FF: Betrayed by Love ~(Note pg 151)~

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1041

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

Soon and I am taking my baby back home to our forum, she can come back here after 50 pages.😆

ok Shilpa,why dont you creat the post and res😆

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1042

Tina I have little more editing to do that is why. But I won't make you wait long.

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1043

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll
Tina I have little more editing to do that is why. But I won't make you wait long.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1044

Thank you everyone who has read, liked and commented on this story.

For the first time my FF has completed one thread and is going to thread too, very exciting for me.

Thanks for your support and motivations, I couldn't have done it without all of your encouragements.

Here is the link to Thread 2.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3531186/ff-betrayed-by-love-t2-note-and-a-teaser-page-143

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1045

so sorry for the late comment di...😳
the update was superb... it was awsum...
dont have words to describe it... 👏👏
the relevation was superbly written... finally arjun knows everything except what happened with priya...
and his reactions after knowing it is like this although he had a idea what truth is gonna be... dont know how he'll react when priya's truth will be out...
loved how priya comforted him...
sam priya convo was nice... so that is the reason sam made priya join etf...
precap is interesting...arjun priya convo and swati arjun convo also... cool...

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yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1046

so sorry for being very late
part18 awesome
so finally arjun read roshni's diaries and got to know what she did to priya...fell bad for her
so it was roshni who told sikander about priya
arjun is in so much pain right nw...poor guy
so arjun decided to go home to get more answers from

part19 superb update
finally afther so long arjun went to home and meet his family
loved the conversation between arjun and his parents
poor priya she suffered so much
hate roshni so much how could she so cruel
really looking forword to know how arjun finds out the full truth

part20 wow anotherawesome update
loved it so much
arjun is really very close in finding out the full truth
loved rathore and priya's conversation
loved the way how arjun ask priya about the scene rhat was a lovely scene
can't wait to read arjun and priya and arjun's convo and also arjun and swati's
fianlly am done still have thread 2 to read
am loving this story so much
thank you so much for the PMs

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Geeta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1047

Shilpa di! Finally caught up with thread 1...BY GOD YOU ARE SIMPLY AMAZING

The plot of this is extremely well written and the turmoil you have portrayed with the three musketeers is astounding! You have expressed their troubles so beautifully and accurately that i have to keep a box of tissues nearby just in case its an emotional one...

I feel so bad for priya and arjun but its a relief to know that they have the support of eachother sam, swati and choree..

Cant wait to catch up with thread2