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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
That was amazing! The emotions, the pain, everything was written so beautifully by you. I just wanted to cry with Khushi when she found out about Arnav and La's betrayal :( So what I understand so far is, La and Arnav got married, Aslesha is their child, and now La is dead and Khushi has come back?
I am really looking forward to reading more of this.
You're an amazing writer :) No doubt about that whatsoever :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Thanks 4 pm
realy awesom
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: deepti1906

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Yeyyy i am first one to comment...🥳

It was really really AWESOME... I really touched my heart...❤️
In the beginning i thought Khushi is dead.. then i got a hope when she entered but again u never mentioned that she was Khushi. then i got confused as i thought who died. then when i read the flashback part i though he got married to La becuz she got preg. but then Arnav's daughter called the woman mumma.. It was a bit confusing but m sure it will be gone with the next fabulous update...😊😊

It was wonderful.. Do update soon...😊😊


Thank you so much. 😊

😆 Well, thats what I wanted to so. I mean confuse you guys. So that you don't end up ending my story with your thoughts before I do. 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: madhuishq

Aslesha is Lavanya's child with Arnav??? OMG...Poor Khushi..Update soon;//.Please!! Wen is the nxt update? So basically Khushi had gotten Lavanya and Arnav married because they had slept...Aslesha is Arnav and Lavanya's daughter from the night they had slept...Lavanya is dead Arnav could protect her and he is guilty of breaking Khushi's promise that he'd take care of Lavanya...Khushi has come to Shantivan for the condolence meet...This is what I understood :P and if my understanding is right...Why is Aslesha calling Khushi has Mumma because I have a feeling that the woman is Khushi and not lavanya... :P

OH I AM CRAZY..UPDATE SOON CHASBY PLEASE!


Hmm...you really do know how to dig into my stories and get my answers, don't you? 😛 Hehe, well, I will update the next part, soon, probably tomorrow. And then I will answer you. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
I am seriously don't know what happened?
First I thought that it was Khushi being dead but than I thought it must be Lavanya but now Khushi was standing and I am totally lost what it will be.
Gah!! Update fast.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Hmmm... arnav a widower did he married la and is she dead or there was some misunderstanding abt kushi's death

looking forward to the next part

do update soon plzzz


😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey! I was wondering if you had an index of all your works? I would love to read more of your work :)
Sorry I forgot to write that in my comment earlier :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: -Priya.1-

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simply superb start dear...!!!👏
i think arnav and lavanya were married and the person entered now is khushi,, but then how come arnav's child call her maa???😕
it just can not be other way round that is for sure,, i mean how come an arshi story start with khushi's death !!! no man,, my previous guess is correct...

okay now about the flashbacks,,
la and arnav cheated khushi,,, khushi's reaction on knowing the fact was heart melting...
she was so so much hurt but she didn't show it,, salute to her...

m so much glad that u have started such an interesting story,, m already waiting to get another equally wonderful update...😃
actually when i completed reading part 1,, i saw part 2 written down there,, i was so much hoping that it should contain the link of chapter 2 ,, but alas,,!!! 😆
pls dear do update soon...

thanks so much for the PM dear...!!!🤗



You may be right or may not be. 😛 😛 😛

I will try and update the next part soon, so that the confusion, I have created intentionally gets cleared. 😊

Thank you so much. 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: LoveBS

That's so amazing !!!
Loved how its written !!!!!
So asr married lavanya and its khushi at the door ??
Just guessing !!
All the emotions were beautifully described !!


Thanks. 😊 😊

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