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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww will miss u...try to comeback soon
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Originally posted by: yaminnthida

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Super duper Awesome update shivi...👏👏👏...mazaa aa gayaa...i really enjoyed reading it yaar......ACP virat toh hot hai hii...hayye😳😳...riyaa kaa fidaa honaa toh jaaizz hai😉...manvi n tani convo was so cute😳...manvi ke samne banglow main kon hai??...i think i can guess it...virat right...😛...ab toh aur milnaa hogaa😉 ...virman milgaaye finally......yayy...,,,,,,,par yeh kya...virat hatred toward manvi😭😭,,,,,,,aakir raaz kya hai manvi kaa...i m sure us main koi bohot bari reason zaroor hogii...🤔...the way u wrote the both virman pov were amazing shivi👍🏼,,,,,loved the whole update to the core...every bit of it is really really good❤️❤️❤️...looking forward for the next update..will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm

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and yeah ACP virat pe fida hona toh jayaj hai😉
and don't worry sare raj time pe khulenge you just wait and watch😊
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awesome update after a long time...👏 do continue soon...:)
waiting fr ur update eagerly...

yeah i'll try to update soon😊
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Awesome one...
Liked it..
Continue soon...
Nd add me in pm list... If u used to pms...

thanks
and yeah i'll definitely pm you😊
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awesome update👏i like both pov's

get soon to the fb
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thank u so much and i'll update soon😊
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i am extremely sorry for the late update guyss.. i know you were waiting for this from long time but i apologize to all of you for being irregular
so if you are still intrested then go read it😊
Part 4

Mumbai night 8:30 o'clock
virat's pov
i aws thinking about the encounter which had taken place few hours back with manvi at shopping mall and getting restless. don't know why but i was beyond happy to saw her after long two years which felt like eternity. she changed a lot. she was not like before which she used to be..her eyes which could i read easily reflected so much pain..why i am feeling like that she had suffered a lot and their was a deep pain hidden in her heart? why i am feeling like that she still loves me like before..why i am feeling that she wanted to say me something but their is something which is stopping her. i want to hate her but deep doen inside my heart i still have a soft corner for her. ohh god plz help me
thinking about her he again lost in his past where he met her for the first time in totally filmy style
flashback
3 years ago
virat was going to the head office of cheif minister for some important work in his bmw. it was morning time and the weather of outside was also very pleasant and roads were empty, so he was driving very fast. he was on his way when he passed out from a car. he found something wrong with that car so he immediately applied breaks of his car and drove back toward that car. he scrolled down the glass of his car and saw that a girl was struggling to opened the door of her car but it was not working and she was crying due to fear. virat immediately came out from his car and rushed toward her to help her "hey are you ok miss" virat asked her concerned and knocked on the door. in reply she said something but he couldn't able to hear may be b'coz of locked door. virat tried to opened the door with full force but nothing was working b'coz doors were jammed. and due to suffocation she was breathing heavily..she got tired with all her struggling and rested her head on staring wheel half conciously and breathing heavily. virat got more worried. he tapped on the door again "hey are u ok" he asked again but she was not in her sense and don't know why but virat's heart was paining to saw a stranger girl in danger. so without thinking for a second he broke the glass of the door. the girl's eyes gotten wide in shock and she got unconcious. virat carefully took her out from her car and made her sat in his car. she looked at her face very closely and the first word came out from his mouth was"wow" he lost in her beauty and angelic face..he saw so much beautiful girls in his life but never like her. she was beautifull as well as cute and innocent too. virat came back to his dreamland and tapped on her cheek "hey are u ok plz open your eyes hello" but she was not responding..virat ran his fingers in his hairs in tension. he rushed toward her car and took out her purse and saw her licence and name "manvi choudahry nice name" he thought and saw her address. then he took her to her home
choudhary mansion
it had been one hour and manvi was still unconcious. her parents madan and pinky choudhary sat beside both her sides holding her hand getting worried about their daughter..virat who was stood near the window watching all care and concern of her parents and was smiling at them. and staring at the beauty infront of his eyes. for the first time his heart skipped a beat to saw a girl..although many girls drool over him to seek his attention but he never care but this girl had something that virat vadhera heart throab of milliaon girls wasn't taking his eyes off from her..virat came out from his thoughts when he saw manvi regaining concious. she slowly opened her eyes and looked at her parents's worried faces.
manvi: "mom dad" she called them and they looked at her "mannu beta tu theek toh hai na" madan asked her lovingly and creased her hairs "puttar yeh sab akhir hua kaise" pinky asked equally worried for her daughter"mom actually" her words trailed off when she looked at virat and she gave him an angry glare. her reaction confused him that why is she looking at him angerily "you how dare you: manvi yeeled at him. she got up from the bed and marched toward a confused virat "ji" virat asked confused "ji ke bache how dare you to broke my baby into pieces. i'll kill you,you idiot" saying this she hold his neck in her tinny hands and sequeezed it tightly.virat's eyes gotten wide in shock to see her reaction. he was struggling to save his life from this hungry tigress and thinking that which baby she was talking about and when he broke her baby.
"mannu what are you doing beta he saved you and you are behaving like this plz leave him" madan was trying to pacify his angry daughter..finally virrat came out from her grip with jerk. virat hold his neck and coughed slightly." beta ji are u ok" pinky asked him concerned and worried for her daughter's act."yeah aunty don't worry i am fine" and he coughed again. pinky gave him a glass of water and virat gulped water still in daze and looking toward manvi whom madan was holding and manvi was still shooting him angry glares." mannu what were you doing. have you lost it? he saved you and you were trying to kill him instead of thanking him. say soory to him now" madan scold manvi for her action "sorry my foot dad. how dare he to broke my baby into pieces" madan rolled his eyes at his daughter's sattement and this made virat again confused "so what beta we can repair it again" madan said consoling her "but dad" she protested him "one minute plz can you plz tell me which baby are you talking about" virat asked confused looking at manvi. madan and pinki looked at each other and burst into laughter..manvi looked angerily at them and her hands were on her hips. when her parents saw her angry glares they stopped laughing and again tried to supress their laughter. virat who was totally confused with their behaviour spoke "did i tell any joke" he asked them "no beta actually the baby about which she talking about is none ather than her ababy car nano which glasses you broke to save her" madan blurted out and virat looked at her amused and he too burst into laughter. madan and pinky joined him in laughter."dad mom you too joined himarghhh" she stomped her foot and went out from her room angerily. but one thing he definately came to know that manvi was very pampered and only child of her parents
flashback end
virat laughed and chukled when he remeber those moments. he never knew that he will fall in love with her at the very first sight.. but he also never knew that this crazy girl will betray him like this. her love was just nothing for him it was mere an illusion

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Ganguly house
9:30 pm
manvi didn't came out from her room the time she came back home after the meeting with virat..she was sitting in the corner of her room hugging her knees and crying her herat out."Why god why me. apne mere sath hi aisa kyun kiya..why you made me so helpless that ..that i can't live with my husband..uske samne hote huye bhi main uske paas kyun nahi ja sakti..why are you punishing me for that sin which i never committed why ? i can't tolerate it any more now i want him back in my life but he will never forgive me. he hates me so much that he even don't want see my face? me and virat were so happy with our life in a little world of us. but why he came into our life and made our life hell" she talked to herself and again burst into never ending tears..as she was crying and lost in her own world she didn't know that tani was passing from her room and saw her crying"manvi" she called her worriedly but manvi didn't listen her voice and she kept crying continously burying her head in her knees. tani rushed toward her and sat beside her."manvi manvi what happened whay are u crying plz tell me" she asked her worriedly holding her by shoulders. manvi shrugged her hands hrashly but tani kept trying "manvi plz tell me what happened" tani was worried for her . although they were not blood sisters but for their relation was more than sisters..tani was taken aback to saw her in this condition. she never saw her like this..she only saw her like this two years ago when tani found her on the railway track unconcious. but she never cried after that incident like this but today she witnessed the most dreadful scene infront of her once again which shattered her to the core. tears slipped from tani's eyes to see manvi like that.
"manvi plz tell me what's wrong with you plz" tani was pleading her to say her problem but manvi kept crying like hell which made tani more worried."manvi for god sake say something"tani pleaded "leave me alone" manvi spoke while crying "but manvi" tani protested "i said leave me alone didn't you heard that" manvi yelled at her for the first time and tani got scared with her high pitched tone..and due to lot of crying manvi started coughing and started breathing heavily" manvi kya huya tumhe" she saw her breathing and she immediately understand what was happening with her "ma baba plz jaldi ayiye" tani called out her parents and her parents came running in manvi's room and saw her struggling for breath "manvi tani what happened to her" her ma asked her panicking "i don't know ma i was passing from her and saw her crying and due to crying her breaths got abnormal" tani told her in one breath "i think that's b'coz of her asthma problem. where is her medicines" lavoni ma asked her and tani went to her drawer to find her medicines "lavoni chalo isko bed pe lita dete hai" baba said and they both made her stand and laid her on bed..lavoni ma wiped sweat from her forhead and creased her hairs." don't worry manvi beta you will be fina don't worry she kept consoling her. tani came back with her medicines. lavoni ma put tab into her mouth and made her drink some water . after few minutes manvi's breath got normal and now she was breathing without any difficulty. everyone took a deep breath of releif. maa patted her forhead lovingly and manvi driffted to sleep..the three of them left the room so that she could sleep without any disturbance

11:00 pm at Ganguly house

manvi woke up suddenly from her sleep as she was feeling restless in her sleep..she wiped the sweat beads from her forhead..today's incident was playing in her head again and again. she was trying very hard to forget those moments but nothing seemed to work. she got up from the bed and went toward window and stood their. she lookedup at the sky and saw bright moon and shining stars with teary eyes. here in virat's house he was also looking at the stars and moon through the balcony window

virat: whay manvi why did you do this to me. akhir kya kami reh gayi thi mere payar mein that you played with my heart,my love and my soul why

manvi: i am sorry virat i didn't do it purposely. i love you so much but i ahve no other option.trust me i have no intention to hurt you

virat: i loved you like hell..i was mad after you..maine tumhe har woh khushi di jisko tum deserve karti thi.tumhari har choti moti chahat ko pura kiya..ankhe band karke main tum pe bharosa karta tha. par tune mujhe hi nahi mere uss yakin ko bhi tod diya akhir kya kami reh gayi thi mere payar mein

manvi: tumhare payar mein koi kami nahi thi virat. but may be our destiny or fate wasn't with us..i know you cared about me a lot aur meri har choti se leke badi zid puri ki aur pagalo ki tarah mujhse payar kiya. par shayad main tumhare payar ke layak nahi thi..plz forgive me virat plz forgive me

virat: i'll never forgive you never. you don't deserve my love..
they both were talking with the stars but didn't know that actually they were talking with each other answering each other's question and the screen devided into two parts

why love caused so much for the loved ones..why it is happen to those who are deeply in love but one days fate seprate them. why god do not show some mercy on those poor souls "may be god never fall in love"

Quotes: "Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs, Being purged, a fire sparkling in lovers' eyes, Being vexed, a sea nourished with lovers' tears. What is it else? A madness most discreet, A choking gall and a preserving sweet."

uff done. so how's that did you like this one also if yes then plz like it and comment on it. i know this part is very short sorry for that. actually i wrote it in one go and my back is hurting now. but i wanted to update it as i promised someone that i'll update today. pm's will be send by tomorrow and only those peoples who liked the last part. i know i am being selfish but sorry no excuse

love

shivali🤗

Edited by virmanfan013 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shvi sooo sorry ya i know am very late par bhool gayi thi yaar really sorry ..
awesome update shivi just soo awesome and very welll written tooo ...how do you write everything soo perfectly ya...its wowww👏👏
virat still loves her sooo much bt the hate is overpowering him...
i so wanna know why they got separated///
the flashback was amazing hilarious funny and love at first sight for virat hayeee


Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Brilliant update ShiviLoved each n every bit of it❤️❤️❤️
the flashback part was superb👏👏👏their first meeting...wow...😃😃😃really loved it❤️❤️...so virat toh pehli nazar main latoo ho gayya😳😳baby😆waah kya naam hai car kaa...😆mannu is really one piece...❤️
poor manvi...i can't see her in tat condition:((mannu
the way both were answeting through stars...it was heart touching...both are suffering:((aakir kya hai raaz manvi kaa
awesomely written shivi👍🏼really wanaa read part soon...plz jaldi update karoo if possible...will be eagerly waiting... pm ke liyee hugs🤗🤗❤️
Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago
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mind blowing update my heart literally goes out to virman wenever u update any of ur storys thanx sooo much for updating this- hav been waiting for ages n im glad u finally did update even if it was a short one cnt wait to kno the secret behind manvi's fake betrayal n really hope they meet again 😉
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Wohooo Finally you updated!! Chal FB pe tujhe pakana kuch kaam to aaya !! 😆
Update was rocking!! Superb Shivi bon! 👏 I absolutely loved the flash back part ❤️.. I was laughing so hard while reading it.. Manvi is a rockstar yaar 😎.. Poor Virat!! 😆 Band baja diya uska.. She almost choked him.. Virat ko laga heroine ko bachaya ab heroine uspe latto ho jayegi par yaha to Mannu ne puri ki puri palti mar di 😆.. He shouldn't have hurt her 'baby' 🤣.. "
ji ke bache how dare you to broke my baby into pieces. i'll kill you,you idiot " " he was struggling to save his life from this hungry tigress and thinking that which baby she was talking about and when he broke her baby. " Loved these lines 😆😆.. So it was a love at first sight for Virat 😳.. Want to know more about their love story!! 😃 But the present track made me almost cry 😔.. OMG poor Mannu 😭.. Can't see her in so much pain.. Tani doesn't know anything about her past?? And she found her beside a railway track in unconscious condition! 😲 Really eager to know about their past now.. What is the reason behind their separation?? " why he came into our life and made our life hell " - Who is this 'he' who made their life hell?? Too many questions.. Jiske answers tere paas hai 😉.. So please continue soon 😛😛.. Loved the update ❤️❤️.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗 ❤️
Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago

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