vm ff: Hum Bewafa Hargis Na The Pt 15 PG 140 (24/10)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: amnavirman
interesting...
cont soon and thanks for the pm dear😊

thanks amna and i'll cont soon😊

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Huma0301
sorry i didnt like it thats cuz i luved it omg the prologue is sooo fantastic plz plz update it quickly i so wanna read this luv the concept of it akhir huwa kya that they dnt wanna see each others face nw luved the part where u rote it takes a lifetime to forget someone - well even if they hate each other nw at least they havnt forgotten each other init ab prologue itnaaa acha hai tho actual FF kaisa hoga ... soch kar hi itni excitement hai 😊 plz continue it quickly

hey huma thank u so much😊

you know when i read the first line of your comment i was like😲

but then you siad that you like it tab meri sans mein sans ayi😳😳

and what happened between them it's a secret that will be reveal later

so keep in touch

and i'll cont it soon😊

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: mohinistar
Hmmm really looking forward to read it. Love the prologue, do continue it and do pm me :D

thanks mohini and i'll cont it soon and pm you😊

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman
very interesting prologue
What mite it be that cn seperate them

Update soon
And i love the title
There is a sng with the same title

thanks kulsum i am glad that you like it😊

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Shivi 🤗.. Wow new ff!!! yes meera bon it's nwe ff Jaldi first chapter update kar please 😳.don't worry i'll update it soon😳. Loved the prologue 😃.thanks😃😃. Very interesting.. Virman loved each other but now they dont want to see each other at all 😲.. Aisa kiya hua??hmm it's a secret shhh and it will be reveal later Eagerly waiting for the first chapter.. Thank you for the pm..in dosti no thank u and no sorry😡 Take care 🤗you also take care🤗

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Shivi 🤗.. Wow new ff!!! yes meera bon it's nwe ff Jaldi first chapter update kar please 😳.don't worry i'll update it soon😳. Loved the prologue 😃.thanks😃😃. Very interesting.. Virman loved each other but now they dont want to see each other at all 😲.. Aisa kiya hua??hmm it's a secret shhh and it will be reveal later Eagerly waiting for the first chapter.. Thank you for the pm..in dosti no thank u and no sorry😡 Take care 🤗you also take care🤗

read in green

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: naina927
hey shivali meri bacchi... good luck...!!!!! 😃haye thank u naina mayia😃
naina maiya is soo proud of you...!!!!! aashirwaad hai mera... 😉i need your ashirwaad too much😉
i loved the prologue and the name.thanks.. u know why...no i don't know??? bcos i like this song very much... infact its one of my favourites... even it's my favourite too so hi5 this song is really apt for anyone who has ever been betrayed in love or has ever experienced pangs of separation and loneliness...hmm that's so sad😭
by the way the prologue is well written... 👏 👏thanks mayia😊
so go on...!!!!! i am waiting for the first chapter...!!!!! 😊okey i'll update soon