ne ki. Meri khushi, meri jindagi, par what about him dii, ye to socho ki unki khushi, unki jindagi ka kya, do you think I will be able to prove myself as a good wife, will I be able to fulfill his wishes, nhi dii I won't be able to.

But geet, why are you thinking so negatively, kyu ek baar nhi sochti is bare me, I know you are just 16 and I am not asking to accept the relation yet, I know you need time to grow up to be able to be perfect for him but still usko ek chance to de sakti ho na.

Dii maine bahut socha and that's why am saying this, lets talk practically here, abhi I need to complete my basic studies, will I be able to give him the time he needs. And what about our future, he will expect me to give him kids, he will expect me to be like a wife who would be fulfilling all his needs, and I won't be ready till next may be say 4-5 years, so you want him to wait more for me. He is 25 now; you want him to wait for another 4-5 years for his marital life. And what about his parents, they are old, won't they want to see their grand children before, what will he answer them.

And by chance, we let go of this kid's topic now, but then what about the physical bond between a husband and wife. I don't feel that ticklish, that blush about which you used to talk when your marriage fixed with jiju, I never felt that attraction even, pata when he touches me, my skin repulses.

And emotionally, dii aj tak whenever anyone of us tries to speak his heart, it always leads to fights and misunderstandings. Yha tak ki I don't have all those qualities which a perfect wife should have, neither I am understanding, nor I am soft spoken. Dii aap hum dono ko ten minutes bhi ek room me band karo to am sure we will come out fighting only, so how will this relation work. Dii, if I give this relationship a chance, it will harm him more than he already had, ho sakta hai in future we get closer to each other, but then making him sacrifice his present for something which isn't certain, will that be right dii.

He had already lost so much; I won't let him lose more, said geet as she turned to look suhana with a determination. Geet, he loves you and he will wait for you, he himself said that, suhana again tried.

But geet just shook her head, no dii pyaar itni jaldi kaise ho sakta hai, may be he feel pity for me, maybe he feel sympathy for my broken life but love is too early, geet argued.

Beta love doesn't follow any rules, it can happen with anyone anytime anywhere and he do loves you, I had seen that love in his eyes, suhana said cupping geet's face, her words enriched with experience and maturity.

But geet's brain just refused those words; she just didn't want to think on those lines. She again said, agar dii, aap jaisa keh rhe ho agar waisa hi hai to isn't it my responsibility to let his love get reciprocated by someone who really deserves it instead of me who us so unworthy, geet said her voice filled with determination.

Geet if he won't let go of you, how will you make him love someone else, suhana said in challenging tone, while geet just smiled and said, dii wo abhi mere bare me hi raat din sochte rehte hai, meri jindagi ke bare me to kisi aur ko chance hi nhi dete. But I know once his mind will be free from my issues, his heart will open up for someone who would be perfect for him.

Suhana looked at geet and then thought of maan, both are stubborn, maan geet ke liye apni jindagi gawa sakta hai aur geet uski jindagi ke liye apni khushiya gawa sakti hai. What type of people are they, she thought, and how can such love exist in this mean world. She looked at geet who was again standing on kitchen door admiring her hubby's laugh, she says she doesn't feel anything, phir bhi uski khushi me khush ho rhi hai. Kya koi kisi begane ki khushi me khush hua hai bhala, suhana thought as she started setting table.

Geet then came inside and started making hot chapattis. Geet they are busy watching match, none of them will eat before it will end and match will take least an hour more, said suhana as she came inside after setting table. Nah dii, maan is hungry, he will surely shout for dinner with in next five minutes, said geet as she placed roti on stove.

How come you know, suhana asked puzzled, I was outside but he didn't asked me. Dii look at him, he must be caressing his forehead and he usually does that when he is really hungry, said geet as she served in his plate and went to hall while suhana stood in hall watching maan exactly pressing his forehead.

He was about to shout for dinner when he saw plate in front of his. He looked above at the holder and got shocked, but then just shook his head as he started munching his meal, while suhana brought another plate for ishaan.

I know it was confusing, but it was what I felt about geet's emotions. She had been a mature girl most of the times so how can she be foolish now. I hope I did justice to your expectations.

Do tell me about your views guys as it will be the stepping stone for next part.

Please like and comment.

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well am lil confused after reading this...

suhaana asking geet to accept the marriage was a lil shock to me... i didnt expected it... though i definitely agree with suhaana that maan is the person who is suffering in this relation, and he is the apt person for geet and also he is loving her too... but still am not able to accept her suggession...

geet being just 16, suhaana should know that she is not ready for this marriage... neither legally or physically... and at this tender age she should focus on her studies... i had expected suhaana to tell geet about maans sacrifices and his true and loving nature... and also to advice her to respect him and to bring some understanding nature towards him...

i love geets reply here... her wish to see him happy is commendable... and i agree with her that maan has the right to live his life not just to live for her...( but i will definitely not agree with their seperation by u , neha😡)

i felt really sad when geet told she feel repulsive with maans touch...😭

geet is slowly adjusting with maan... she is able to read him without words too...i hope this continues... as there is a long way to go now...


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely updt...I don't feel dat geet is sacrificing d relation for maan coz she doesn't feel for him n his mere touch repulse her...m nt saying geet is bad...her thinking abt maan's happiness is just a factor as her dislike for him is...just my pov...bt if v think from her perspective she is right...how can she love a man 10 yrs elder...he can be a protector, guardian nt a lover...gal of her age would dream of a Prince Charming n all...not dis kind of marriage n husband...

I totally agree v both der pov's...suhana wants her to give it a try...n geet wants to set him free...everyone is right in der own place...

M happy to c a relaxed maan n ishaan...ESP maan...it was required...wish dey stay for some more time...

Geet has started understanding him n his needs bt v should not think abt it as start of love or some feelings...hope my comment makes sense...
Edited by maanmeet1 - 12 years ago
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Amazing update ..its good to knew geet pov she is mature and her decision is not wrong right now ..how can she bound some one for future , that tp which she is not sure right now .its truely be more selfish on her part , if she do this .Somewhere geet have some feelings for maan i cannt say its love but admiration atleast
loved the update

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part..
both maan n geet are thinking about others happiness selflessly..
suhaana tried her best to knock some sense in geet..
loved the part
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wow lovely emotional update..te way mens watching cricket and te way girls cooking was lovely.. te way geet admiring my maan and saying abt him, and thinking tat he should get all happiness in his life was so lovely.. te way suhana talking abt my maan ki love to geet and te way baby geet saying she know abt it but wants to move away from my maan for his happiness was so emotional, but buddhu geet didt know were my maan ki happiness lies..te way geet saying my maan should get a girl in his life who look after all his need and give love for him, but next second she is worrying for his hungry and saying how will he react for it , oh god not only suhana me too wondering wat kind of love is tis...both thinking abt others happiness and wants to sacrifice they life, .. geet oe day will cum, were u cant see other girls will drool on my maan , leave abt his remarraige.. im waiting for tat day.. i love te update so much..now my maaneet in one room ?
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