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Chasby

@Chasby

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Deepti

@deepti1906

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Yeyyy i am first one to comment...🥳

It was really really AWESOME... I really touched my heart...❤️
In the beginning i thought Khushi is dead.. then i got a hope when she entered but again u never mentioned that she was Khushi. then i got confused as i thought who died. then when i read the flashback part i though he got married to La becuz she got preg. but then Arnav's daughter called the woman mumma.. It was a bit confusing but m sure it will be gone with the next fabulous update...😊😊

It was wonderful.. Do update soon...😊😊

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Madhumita Saravanan

@madhuishq

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aslesha is Lavanya's child with Arnav??? OMG...Poor Khushi..Update soon;//.Please!! Wen is the nxt update? So basically Khushi had gotten Lavanya and Arnav married because they had slept...Aslesha is Arnav and Lavanya's daughter from the night they had slept...Lavanya is dead Arnav could protect her and he is guilty of breaking Khushi's promise that he'd take care of Lavanya...Khushi has come to Shantivan for the condolence meet...This is what I understood :P and if my understanding is right...Why is Aslesha calling Khushi has Mumma because I have a feeling that the woman is Khushi and not lavanya... :P

OH I AM CRAZY..UPDATE SOON CHASBY PLEASE!

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hmmm... arnav a widower did he married la and is she dead or there was some misunderstanding abt kushi's death

looking forward to the next part

do update soon plzzz

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Priya

@ashi.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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simply superb start dear...!!!👏

i think arnav and lavanya were married and the person entered now is khushi,, but then how come arnav's child call her maa???😕

it just can not be other way round that is for sure,, i mean how come an arshi story start with khushi's death !!! no man,, my previous guess is correct...

okay now about the flashbacks,,

la and arnav cheated khushi,,, khushi's reaction on knowing the fact was heart melting...

she was so so much hurt but she didn't show it,, salute to her...

m so much glad that u have started such an interesting story,, m already waiting to get another equally wonderful update...😃

actually when i completed reading part 1,, i saw part 2 written down there,, i was so much hoping that it should contain the link of chapter 2 ,, but alas,,!!! 😆

pls dear do update soon...

thanks so much for the PM dear...!!!🤗

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

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Posted: 12 years ago

That's so amazing !!!
Loved how its written !!!!!
So asr married lavanya and its khushi at the door ??
Just guessing !!
All the emotions were beautifully described !!

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

Confusion confusion...i am not getting, who died, who's that woman. You need to explain and for this, you have to continue and update more. Then do it, i seriously wanna know more. Do update soon and thanks for the PM.

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InkyCupid

@InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

Your one shot is beautifully etched out. The trust the three characters have in each other is wonderful..though you can never blame your faults on the alcohol. I hope there is something different that happened, I don't want Arnav to cheat on Khushi.That is something completely unforgivable..how could they? Though I could tell that they both love Khushi a lot. You have portrayed that well:)