Originally posted by: crazymayurian
osumm...
per nups ko kya hova :O
thanks alot dear
lets see
Originally posted by: clustersofstar
nice update fiza
thnkas mehak
n mom is better now... Allah k shukar hai vision n all are going good
thnks for asking
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Originally posted by: crazymayurian
osumm...
per nups ko kya hova :O
Originally posted by: clustersofstar
nice update fiza
interesting updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: kheya-mayur
i was so enjoying this ff.its hugely interesting.but at d end nupur...
what had hapend to her.
nice update di its awesome
ohhh god terrorist attack??i known that mayank is police officer and nupur also but how could she do this i mean she is pregnant rightbut honestly it superbthnaks pm melove withdeepa
wow fiza its soo thriller update.
lovelyyy ...terrorist attack on airport wow...but wht whn they came to know abt nupur.. how would they react?gosh cant wait to see this...
Originally posted by: shafy_MN
Yo...
...Finally...CSI..began..at it's form...Waiting for te next part..Awesome..loved it
OMG api- it was fantastic part
very much thrilling
terrorist attack on airport and now mayank wants his team with him
yeee ab nupur mayank ki saath hogi
Api try to update soon
nice update
awesome update
u made it very interesting
but what happened to nupur
where was she???
WOW THIS F IS GONG VERY INTERESTING
LOVING THIS STORY SO MUCH
but i want nupur with mayank to solve this case
but if she was in flight then how it would b possible????
Loved this update
Do cont soon
Fantastic update
Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
omg... terrorist attack!
feeling scared 4 mn!
Originally posted by: mayuloveu
nupur thik hai na? very very gripping update
Great update :D
YaY!! MayUr will be together again..
Flashback part was too good ;)
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*,muuuah!!
Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
very nice update Fiza.
so now the story began ... terrorists r in airport.airport is most important place of a country ... n that too delhi airport is most imp place aur waha hi terroirst hai!!! par wo log andar gaye kaise, itni tight security k bad bhi???no wonder ... kuch andar k admi hi mile huye honge ... i just hate those persons who do every illegal things for money ... i hate them ... they are the original terrorist than terrorist.😡so they were there and jammed the network ... ab kya hoga??😕mayank have to work hard to get into airport when thousand of innocent people are there ... i am watiing for the step mayank ll took to entre there.😳nice move Fiza ... very intelligent storyline ... attractive👏lovely ... i m sure its really gonna huge hit like first two seasons.👏continue soon.love ya🤗
Chapter: 4
Mayank: oky guys… its big thing… not because the fact the airport is on the stake because there atelast 3000 passenger and other than that there are crew members.. its hard to even estimate …. There is no way in now now we can think.. but I want all of the force sealing the area around airport… plus atleast few km back to….
Plus we have to be high alert all around the city… diverting our attention here at the airport things can get nasty …
He is Major.. and we have asked army's special support for this… any question..
No sir
.. go rock..
Mayank: thanku sir for ur support
Major: anytime… ACP… we will do whatever we can ..
Mayank: can u make ur people give us a get a sneak peek of inside,…. Its just hell to know wht is going on inside..
Major: I know how r u felling ACP but then we have to wait to know.. if we move in and sumthing they did to people it will be no use… we are trying but there jammers are to strong to break,..
Mayank: I know… any ways u place ur force near as near the port…
Major: sure… we will keep u posted and u too…. Best of luck…
……………..
Mayank was siting in his office, having blue prints of security, he had made the best evr security plan… we atleast 5 back ups… how is this possible even… 10miles away from the airport things were checked.. and at evry 5 kms there was surveillance.. inside the airport there were 100 officers…. Close circuit cameras, 100 officer without uniform in there… and breaking all they enter… and more over nobody was able to react to that..
There was no report of any fire or any fight inside there.. or maybe there was sum… they have made the cameras stop working 6 hrs before.. and yes it was his mistake that he didn't checked that they have hacked the security and they have on aired fake video… damit…
He threw the plan on the floor… dam it…
Sir sir…
Mayank: wht happend
We have received a video from inside the airport..
Mayank: make it run now fast..
He move out the cabin and found Samrat n benji arrived
Benji: hi…
Mayank: he hugged them… great to see u yaar… cum we have video from inside
Samrat: great…
Mayank: where is nupur…
Samrat: she is..
Mayank: let her cum … cum we move in conference room…
He moved in the conference room along with samrat and benji.. and ask the person to put on the video…
We have take over the charge of the airport… we know ur people have surrounded the whole out side of the airport… but donot dare to cum in else there are atleast 5000 people with us and so I believe Mayank Sharma is intelligent enough to know wht not to do…
Samrat: that's it.. no demand no nothing…
He was keenly watching the video the man in the video has covered his face.. just his eyes were visible
Mayank: make it back… he said in a whisper…
His heart was thumbing , this cant be true it should not b true…. He was fanatically looking on screen…
The video was made back and there were people siting in huge amount…. All scared and worried…
Benji: there actually thousands of people.. children to…
Mayank: stop.. here stop it.. zoom in… I said zoom it…
Samrat: what happened mayank…
He droped himself on his chair…
Mayank: where is nupur….
They were quite..
Mayank: WHERE THE DAM IS NUPUR… WHERE SHE IS..
Benji: mayank woh dekh
Mayank: kya dekho ..kya dekho.. tu dekh.. yeah yeah…yeah yaha dekh… how can u do this dam it..
…………….
Back to morning:
Nupur was there finally.. she was there were she was destine to be.. she came out of the washroom, thought of giving the person a call, yet than she dropped the idea… surprise is a surprise
But as soon as she came out of the washroom she was shocked to see wht was going on there.. people were running all over, and screaming.. it was all hustle bustle all around….
Nupur: kya hua… she made herself in corner knowing pretty well sumthing is terribly wrong….
She stopped a woman and tried to ask her what has actually happened there…
Nupur: kya hua please batao nah
Woman: waha bht saray log hain guns k sath… aur woh sab ko pakar rahy hain.. tum bhi bhago yaha se bhago
Nupur felt her world shaking this cant happen… security lapse in mayank's plan.. she very well knew what has exactly happened…. She sneak around and found a gun man… The airport is capture.. its unbelievable… and she is right there stucked in the mess
She went inside the washroom, she knew a way out and she will go from there… nobody else can but she can.. but than she stoped looking at herself in the mirror.. she is an officer… an ACP, just because she has life attached to herself….. she cant let all of these people alone. Just because she is dying to see her husband and she is worried for her loved ones she can't escape like this,,, . they need her.. she can be a pretty huge being inside here… she can help..
She touch her baby and was now sure wht she wants to do with all this… she threw her card destroying it into pieces…and flashed it.. so that nobody get to have this card… she covered her head with dupata she opened her purse and bring out kajal… placing thick around her eyes… and than making it mixed with her compact slightly applying it on her face… making her complexion so dark…
She was ready nobody can now recognize her.. she was sure about this… that nobody will
Nupur: baby … please be good with mama…. And I just hope ur dad will be okay… with all this…. He needs his nerves right… oky n sweetheart welcome on ur first mission
She came out and a man drag her towards the main area..
Man: aram se.. mein ny kitny baar kaha hai aurto k sath koi batmeezi nhi… khas ker k jab woh is halat mein ho… hath chor us k..
Sorry bhai...
Man: ap ja ker aram se waha bhait jay… aur humary liyan koi muskil na kerain… ap ko kuch bhi chaiy ho ap hum se kah sakti hain….
Is aurat ko koi muskil nhi honi chaiy
Nupur knew one thing… they donot want to harm women.. and above all being pregnant he was so carefully about everything…actually almost they were so caring toward them…. That is strange… yet maybe they just want their things down bus
Man: yaha koi doctor hai… koi doctor yaha hai…
A woman raised her hand… and the man asked her to go with nupur and sit near her… she was surprised since when terrorist her so nice… but this was a very very good thing for them…
She place her head back…She is trapped … she thought just in few hrs she will be with mayank, she asked gunjan not to tell anyone as she pretty well knew mayank will never let her travel…. And when he knew there is a sercutiy thread….. but now wht when he will get to know I m here … sigh wht he will do… here she was thinking having this morning with him.. and now she even didn't knew will she have any morning with him…
She cant think like that.. of all those thousand's people she is the only hope to this… she will make it whtevr she can…
………….
She was sure nobody will reconoze her.. and she was right nobody did.. even samrat n benji had an hard time to recognizing that person but she was also sure that Mayank will n he did… she cant hide from him…
Mayank: yeah dekh… yeah dekh… nupur..
Samrat n benji was not sure that person is nupur… they watched closely and they were shocked… she does appears similar to nupur ….
Mayank: aur woh jhasi ki rani … waha kisi na kisi mission per hai… how the hell u guys let her travel… knowing Delhi is waqt thread per hai
Samrat: mayank arm se… hum mein se kisi ko nhi batay us ny
Benji: subha mjhy gunjan ny bataya jab mein usko dhoond raha that u… us wat tujhy nhi bata sakt… socha hum sath tu hoon teri…
Mayank hided his face in his plam..and than moved them away from his eyes looking at her on the screen… his heart was bleeding
Mayank: yeah kya kerdiya nupur… kya kerdiya tum ny…
Samrat placed his hand on his shoulder… they all were in miserable position .. it wasn't just the thought about people but it was there best frnd his love, there love who is there…. And anything can happen anytime
…………….
Sorry maar na maat dekho pls….
The ff will not loss his light effects… but yes having nupur inside will add spice in it… and she has the major person who will make things easy… being pregnant I donot want her to be out of the case.. there personal lifes have never influenced the case so even now shouldn't
U know me all im not gonna make it roto .. so donot worry about it….
Han bus meri asani hogi romance gaya ..bye bye seeya tata….
Not to worry u will have romance in flashbacks… I will try to put in..
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