vm ff: Hum Bewafa Hargis Na The Pt 15 PG 140 (24/10)

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

hello guyss i am here with new ff. i know you guyss might be thinking that i didn't complete my first ff and now i am starting other one. but what can i do i was sitting in my room after studying when an idea clicked into my mind so i thought to give it a chance so here we go

PROLOGUE

love is language spoken by spoken by everyone but understood by only one heart.In true love their is no mountain to climb. No river too wide to cross.And most of all in true love their is no end

Everyone says that love hurts but that's not true.Lonliness hurts.Rejection hurts. Losing someone hurts.Everyone confuse these things with love but reality love is the only thingin the world that covers up all the pain and makes us feel wonderfull again.

So this is the story about two star crossed lovers virat and manvi. They loved each other beyond limits.actually their was no limit of their love.But suddenly what happend between them that they don't want to see each other's face now. It says na it takes a minute to have crush on someone,an hour to like someone,and a day to love someone but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. so who sacrifice their love for whom? To know that keep in touch with Hum Bewafa Hargis Na The"

How's that guyss? I hope you liked my concept? Should i continue or not? Please tell me without any hasitation. I'll be wait for your suggestions and feedback.
NOTE
hello all again i am here for eating your heads</font>

actually i want to clerify one thing that this ff is originally my work so please don't copy my work

and one more thing if my work match with someone a little bit then it will be just a coincidence so don't take it on heart. as i have no habbit to stealing someone's work.

TAKE CARE😊

link to second thread : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95019647

index of my work

index

pt 1@page 11 79075391

pt 2@page 2281398089

pt 3@ page 38 82709202

pt 4@page 44 84603697

Chapter 5 pg 50 85213124

chapter 6 pg 60 86450937

chapter 7 pg 71 86839460

part 8 page 78 88112873

part 9 page 94 89119167

part 10 page 106 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91991403

part 11 pg 113 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93535778

part 12 pg 117 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93708780

part 13 page 131 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3499220/vm-ff-hum-bewafa-hargis-na-the-pt-15-pg-140-24-10

part 14 page https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3499220&TPN=136 94153072

part 15 page 140

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94589397

Edited by virmanfan013 - 11 years ago

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kalu-devi

@kalu-devi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey i am the first i am new here its fabolous the concept is very good plzzxz continue and pm me

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preethi

@preethi18

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey nice yar...n thanks for pm😊

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey shivi awesome concept!!!!😃 waiting fr da first chapter eagerly... jaldi update kar... aur tera pehela wala ff bhi likhna hai tujhe...😉 plzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm..😊

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AMNA

@AmnaZaYa

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

interesting...

cont soon and thanks for the pm dear😊

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

sorry i didnt like it thats cuz i luved it omg the prologue is sooo fantastic plz plz update it quickly i so wanna read this luv the concept of it akhir huwa kya that they dnt wanna see each others face nw luved the part where u rote it takes a lifetime to forget someone - well even if they hate each other nw at least they havnt forgotten each other init ab prologue itnaaa acha hai tho actual FF kaisa hoga ... soch kar hi itni excitement hai 😊 plz continue it quickly

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

very interesting prologue
What mite it be that cn seperate them

Update soon
And i love the title
There is a sng with the same title

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Shivi 🤗.. Wow new ff!!! Jaldi first chapter update kar please 😳.. Loved the prologue 😃.. Very interesting.. Virman loved each other but now they dont want to see each other at all 😲.. Aisa kiya hua?? Eagerly waiting for the first chapter.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

hey shivali meri bacchi... good luck...!!!!! 😃

naina maiya is soo proud of you...!!!!! aashirwaad hai mera... 😉

i loved the prologue and the name... u know why...??? bcos i like this song very much... infact its one of my favourites... this song is really apt for anyone who has ever been betrayed in love or has ever experienced pangs of separation and loneliness...

by the way the prologue is well written... 👏 👏

so go on...!!!!! i am waiting for the first chapter...!!!!! 😊