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Every once in a while its good to see something different and not always get the "I love you" romance/sentimental type stories. We can always look to you to give us something completely out of our comfort zone lol. I liked this and eagerly awaiting the rest of the story! 😉 And you are obviously wayyy too perky to be mistaken for depressed lol
Very nice concept. Something different. Any romance to come?
Originally posted by: risingsea101
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edited:WOW!I love the titleI feel really bad already! Dilshaad died, atleast Najma's still alive...I could really tell you love Zayn don't you? I love 1D too(random)😆Continue soon and thanks for the pm <3
Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Dips! 😉
I call you right haan! You are as churailish as Dips of MEIEJ 😆 😆 *hi fi*How dare you kill my moma? 😡 😡 🤣Your depressing FFS make me laugh rather than making me feel sad! And thats the charm of our writing! And i love it :P 🤗Waiting for the next part Update Karr :P
Originally posted by: sophie420
Such a Depression, just in the prologue! 😕
I know your a great writer, so really looking forward to the FF!~Sophie :)
I am back!!!!
This is chaptah 1 of Beautiful Monster.
Enjoy!
Keep in mind that this story will go awfully slow. Not the days and stuff, but how Asad turns back to normal :P
Ps.
May be triggering.
Here ya go :)
Btw, this is 4.3 pages long.
I checked 🤣
Chapter 1.
2 days after the accident.
"a-ammi," Asad's faint voice jolted Zoya from her trance.
"ammi," his voice was stronger now. More panicked. He tried to get up, but the machines around the hospital bed tangled against him, and the buzzing crept up to his ears.
Zoya lept up from her sitting area and darted towards Asad.
"Mr. Khan, shhh, calm down," Zoya unsuccessfully tried to calm Asad, trying to hold his hands so he could stop thrashing around.
"Ammi, where is she? Get away from me, I need to get ammi, ill save her, ill-"
Just then, the nurse came.
Not even caring about the fact that he was thrashing around like a wild animal, she injected him with a dose of highly effective sleep medicine.
Asads howls slowly washed away, and soon, he was helplessly murmuring, and Zoya stroked his hair as he slowly fell in a deep sleep, mumbling about his ammi, and how he would save her.
"Nurse," Zoya turned to the middle-aged lady, who was carefully setting the machines back up to their normal position.
"Yes ma'am?"
"When is Asa- I mean, Mr. khan, when is he going to return back to the way he was?"
The nurse stopped what she was doing and looked at her.
Zoya was nervous.
She didn't want to hear anything bad.
"Miss,"
"Zoya, call me Zoya."
"Well then, miss Zoya, I am afraid to say that when these types of accidents happen, the persons mental health is more at risk than their physical health. As you know, Mr. Asad's physical shape is getting better by the day, but, his mental health is what we are worried about.
He has been waking up every two hours screaming his about his mother, and every time we have to sedate him heavily to calm him down. He has not taken the news of his mothers death lightly, and us, the doctor and I, are afraid that he will just worsen over time."
Zoya bit her lip, trying not to let the tears fall.
Dilshads gone.
Najmas gone abroad.
Her visa is expiring in less than 40 days.
Who will care for him?
Seeing her discomfort, the nurse tried to make the situation lighter.
"But don't worry Miss, we think that if you behave normally with him, like nothing has happened, and steer away from his mothers death, he will recover. Slowly, but surely, he will."
With that, the nurse took off.
Zoya sighed.
She still had to tell Najma.
Slowly getting up from the bed, carefully, trying not to wake Asad up, she took out her phone.
Her fingertips were hovering over the number before she gave up, and sat back down.
She couldn't.
But she knew she had to.
But she didn't want the conversation to end like it had with Asad.
***
"Mr. Khan?" Zoya called out, slowly closing the door to his hospital room.
"Yes Miss Farooqi," Asad's croaky voice came out from the bed in the middle of the room.
"i-I have to t-tell you some- some t-thing," Zoyas words got blemished by tears and hiccups, and she suddenly broke down.
To say Asad was shocked was a major understatement.
He tried to stop her from crying, her tried to make her laugh, he tried everything he could with the position he was in, and finally she stopped.
Only to tell him the three words no-one would want to here in their entire lifetime and more.
"Phoopi is dead."
She had started crying again, but Asad did nothing to stop her.
Abruptly, a rage of anger filled his senses.
"HOW DARE YOU!" he screamed, ripping of all the wires that were attached to him and got up, pulling Zoya with him.
"How dare you say that about my mother!"
That's all Asad kept on screaming, while Zoya pleaded him to stop.
Zoya didn't care about his vice-like grip on her wrists, she just didn't want him to injure himself even more.
"Nurse, somebody, please," she yelled, trying to get someone to calm him down.
Almost immediately, a doctor came in, followed by two nurses.
"Please move Miss," he ordered, and removed Asads hand that was latched onto Zoya's wrists.
"Please doctor, please calm him down, please," Zoya was a mess. Tears streaked down her face and her hair was a calamity. But she couldn't care less.
She watched as he got sedated.
Everything went silent. She couldn't hear what the nurses were saying to her, or the fact hat they had left as well.
All she could hear was his breathing.
Slow, shallow breathing, mixed with the light humming of the machines.
And that's when reality terribly struck her.
Dilshad was dead.
Gone.
And she was never coming back.
So, didya like it?
I hope you did 🤣
And should I make an index for mah works?
I'm not sure 🤣
Thanks for all the comments, please keep them coming, even if you wanna bash me 🤣
And if you want pm, please buddy me :)
Love yu all <3
buh-bye
<3
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