FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Nice part ..
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

it was amazing dear

i like the way arjun handle the matter at hospital and he saw he tattoo of flowers on priya's wrist

and i also like the Chet-chat of priya and swati

and then at last priya tell rohan and raina the thing and she did not know that arjun is behind her and listen everything

chotu and shree jaldi hi priya ko accept bhi kar liya and care bhi kar rahe hai i like that

pls pls pls pls update soon now i can not wait more for further because i think soon everything is good

so pls update soon and tnx for pm

sorry for late but i am busy in my exam and soon my other exam is coming so you pls pm me if i did not coming on IF when i am back i read and comment on each part dear pls pls pls

this is for you dear

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#803

I want BL.. I want BL.. BL.. BL..

Just so you know, i'm officially stalking this one!! 😉😆

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#804

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#805

Bwahaha.. I made it in time!!

Thankuuu.. 🤗

Okay then.. Me is here..
I've re-read the update twice today..

And Shilpa, I can't thank you enough for this light-hearted treat before we get down to serious business and shockers.. 👏

Coming to my darlings, they were both so adorable there.. Their deep and profound friendship was clearly reflected in that little banter.. And well, MG alert..Antennae up..
She actually listened to him and took her pills..

Oh and yes.. Shilpaa... Shilpa Anand is our Priya?!!! 😲 😭 😭 😭
These were tears of joy, my behna.. I soo love you for doing this.. 🤗

I've said it before and still maintain my stand, she would've been the perfect choice for Arjun on the show!

Anyway, why fear when Priya is here.. 😳
And Arjun Ji, Priya toh only 'likes' you when you switch on that angry mode.. But we pankhas, drool and salivate when you do that!! ☺️

Okay.. And if I didn't know this before, I would've still guessed it that the Sameer-Swati hotwa part was Tina ki jawani's demand!! How? Well, you know better.. 😉

But my sister, what have you done?
I literally had a wicked grin plastered on my face from the moment you described Swati prettying up to steal Sameer's breath away..
And I'm sure you have more in store for us.. 😉😳

And the desert? Ab aisa desert mile toh khaane ko kaun dekhe yaar?!! 😉😛

And the best bit was the proposal.. I'm soo happy for the two.. They soo totally deserve all the happiness in the world.. Please.. please.. Don't ever separate them again.. I'd be heartbroken if that happens.. 😭

And and.. The little bit of convo about Arjun-Priya.. That just goes on to show how much entwined their lives are..
I wish Arjun-Priya realise their true feelings pretty soon.. But then again, that Prem kahani is bhery bhery mushkil!!

All in all, you made me smile, smirk and blush with this one.. So, I have to say, 👏 👏..

Thanks for the late Valentine's treat! 😉

Awaiting for the story to unfold.. And Arjun's private investigations to begin..
Shoot! I forgot about the diaries..
Please behna, ek yahan parcel kar do.. Please please.. *Puppy eyes*

Phew.. Nahi? Khair chodo.. Jaldi update karo phir!
Samjhi, ya Samjhaun?! 😉🤪

Edited by mohabbatgirl - 12 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#806

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aww...i am blushing hard...that was just mind blowing'

i liked Swati's sweet revenge...

his favorite desert, huh?? loved that scene...hot, romantic

and the final proposal was too good...romantic!

Coming to out lead couple...long way to go...i know it will take time...

i loved that small friendly, loving fight...so cute!

cont soon!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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123pritha

@123pritha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

waitinggg😃

Edited by 123pritha - 12 years ago

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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#808

res Wokay !!

Finally finished with all the updates ..and needless to say amazing story

So lets begin with the mystery that u have created for Sikander ...i Love it ..ab ke Suoer cop ke verses ek super villian toh hona hi chaiye na

Arjun - Now the Arjun of you story is betrayed by love ??? I mean he liked Priya but circumstances were not in his favour and then he moved to Roshini ...She got killed and now priya is back with a secret .

Now Roshini & Priya Relationship isnt also clear but di i loved Roshini so much in Arjun ,yahan par she is gry and mujhe thoda late digest hoga yeh fact.

Priya - Her past is horrid but she still is strong enough to stand for her with help of Swati ofcourse ..hats Off To such a strong charcter u created ...I love her realationship with Swati

Sam- Swati - Sam was really a fool & gadha ...but u do gave him hell as we suggested ...

Now please faster updates ..warna main toh past & present main hi kho jaungi

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#809

=OMG amazing chapter Shilpa di

Arjun n priya were amazing as always

i liked d frend like conversation dey shared ..wen he offered her to take medicines

n den swati ...her ready-to-seduce sameer avatar

was terrific ...OMG dat saree was enough to melt him down

n den her activities

liked dere talks abt arjun n priya's relationship

n den d kitchen romance

now dat was super hot ...shilpa di

i think i shud start visiting drooler's club more😉

superb chapter

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#810

sorry for late comment😳( maafi de do, doing ups' and downs while holding my ears😳)

i'm doing that a lot lately, asking sorry😆😳

but it was awesome Shilpa, just the right touch of romance, sensuality and kisses😳

First it was a pleasure seeing Arjun's concern for Priya, and when they actually ended up fighting like in their pasts, there were so many unanswered questions between them, but gradually Arjun is moving close to the truth😳

and now moving to your hot update😳😆

I really loved it a lot🤗

the way Swati just blew Sam's mind with her teasing😆

the way Sam was confused and wanted to ravish her😆

and finally when Sam understood Swati's teasing and decided to oblige her😳

and what a kiss that was, he even lifted her on the counter😳☺️

but i loved when Swati was prepared for anything to keep Sam's back, while Sam knew that he was going beyond his limits and that too early, and he stopped😳

and finally the proposal and the ring

Lovely😳

Now pleaes update soon😉

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago