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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

osumm...
per nups ko kya hova :O




thanks alot dear
lets see








thnkas mehak

n mom is better now... Allah k shukar hai vision n all are going good
thnks for asking



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

interesting updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm




thnks alot
hope u continue to feel soo



thnks


Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

i was so enjoying this ff.its hugely interesting.but at d end nupur...
what had hapend to her.




thnku so much i just hpe u also feel same for he case matters...
u will get to know abt her

nothing happen to her



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa5

nice update di its awesome

ohhh god terrorist attack??
i known that mayank is police officer and nupur also but how could she do this i mean she is pregnant right
but honestly it superb
thnaks pm me
love with
deepa





thanks alot dear

yes its an attack dhn dhn dhn😆

let see even if she is pregent she can use her brains n witts... if u have read all previous season u know who she is .. she is strong woman...
thnk s lot dear


Originally posted by: drmaha

wow fiza its soo thriller update.


lovelyyy ...
terrorist attack on airport wow...but wht whn they came to know abt nupur.. how would they react?


gosh cant wait to see this...






thnks jani...
terrorist attack wao... shabash..kasy log ho wao ker rahy ho shabash...

sigh u have to wait 😆
thnks dear


Originally posted by: shafy_MN

Yo...


...
Finally...CSI..began..at it's form...


Waiting for te next part..
Awesome..
loved it




thnks dear
yes csi start

thnks dear


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnim.

OMG api- it was fantastic part
very much thrilling
terrorist attack on airport and now mayank wants his team with him
yeee ab nupur mayank ki saath hogi
Api try to update soon




thnks dear
glad u liked it and hope u feel same in future too
yes mayank aur nupur sath mein handle keray ga
yaar actually i can update this ff very soon
a bit buys in houshold plus mjhy yaad dilny wali aj kal hostil mein hai...so


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Posted: 12 years ago


thnks dear

Originally posted by: -Meri-

awesome update
u made it very interesting
but what happened to nupur
where was she???




thnku so much dear
u will get to know


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayan-

WOW THIS F IS GONG VERY INTERESTING
LOVING THIS STORY SO MUCH




thnks alot dear
glad u r finding it such


Originally posted by: Ria..


but i want nupur with mayank to solve this case
but if she was in flight then how it would b possible????




donot worry i will nevr break the team as a team they rock... so nupur will solve the case as team

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sara92.

Loved this update
Do cont soon




thnku so much



thnks

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

omg... terrorist attack!
feeling scared 4 mn!



donot be CSI hai nah

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

nupur thik hai na? very very gripping update




thnku so much dear



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Humayra

Great update :D
YaY!! MayUr will be together again..
Flashback part was too good ;)
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*,muuuah!!



thnks alot dear
glad ur enjoying it

lov ya too


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

very nice update Fiza.


so now the story began ... terrorists r in airport.

airport is most important place of a country ... n that too delhi airport is most imp place aur waha hi terroirst hai!!! par wo log andar gaye kaise, itni tight security k bad bhi???

no wonder ... kuch andar k admi hi mile huye honge ... i just hate those persons who do every illegal things for money ... i hate them ... they are the original terrorist than terrorist.😡

so they were there and jammed the network ... ab kya hoga??😕

mayank have to work hard to get into airport when thousand of innocent people are there ... i am watiing for the step mayank ll took to entre there.😳

nice move Fiza ... very intelligent storyline ... attractive👏

lovely ... i m sure its really gonna huge hit like first two seasons.👏

continue soon.

love ya🤗






yes now the story began
bus yeahi tu masla hai k andar kasay ga...

its ture but sumwhere we as nation make those people we are equally reponsible for it
Benji arha hai nah dekh woh kya kerta hai
thnkus o mcuh dear
hope u like it further too
thnks dear
lov ya


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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter: 4

Mayank: oky guys… its big thing… not because the fact the airport is on the stake because there atelast 3000 passenger and other than that there are crew members.. its hard to even estimate …. There is no way in now now we can think.. but I want all of the force sealing the area around airport… plus atleast few km back to….

Plus we have to be high alert all around the city… diverting our attention here at the airport things can get nasty …

He is Major.. and we have asked army's special support for this… any question..

No sir

.. go rock..

Mayank: thanku sir for ur support

Major: anytime… ACP… we will do whatever we can ..

Mayank: can u make ur people give us a get a sneak peek of inside,…. Its just hell to know wht is going on inside..

Major: I know how r u felling ACP but then we have to wait to know.. if we move in and sumthing they did to people it will be no use… we are trying but there jammers are to strong to break,..

Mayank: I know… any ways u place ur force near as near the port…

Major: sure… we will keep u posted and u too…. Best of luck…

……………..

Mayank was siting in his office, having blue prints of security, he had made the best evr security plan… we atleast 5 back ups… how is this possible even… 10miles away from the airport things were checked.. and at evry 5 kms there was surveillance.. inside the airport there were 100 officers…. Close circuit cameras, 100 officer without uniform in there… and breaking all they enter… and more over nobody was able to react to that..

There was no report of any fire or any fight inside there.. or maybe there was sum… they have made the cameras stop working 6 hrs before.. and yes it was his mistake that he didn't checked that they have hacked the security and they have on aired fake video… damit…

He threw the plan on the floor… dam it…

Sir sir…

Mayank: wht happend

We have received a video from inside the airport..

Mayank: make it run now fast..

He move out the cabin and found Samrat n benji arrived

Benji: hi…

Mayank: he hugged them… great to see u yaar… cum we have video from inside

Samrat: great…

Mayank: where is nupur…

Samrat: she is..

Mayank: let her cum … cum we move in conference room…

He moved in the conference room along with samrat and benji.. and ask the person to put on the video…

We have take over the charge of the airport… we know ur people have surrounded the whole out side of the airport… but donot dare to cum in else there are atleast 5000 people with us and so I believe Mayank Sharma is intelligent enough to know wht not to do…

Samrat: that's it.. no demand no nothing…

He was keenly watching the video the man in the video has covered his face.. just his eyes were visible

Mayank: make it back… he said in a whisper…

His heart was thumbing , this cant be true it should not b true…. He was fanatically looking on screen…

The video was made back and there were people siting in huge amount…. All scared and worried…

Benji: there actually thousands of people.. children to…

Mayank: stop.. here stop it.. zoom in… I said zoom it…

Samrat: what happened mayank…

He droped himself on his chair…

Mayank: where is nupur….

They were quite..

Mayank: WHERE THE DAM IS NUPUR… WHERE SHE IS..

Benji: mayank woh dekh

Mayank: kya dekho ..kya dekho.. tu dekh.. yeah yeah…yeah yaha dekh… how can u do this dam it..

…………….

Back to morning:

Nupur was there finally.. she was there were she was destine to be.. she came out of the washroom, thought of giving the person a call, yet than she dropped the idea… surprise is a surprise

But as soon as she came out of the washroom she was shocked to see wht was going on there.. people were running all over, and screaming.. it was all hustle bustle all around….

Nupur: kya hua… she made herself in corner knowing pretty well sumthing is terribly wrong….

She stopped a woman and tried to ask her what has actually happened there…

Nupur: kya hua please batao nah

Woman: waha bht saray log hain guns k sath… aur woh sab ko pakar rahy hain.. tum bhi bhago yaha se bhago

Nupur felt her world shaking this cant happen… security lapse in mayank's plan.. she very well knew what has exactly happened…. She sneak around and found a gun man… The airport is capture.. its unbelievable… and she is right there stucked in the mess

She went inside the washroom, she knew a way out and she will go from there… nobody else can but she can.. but than she stoped looking at herself in the mirror.. she is an officer… an ACP, just because she has life attached to herself….. she cant let all of these people alone. Just because she is dying to see her husband and she is worried for her loved ones she can't escape like this,,, . they need her.. she can be a pretty huge being inside here… she can help..

She touch her baby and was now sure wht she wants to do with all this… she threw her card destroying it into pieces…and flashed it.. so that nobody get to have this card… she covered her head with dupata she opened her purse and bring out kajal… placing thick around her eyes… and than making it mixed with her compact slightly applying it on her face… making her complexion so dark…

She was ready nobody can now recognize her.. she was sure about this… that nobody will

Nupur: baby … please be good with mama…. And I just hope ur dad will be okay… with all this…. He needs his nerves right… oky n sweetheart welcome on ur first mission

She came out and a man drag her towards the main area..

Man: aram se.. mein ny kitny baar kaha hai aurto k sath koi batmeezi nhi… khas ker k jab woh is halat mein ho… hath chor us k..

Sorry bhai...

Man: ap ja ker aram se waha bhait jay… aur humary liyan koi muskil na kerain… ap ko kuch bhi chaiy ho ap hum se kah sakti hain….

Is aurat ko koi muskil nhi honi chaiy

Nupur knew one thing… they donot want to harm women.. and above all being pregnant he was so carefully about everything…actually almost they were so caring toward them…. That is strange… yet maybe they just want their things down bus

Man: yaha koi doctor hai… koi doctor yaha hai…

A woman raised her hand… and the man asked her to go with nupur and sit near her… she was surprised since when terrorist her so nice… but this was a very very good thing for them…

She place her head back…She is trapped … she thought just in few hrs she will be with mayank, she asked gunjan not to tell anyone as she pretty well knew mayank will never let her travel…. And when he knew there is a sercutiy thread….. but now wht when he will get to know I m here … sigh wht he will do… here she was thinking having this morning with him.. and now she even didn't knew will she have any morning with him…

She cant think like that.. of all those thousand's people she is the only hope to this… she will make it whtevr she can…

………….

She was sure nobody will reconoze her.. and she was right nobody did.. even samrat n benji had an hard time to recognizing that person but she was also sure that Mayank will n he did… she cant hide from him…

Mayank: yeah dekh… yeah dekh… nupur..

Samrat n benji was not sure that person is nupur… they watched closely and they were shocked… she does appears similar to nupur ….

Mayank: aur woh jhasi ki rani … waha kisi na kisi mission per hai… how the hell u guys let her travel… knowing Delhi is waqt thread per hai

Samrat: mayank arm se… hum mein se kisi ko nhi batay us ny

Benji: subha mjhy gunjan ny bataya jab mein usko dhoond raha that u… us wat tujhy nhi bata sakt… socha hum sath tu hoon teri…

Mayank hided his face in his plam..and than moved them away from his eyes looking at her on the screen… his heart was bleeding

Mayank: yeah kya kerdiya nupur… kya kerdiya tum ny…

Samrat placed his hand on his shoulder… they all were in miserable position .. it wasn't just the thought about people but it was there best frnd his love, there love who is there…. And anything can happen anytime

…………….

Sorry maar na maat dekho pls….

The ff will not loss his light effects… but yes having nupur inside will add spice in it… and she has the major person who will make things easy… being pregnant I donot want her to be out of the case.. there personal lifes have never influenced the case so even now shouldn't

U know me all im not gonna make it roto .. so donot worry about it….

Han bus meri asani hogi romance gaya ..bye bye seeya tata….

Not to worry u will have romance in flashbacks… I will try to put in..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

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