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The second poem for Winter Sonata…😳
Again I haven't actually read the one to you dedicated…😭.
But the lines left me speechless!!!😲
jab thi mai bhi masoom ,unkhili si kali
to maine bhi ki thi himaat
bai khayali,bai irradgi mai
maine bhi bana liya tha sapno mai aapna aashiyaan
Wow!! That clearly depicts every girl…👏
Naive and innocent…😳
Brought up in a protected environment…😳
Specially that unkhili kali part… WOW!!👏
mai samjhi thi ,mere sapne tho mere aapne hai
jo pure karlu gi mai kabhi na kabhi
par na socha tha,,jo hai mere aapne
woh hi kuchal dege ,unhe aapne kadmo se
These lines made me cry…😭
Seriously hate those people😡 who don't think twice before forgetting even blood relations!!!😡
The last line… Woh kuchal denge, unhe apnea kadmo se… Got me so emotional!!!😭
aur tod diya that unhone muhje is tarah
ki khud se khade hone ko apne parro par
ya milane ko khud se nazar
ek zaraa bhi nahi tha mujh mai zinda raha
Clearly depicting the pain of the girl!!😭
Guess its Geet???
My heart went out to her...😭
aaj jab paya khud ko khud ke hi saamne kisi dusre roop mai,to phir dil ne kaha
mujhe bataa,mai apna aashiyaana banau kaha
mai kuch thum si gaii,jhijhak si gai
par phir uski aarmano si bhaari aankho mai dekh kar kaha,ja bana apna ghar kahi dur kisi saahil par
tabhi
Her hesitation yet her what we say ek umeed…😊
Her one hope to have someone who loves her…😳
A new home… where she would be loved and there would be only love!!!😳
Loved it…👏
ari nadaan
rait par bane aaishiyaane ko toh
samander ka mohtaaj hona padta hai👏
kyoki usse to koi bhi sarphiri laher mita deti hai👏
The highlighted line totally stole the light!!😳
Wow!! I mean the whole relation of the imprint on sand and ocean sweeping off its traces!!!👏
Loved it a lottt!!!
to phir mai apna aashiyaana banau kaha
mai chand lamhe sochti rahi
phir boli,ja bana le sabse dur chand par apna ghar
Haayee every girls's dream depicted here…
But here in Geet's context…. It's painful knowing how desperately she wants to get away from here as far as possible...
ary pagli
chand jo khud hi andhere ka wasi hai
jo khud hi suraj ki roshni se chipta hai
woh kaise de paayega teri aashao ko roshni
True true!!! 😳
Chaand the place which resides in darkness…😳
Depicting the truth of life…😭
we can't hide from the reality!!!😭
(Hope am making sense!!😆)
to phir mai apna aashiyaana banau kaha
mai kuch simat si rahi thi is duniya ki berukhi se
par uski ek siski ne ,tod di meri bebasi si
aur apni rooh ki awaaz,
ke chup ja kahi
tham ja kahi
na lad ab kisi se
ke koi aisa yaha nahi
ke jiske liye tu kar sake khud pe yaki
tabhi uski ek awaaz ke
eeye pari meri
bataa muhje ke
to phir mai apna aashiyaana banau kaha
ek pal ke liye to koi jawaab mai de na saki
par phir kuch lamhe soch kar
uski aur dekh kar mai boli
jaa bana le badalou pe apne aashiyaane ko
jisko chu na sake ye zami aur yaha ke log
Her desperation to find the prefect place…😳
The description is awesome!!!👏
Lovely!!!👏
arre maasom
ku tujhe laga
ke aasma hai,is duniya se zuda
aur rakh lega yeh tujhe ,har musibat se baccha
kyoki
ik hawa ka jhoka hi,dega issko hila
kaise rakhe ga ye tumhe samet kar
jab hawa ka jhoka hi,le jaayega issko udda
Again face to face with destiny…
Loved the interpretations and the way you bring up reality in every step!!!👏
to phir mai kaha jao,kya karu
kya koi kouna ,koi hissa is duniya ka
nahi hai hammare liye bhi bana
ab bahut ho chuka
sabre kho chuka
ab hum hai jaha,hamaare sapno ka aashiyaana hoga waha
The last line… The line which made the poem all the more special….
Its true wherever your soulmate is your home is there…😳
Your soulmate's presence is enough to make you feel loved, protected and happy!!😳
Superb poem sis!!!👏
Am becoming your fan!!!😳
Loved it a looottt👏
Love you….😳
(Hope the super special style of commenting made up for the delay!!!)😳
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