FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Res!
Have to catch up with a few parts and then I'll unres!😳

Edited*

Woaaahhh

Arjun is reaching closer to the truth by every moment...

Every hint,every clue...Well he IS a mastermind!Let's see when he is able to join all the dots😕

I loved that little hurt Arjun had in his heart when Priya got hit😳😳

Can definitely understand why Priya is so freaked out of anaesthesia😔

Arjun held her hand☺️

Hayyee!! Your story definitely has some magic😲

Even if he catches her heart,my heart goes dhak-dhak-dhak🤪☺️

And the seat belt part too

Now coming to Sam and Swati☺️☺️

Haye re☺️

Whatte romance☺️

Swati and her seduction in the hot and very happening Sari🤪

And Sam's reaction to that🤪

Finally...

Edited by lola123 - 12 years ago

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umamah70

@umamah70

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

awwwsooommee...

loved it to bits...

loved thearjun-priya convo...

loved the way sam proposed swati..

update soon...

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Di...
fab update loved it
arjun ji u lyk me more if u dnt take pills wow
chumneshwari dialog hehe..
lovely
claps fr it di
sam swati scene grt
beautiful
ishq wala love time..yay.!
felt like watching d scene di
jaldi se update next
eagerly waiting to knw wats priya hiding
n
sacrifice?!
n
arjun ji reac to it..
too gud di..
superb gng..
love u di
tc..
ps. dnt frget my request lol..
sys!!

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shona14

@shona14

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

arjun and priya's sweet argument😊
nice dialogues😊
aw sam was stunned wen he saw swati in red sari
and he gave her a ring 😳 its grrt that swati gave him a second chance
superb👏 will be waiting for the next part

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

A part dedicated to Swati-Sameer...
*blush* *blush* Swati teasing Sameer...
Sameer was finding hard to resist..
n the red roses...WOW
n the favourite desert...
the final proposal was so cute...
Loved the entire chapter...

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

such a blushy blushyyy updt di😳☺️😳

though i lv dos ariya parts yet i feel 2day sam swati stl da show😉😳

da ending is ☺️☺️

at vryy 1st part sam think abt 2 cancl his dinnr dt watchng priya condtion...omgg thnk god(only u😉) he dnt..

lv dat arjun cm 4ward 4 his wld b lady love ...actualyy all time ldy lv😉

bt she sttfns when he sooo clos 2 her(oohhoo isse thora chance pe dnc karna vi sikhado di😉😆)

der convo as norml good frnzz...4 da 1st time time dey look like dis

lvd arjuns admnc on her medicatn ..chooo crnggg 😳😳

realyy hope he stays der lil longr...

now da mainn blushhhy part ...

swati s all st 2 killl da poor etf chf😳..red saree ...dip cut..woo hoo chf dfntly gn nuts😆

her reveng s succeedd yahooo

entry mein hi ...he cnt catch her wordss😆...speakr ki words ke jagah speakr pe hi lost ho gaya😆😳...he trys 2 distrct himslf...

lv der convo regrdng ariya ...treulyy real frnzz ...in dis momnt tooo😆 dey think of der frnzz

bt da fvrt desert uuhhuu...lv it how sam tstng da desrt😉☺️☺️

now sam lead hr 2 da roommm...😳😳

lvlyyy part ...

wtng 4 moreee

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

super update di...!!!

loved arjun and priya's convo regarding her medicines...!!! aww arjun is so caring...!!! and their mind talks were lovely...!!!

swati sam ka kya kehna...!!! 😉

swati trying to seduce sam aur sam bechara lost so much in swati that cant concentrate on anything else...!!! lage raho sam aur swati...!!!

aur kitchen romance was very hot...!!!! ☺️ swati sam ki fav dessert haan😉 love the way he was tasting her...!!! and what more sam wanted to do with her...!!☺️ aur end mai proposal wow...!!! so cuteee...!!!

continue soon...!!!

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Shilpa Di,

This update of yours was a complete tease.

I cant explain my condition.

Honestly speaking, I never like revealing Saris. Cleavage showing, almost negligible back, was a BIG NO for me.

But after reading this section, I can't wait to experiment this on someone (Conditions applied... If I get one)

U have given me pretty cool seducing ideas.!

Thanks!!!

I also loved the interaction between Arjun and Priya.

When Arjun says that she will get to see the Arjun she likes if she doesnt have her tablets. That was cute.

I short Di, I cant wait...

Please update soon!

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

phew... before I say anything.. pls tell me that you forgive me...

I have been waiting for the update for a long time.. and I dont know why I didnt check if you had updated or not...

read 7 chapters back to back..

OMG... how much did I miss... sorry... but I'm sure I had missed yr PMs...

sorry again...

WOW... 7 chapters.. its so intense yaar.. felt like reading a no:1 best seller novel... kept on turning pages...

and what all did I read?

Arj-Sam-Priya friendship... they both had feelings for each other.. but yet...

the sudden change in turns... and his marriage to Roshni,..

he is keeping himself so secluded.. if I say that he is the most tough person in the team, it would be an understatement.. I would say Priya is an equal competitor.

when Maya was introduced at the end of a chap, I had many neg vibes. thank god it didnt reach there

and now Priya's past... its very touching dear...

waiting for the tough heads to open up..

loads of mystery with some teasers of what happened...

waiting...

Sam-Swati... at least one love in on track...

eagerly waiting .. and pls do PM me...

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

it was amazing head's of to you

fantastic, fabulous,lovely

the way sawati tack a revenge is too good now no choice for sammer

proposal is too good i like it too much

pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon and tnx for pm

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