FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#791

That was amazing! Loved the update! The car ride was just wow! And the hospital scene was beautiful! I can't wait to read more!

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#792

All the lines were beautiful...
n well written...
The car moment... it was really adorable n one of my favs..
Stealing glances at each other then the seat belt...
awww<3<3
the chupke chupke moment in Swati's cabin...n their mind voices..
Then comes Swati n Sameer...
A romantic dinner w8ing for them..
Shree n Chotu...their love n care for Priya...she's lucky to have them by her side...
Now the tattoo...
Maybe Arjun's mind will start working overtime now...
n will try to figure out the reason for that tattoo...
All the lines were beautiful...
Liked it..
Continue Soon..
n thanks for the PM..

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umamah70

@umamah70

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#793

wow awesome..

loved when arjun was lost in priyas eyes..

loved when arjun took priya's hand when her arm was getting stitched...

i hope arjun connects all the dots quickly...

update soon...

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#794

hi...read all the parts in one go
all were amazing
the latest update well described all emotions
plz add me in ur pm list
thanks
contiue soon

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

awesome update
loved the scenes in the car arjun helping priya with the seatbelt
nd holding her hand at the hospital was so sweet
loved priya teasing sameer nd swati about their dinner plans
thanx 4 pm
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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123pritha

@123pritha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#796

for u

the update was superbbb

etf 's concern for priya and finally arjun confirming if priya is fine You Rock-Awesome Job!

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Hey ...

Amazing update :-)

Loved the concern showed by Arjun ;)

Can't wait for the next part :)

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#798

Read this last night before I went to bed, then all I could do is dream of Priya and Arjun. So have got me hooked. Epic update. Please continu to be awesome.

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#799

superb...!!!!

the car scene was lovely...!!! arjun lost in her eyes😉

and hospital mai the way he held her hand to reduce her pain and it worked..!! love the way his touch was making her feel and then telling her that he will drop her home jut wow...!!!😳

omg priya is scared of hospitals and getting anesthesia to treat the wound...!!!😭😭 she fears loosing her consciousness...!!!! she has gone through so much and is such a brave girl..!!! am loving priya more and more with each updates...!!!

love the way she teased sam and swati of their romantic evening plans😉😆 dono blushing haan😉

awww chotu and shree giving her tracking devices in form of mobile and pen.. they really care for her... love their friendship... ooo arjun feeling like a outsider

so arjun awestruck by her words at end...!!! 😎😎

continue soon...!!!

waiting eagerly for the next update...!!!

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#800

first sorry for commenting so late...was little busy.the update was as usual fab..loved the hospital scene..
waiting for swati n sameer scenes..
u wrote all the parts so well...
continue soon
the update was..