AsYa FF: Beautiful Monster CHAPTER 5 PAGE 23 UP.

HOLLA!!

Hey everayboday 🤣

I'm starting a fan fiction, and yes, it is angst, depressing, sad, dark, there's death in it, and it may be triggering if I can right it well enough.

And to everybody that is asking me why I am so depressed, lemme tell you guiyz, I am not depressed 🤣

Imma actually quite the opposite :P

I have written 6 chapters for this FanFic already, and I am planning to make it atleast 25 parts.

Atleast.

I tried to get over the 500 word mark.

I tried. :P

And if you would like to get pms, please buddy me, or if you

have too many friends and you are writing a story and you have to then pm a gazillion more people, then just comment saying you wanna get pms 🤣

This story is based of the book by Kate Mccaffrey, which is called Beautiful Monster.

(So is the title :P)

I have asked permission from her, and if you don't trust me, and would like to see the email I got saying that I could use phrases, base mah story off of it and stuff just pm me :P

I think the age rating of this this should be for people over 15, cause it does explore the dark side of the world.

Eg. Drugs. And other bad stuff.

And I'm trying not to babble 'bout one direction either.

Trying. 🤣

Here is the prologue :)

Beautiful Monster...

-Prologue-

12:24pm: Asad, his family, and Zoya are heading towards the airport. Najma is leaving to study abroad. After days of speculation and worrying, Asad has finally said yes.

3:40pm: Once Najmas flight has taken off, and the tears are unstoppable from both of the ladies eyes. Asad just sighs and starts heading towards their car.

4:50pm: They are due to arrive home at 9:00pm. The rain has delayed traffic movement.

5:30pm: The traffic has finally decided to move a little faster. Asad has taken advantage of this action, and is heading towards home at a high speed, despite the ladies telling him to slow down.

5:35pm: The rain is falling heavier than before, and Asad cannot see through the fog that has spread around the car.

5:36pm: The car swerves, and hits an old tree.

5:56pm: Zoya recovers first, and tries to wake Asad up from unconsciousness.

6:05pm: Asad finally wakes up, and the duo pick Dilshad up, who is still faint, and call and ambulance.

6:11pm: The ambulance has arrived.

6:23pm: Asad has collapsed, and is taken in another ambulance. Zoya goes with Dilshad.

6:40pm: They have now arrived at the Hospital. Dilshad is taken to the ICU. She needs an operation immediately, they say. She has suffered from a heart attack.

6:50pm: Dilshad is going through intensive surgery, and doctors say they can't promise anything. Zoya is shattered.

7:40pm: Asad has still not woken up, but is in a stable condition. He has been examined, and it is now known that he has 2 broken ribs, and one fractured arm.

10:01pm: After hours of severe surgery and anxious waiting from Zoya, Dilshad is declared dead.

Yes, I know. The prologue again, is really miniscule, but I assure you, the chapters are not that small.

If you have read the book, you will have a brief idea of what is going to happen.

If you don't, lemme just tell you. Asad has great difficulties coping with his mother's death, and listens to the voice at the back of his head.

The funny thing is, I kept of thinking of Zayn Malik while writing this up. Its got bits and pieces of anorexia here and there, maybe that's why. Zayn has been loosing LOT of weight recently.

oh, and i do pm silent readers, but they just have to comment like normal readers 🤣

you don't have to be shy loves!!!!

So here ya go :P

Lemme know if I should continue.

Love yu all <3

Buh-bye

<3

:)

INDEX:

Meee first!!!Loved the concept.i dont care what u write about but i love reading ur work..in the prologue itself najma has gone abroad,their car met with an accident,asad is injured and dilshad is DEAD!ok i cant think of anything else to blabber so plz continue and pm me..

That's fantastic!!! 👏 Continue soon!

Every once in a while its good to see something different and not always get the "I love you" romance/sentimental type stories. We can always look to you to give us something completely out of our comfort zone lol. I liked this and eagerly awaiting the rest of the story! 😉 And you are obviously wayyy too perky to be mistaken for depressed lol

Very nice concept. Something different. Any romance to come?

Such a Depression, just in the prologue! 😕

Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI

Meee first!!!Loved the concept.i dont care what u write about but i love reading ur work..in the prologue itself najma has gone abroad,their car met with an accident,asad is injured and dilshad is DEAD!ok i cant think of anything else to blabber so plz continue and pm me..