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hello darls i am again here with late update😳 sorry again
so lets start reading the next part😊

part 3



Two monthes have been passed away. virat was enjoying his work in mumbai crime branch as an ACP. but he never felt proud of his tag. all the gang members and virat had become good friends. but when it comes to the work they become professionals and serious as their duty is most important for then than anything. they have solve so many cases which virat reopened like drug cases, rape cases,kidnapping etc. Anurag had become very close to virat and they shared a brotherly bond with each other. anurag also told him about tani and his relationship. on the other hand riya had a little crush on virat and only panchi knows about that. although virat tried to occupied his mind in work but still the memories of past still haunted him day and night. like his love had become a punishment for him and it left a big scars on his heart. it says na that wounds which we got in love never heel easily and they always remain freash in our mind and heart. and their is no medicine to heel those wounds.

1:40 pm mumbai crime branch

panchi came in cabin sipping her coffee and saw Riya looking lost in her own thoughts. she smirked and tapped on her shoulder and riya came back to the real world.
Riya: hey panchi when did you come (gving attention toward her)
panchi:then you were lost in your own world (she said taking seat beside her) waise kiske khayalo mein khoyi hui thi (with raising her left eyebrow)
riya: virat (she said dreamily and panchi rooled her eyes at this) you know what (she said placing her fist under her chin) he was looking very hot today. no actually he always looks hot and dashing. i am toh totally flat over him yaar (panchi shooked her head in negative at her statement)
panchi: tu nahi sudhregi haina
riya: no b'coz i am falling for him (she said fluttering her eyes like sixty's heroine)
panchi: riya stop dreaming about him yaar. he is an ACP and so many girls drool over him and what if he have already a girlfriend then (she tried to knock some sense into her tinny brain)
riya: it's not possible. i know he is single
panchi: and how can be you so sure
riya: b'coz if he has any girlfriend then he should give some time to her but no he always occupy in his work and work till late night so i am 100% sure he is still single. it means i have chance (she said winking at her confidently and panchi rolled her eyes)
panchi: but (before she could say something the peon knocked on the door) come in (the peon came inside
peon: ma'am virat sir calling you both in the conferrence room for an urgent meeting
panchi: ok we are coming in one minute
peon: ok ma'am (and he left)
riya: let's go it's time to work (and they both headed toward the conferrence room. virat,danish,anurag and yuvraaj already seated there. they took their seat and virat spoke)
virat:guyss i have got news from our secret agencies that a big drug deal is going to happen in five star hotel so we will have to catch them red handed
anurag: but virat we have to make a solid plan to catch them
virat: i have already made a plan (he said confidently)
riya: and what it is? (she asked raising her eyebrow)
virat: ok listen to me carefully)
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and virat describe all his plan to them and everyone was looking impressed
yuvraj: that's great unhe shaq bhi nahi hoga aur woh hamare kabze mein honge
danish: exactly but we will have to be very careful for this. unhe kano kaan bhanak bhi nahi padni chahiya
panchi: so when we are going to working on our plan
virat: now so get ready for some action . let's go guyss
(and they left to make their plan successful.)
i am sorry guyss i will not describe the plan scene)

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7:30 pm Ganguly Niwas

Manvi came back from the work and she was outside of her house. she was going to enter in her house when her eyes fell on the white bunglow which was opposite from their house. it was closed from many times but now it seems like someone had come to stay here. a big BMW parked outside of the bunglow. manvi thought "koi rahiszada hi hoga jisne yeh bunglow khreeda hoga" she shruuged all her thoughts and went inside her house. and saw baba sitting on the couch and as usual listening bengali folk songs and ma in the kitchen preparing dinner. manvi placed her hand bag on the sofa and went to baba
manvi: baba (hugged him from behind. baba looked her and patted her cheek lovingly)
baba: aa gayi meri princess. how was your day?
manvi: (breaking the hug) day was good baba but very tiring asusual (she said sitting on the sofa and rested her back on the sofa. she closed her eyes and took a deep breath. baba who was looking at her asked)
baba: why don't you take a short break from your work? you will feel freash after break (he said concerning about her)
manvi: no baba i can't take any break. and waise bhi ghar pe bethe bethe main kya karungi. anyways i am going in kitchen to helping maa (she went in kitchen and baba shooked his head in negative. manvi entered in kitchen and saw her ma preparing dinner. she looked at manvi and smiled at her)
ma: aa gaya mera bacha no go in your room get freash. then i'll serve dinner
manvi: no ma i am not feeling hungry i just came here to help you (she said pouring some water into glass and drank it)
ma: bhookh nahi hai par kyu (she said getting worried)
manvi: arrey maa just relax bas aise hi bhukh nahi and my head is paining so i just want to sleep
ma:your head is paining b'coz you never eat properly. now go freashen up and come down for dinner (she scold her and manvi made a face)
manvi: ok fine (she turned to go but stopped immediately in her track) umm ma woh samne wale bunglow mein koi rehne aya hai kya?
ma: arrey haan he just come today for living here. you know he very rich guy. he is very smart and young.. i went to meet him and the way he talked with me it seems like he is very humble and polite by nature.
manvi: intresting she thought and went to her room

9:30 pm Ganguly Niwas

manvi was in her room after taking dinner and just going to sleep when tani barged into her room and plopped on the bed. manvi rolled her eyes at her behaviour
manvi: what??? don't you feel sleepy? go to your room and let me sleep plz.
tani: no first you will have to promise me (she said getting up from the bed)
manvi: promise for what (she said raising her eyebrows)
tani: that you will have to take leave for half day from your tommorrow and you are coming with me for shopping (getting excieted)
manvi: shopping (tani nodded) with you (again she nodded smiling) haha keep dreaming baby i am not going anywhere with you understood (she said straightly and tani made a face)
tani: plz (making a cute puppy face but manvi ignored her)
manvi: no means no (tani came toward her side and hugged her from back)
tani: plz mere liye (she said sweetly and manvi melted with her sweet gesture. she smiled and shooked her head)
manvi: oye nautanki band kar. and i am coming with you (tani beamed in happiness)
tani: really
manvi: yes
tani: thank u sooo much. gd 9t (she gave her a kiss on her cheek and ran toward her room)
manvi: she is such a crazy girl (and she laid on her bed and covered herself with duvet to get some sleep)

11:30 pm

manvi was sleeping peacefully in her bed suddenly a cool wind come through the window and it disturb her sleep. she opened her eyes and having strange feeling. her heart was beating in a rythem and she was feeling same way which she felt 3 years ago for the first time. but now she was afraid to feel it again. she placed her hand on her heart and closed her yes
manvi: what is happening to me? why i am feeling so weird from the morning? why my heart is beating very fast as if it is giving me some sign that something is going to happen in my life. oh god plz help me. i have no energy left in me to face those problems again (she looked at the window of her room and get up from the bed to close it. she was just going to close the window when she saw a BMW came and parked in front of the bunglow which was opposite of their house. her heart skipped a beat when the person came out from the BMW. don't know but she was feeling like that she knows that person but how. she felt something familiar in him. she could not able to see the person clearly b'coz there was maximum 5 meter distance between them. she was staring at the unknown figure till it had gone invisible from her sight. she shruuged all her thoughts and closed the window and laid on bed again to get some sleep)

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next day 2:30 pm shopping mall mumbai

manvi and tani came to shopping mall. and it had been two hours since they entered in shopping mall. tani was doing lots off shopping and manvi got pissed off from her but tani was not stopping
manvi: tani yaar ab bas bhi karo na plz (she pleaded from her)
tani: manvi just few more minutes plz (making a cute puupy face and manvi rolled her eyes at her smartness)
manvi: stop it yaar how many things will you purchase in one day? are you planning to purchase the whole mall in a day (she said getting annoyed)
tani: i wish i could (she said dreamily and manvi again rolled her eyes)
manvi: tani plzzz
tani: ok just ten minutes i am going to boys section actually i want to buy something for anurag (she winked at manvi and ran toward boys section befor manvi could say anything)
manvi: ab main kya karu? (she took a deep breath) hmm maa ke liye kuch dekh leti hoon (and she started looking something for her mother. she was looking here and there and taking her steps back without looking back when she bumped into someone and she turned angerily to burst on the person)
manvi: ankhe hai ya bu (she stopped midway in her sentence when she looked at the person)

(guys for the first time i tried to give the pov from manvi's side i hope you will like that)

Manvi's pov

i was just taking my steps back without looking back when i bumped into someone. i got irritated and ready to burst on the person who bumped into me. i turned back and spoke angerily " ankhe hai ya bu" but i stopped in the midway of my sentence when i saw HIM standing in front of me right now after long 2 years. he was the same didn't change a bit. same passion same charm.i smiled widely looking at him and i want to just lost in his arms, i lost in him so much that i couldn't realize the place and just staring at him. staring at my husband my virat. and the next moment which i did was least expected. i flunged myself in his arm and hugged him tightly and he hugged me back too "i missed you so much virat, i missed you so much" i said hugging him more tightly and living that moment. i broke the hug and started shawering kisses all over his face lovingly " i love you virat" and again i hugged him tightly to not let him go this time. suddenly i heard the sound of dj and came back from my dreamland and i realized that i was dreaming about hugging him.it was just my illusion.and i actually i imagined that i hugged him. i lowerd my gaze and not ready to look into his eyes. i again looked into his eyes and what i say just hatered toward me. i never thought that that one day destiny will again brought us infront of each other like this way. i was fighting back with my tears which were ready to come out from my eyes at any moment. i just want to hug him tightly,i wanted to feel him,i wanted to feel his love again but i can't. i never thought that i'll become so helpless that too infront of my husband.i forward my hand toward his face to touch him

virat's pov

i just came to shopping mall for inquiring about something related about my work. when i saw a girl whose back was facing toward me and she was taking her stepped backward carelessly and she could fall at any time by hittng the trolly which was filled with grocery. so i thought to save her and before she could hit herself with the trolly i hold her from back to prevent her from falling and she turned toward me angerily and spoke" ankhe hai ya bu" she stopped in midway as she looked at me and my eyes popped out in shock. b'coz i saw HER my wife my manvi who betrayed me and hurt me. i couldn't understand what to to do hug her or scold her. i was in big dilema. we were just staring at each others for a long time. and what i saw about her that she had changed completely. she was nt the same manvi whom i knew. she had lost too much wait and there is a pain hidden in her eyes behind her smile. yes still i could read her eyes like before..my heart ached to see a changed manvi. i remebered all over sweet nok jhok and cute fights,our love and passion for each other. that how much we loved each other. our break up in one moment and next moment our patch up. the memories of past was flooding in my mind and i was just lost in her angelic eyes who was staring at mine. suddenly i remeberd her betrayel and my eyes filled with hatered toward her. i came back to sense when i saw her hand which was coming toward me. her hand was shivering. and i looked into her eyes which were holding so much emotions and pain but why would i care after all she was the one who responsible behind all this. her hand just going to ouch my face when i steepd back not allowing her to even touch me after what she did to me. now i just hate her not anything above it. i hate her b'coz she broke my heart into zillions of pieces and i'll never forgive her for this. she took her hand back and looked down in embarresment

manvi's pov

we were just looking at each other like there is no tomorrow. i just extended my hand to touch his face but he immediately stepped back not allowing me even touch him. he hates me so much i questioned myself. i looked down feeling embarressed not able to look into his hurtful eyes. then i gathered all my courage and looked at him. " how how are you" i asked and mentally scold myself for asking this question. ofcourse how will he be after which i did to him. "what do you think how should i be" he said looking into my eyes and i lowered my gaze to stopped the teras which were brimming in my eyes."i was just" but he cut my sentence " it's none of your business so don't try to be innocennt now. you get that" he said coldly and his hrash words pricked my heart and i felt like dying at that moment. their was a pain and hurt in his eyes and words which was killing me from inside. suddenly someone called him from behind and he looked back "ACP sir i have got all the information which we have needed" the person said " good you go i am just coming" virat said and the person went out. my eyes sparkled in happiness to heard his name as an ACP. virat looked at me " virat you have become ACP" i exclaimed happily and going to hug him but stopped myself "congratulations" i wished him "i don't need your best wishes" he again said rudely and now it's enough " virat why are you behaving so rudely with me" i asked hurt with his cold attitude. he raised his eyebrow "b'coz you deserve that" he said pointing his index finger toward me angerily and a lone tear escaped from my eyes but i immediately wiped that. "yes he is right i deserve that, i deserve his hate toward me i thought. we didn't talk further and moved toward opposite sides facing our backs with each other and walked on the different way. i know he he is also feeling bad talking with me rudely b'coz he still loves me and i can read it in his eyes i know that.

O Re Piya
O...
In Faaslo Ka Ye Faisla Kyun Dil Ne Mere Kar Liya
Khud Hi Na Jaane Kaise Jeeyega Hoke Ye Tumse Juda

Main Waari Jaawan
Main Waari Jaawan
Saath Ho Ke Ho Ya Ve Kasoor Re
Naadaan Se Dil Ki Har Khwahish Roothi
Sapne Huye Hai Saare Choor
Piya O Re Piya
Piya Re Piya Re Piya
Piya O Re Piya
Piya Re Piya Re Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Super duper Awesome update shivi...👏👏👏...mazaa aa gayaa...i really enjoyed reading it yaar......ACP virat toh hot hai hii...hayye😳😳...riyaa kaa fidaa honaa toh jaaizz hai😉...manvi n tani convo was so cute😳...manvi ke samne banglow main kon hai??...i think i can guess it...virat right...😛...ab toh aur milnaa hogaa😉 ...virman milgaaye finally......yayy...,,,,,,,par yeh kya...virat hatred toward manvi😭😭,,,,,,,aakir raaz kya hai manvi kaa...i m sure us main koi bohot bari reason zaroor hogii...🤔...the way u wrote the both virman pov were amazing shivi👍🏼,,,,,loved the whole update to the core...every bit of it is really really good❤️❤️❤️...looking forward for the next update..will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm
Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update after a long time...👏 do continue soon...:)
waiting fr ur update eagerly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome one...
Liked it..
Continue soon...
Nd add me in pm list... If u used to pms...
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Posted: 12 years ago

bol mera baby🤗
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chocos khao ge😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
ye meri momy k liye❤️

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Originally posted by: ashishi

ye meri momy k liye❤️


yeh sare mere liye hai😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update👏i like both pov's
get soon to the fb
update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
luved both pov
continue soon
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