vm ff: Hum Bewafa Hargis Na The Pt 15 PG 140 (24/10)

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JESMY

@JESNIA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#971

KILL THAT KARAN😡😡😡HATE HIM
POOR MANVI
AWESOME UPDATE

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#972

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#973

wow super emotional update loved how virat is in guilt that he didnt trust manvi ...and hats off yaar u have written those emotions of virat very beautifully...👏
manvi will obviously get well soon i feel but fr her to be normal its gng to take time and yes more drama ahead i guess
loved the update dear😊
thnks fr thr pm too😳😛

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Nikita

@Duggukede

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#974

this is sooo sooo good

you write so greatly

i love it

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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JESMY

@JESNIA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

awesome updATE AS ALWAYS.
flashback,loved it.

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#976

nice update fb part was also nice
and he was blamming himself
for her bad condition update soon
next part

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#977

awesome update

loved it

flashback was superb

loved manvi description abt that gal[=))

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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luvmanat

@luvmanat

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#978

hey superb update...

her past was so shocking... hope virat will cure her wounds with lots of love...

but where are her parents...??

make that karan punish so hard..

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#979

Manvi had a heart-attack... OMG !!! Their confession scene was really adorable and rmantic, when virat was asking manvi to come back sitting beside her bed... such an emotional scene and awsm dialogues yaar... hats off to u girl. And the last lines when virats tear drop fell on manvis cheek was superbly prtrayed followed by manvi sinking... Cont asap dear... :) Love u shivali... take care...