maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 82

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no :21

its for Captured Love

ff by mrs.msk

maan (in his thoughts)

jab se hui hai shaadi

kya kya mein kar raha hu

aafat jo hai gaale mein daali

uss ko har pal bugat raha hu

jab woh pahli baar mili thi

thapaad ki khanak suni thi

par phutti kismat thi meri

jo uske baad bhi

mein wahi,biwwi banaane ke liye chuni thi

kya woh akele hi kafi nahi thi

kyu isse laga vicky ki kami thi

jo yeh isse mujh par chodti hai

jaise woh hai tommy

aur mein hu delicioue piece of chicken ponny

kya yeh kutte billi ka

jo circus meri life ban gaya hai woh kam nahi tha

jo mein ab

iske pyaar ke khatir

ban raha hu watchmen

apne hi kamre ke ,bahaar khada hua hu

madam hogi raazi

tabhi to paas hogi ,

meri bed par sone ki arzi

nahi toh ,kal ki yeh headline hogi

ki mein guest room mein sofe par so raha hu

darte the log mujhse

ab mein apni biwi ke terror se darr raha hu

dekh lo

oo duniya waalo

kya tha mera ateet

aur ab kya kya rahi hai mujhpe beet

waqt woh tha kuch aisa

hota tha sab waisa ,chata tha mein jaisa

ab woh madam chah rahi hai

aur mein usske nakkhre utta raha hu

madam ka order hua hai

is liye mein kitchen mein passina baha raha hu

fry pan aur spoon udd rahe hai

saare masaale bhi jal rahe hai

itne hai onion kaate

ke ab baarish ki tarah aasu tapak rahe hai

naksha badal gaya hai

is puri kitchen ka

lagta tha pahle baag phoolo ka

ab jang ka maidaan lag raha hai

aisa hi toh hoga

jab yaha duniya ka aathava ajooba ho raha

jisne aaj tak anda nahi hai ubbala

aaj woh madam ke liye BIRYAANI pakka raha hai

finally from maan

dekh mein tere pyaar mein kya kya na bana geet

Originally posted by: jssood

realy too enjoyable poem

suited fully on maan,s present situation

oh my poor maan

ha ha ha ha

fantastic dear

Originally posted by: doublecross

great simply too good!
looking forward to more!

Originally posted by: lovesia

awesome

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

poem 21

beautiful poem

poor maan jab se geet se mila hai bechare ka kya haal hua hai 😆

waisi maan babu aapko kisne kaha tha geet se shadi karne ko wo bhi zabardasti!!!!!!!!!!

ab dekho kya hua tum raja se watchman bhi ban gaye ...

loved it very much nishu...

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

waitng for your comment dear

as you are one of few

for whom i wait

👏👏

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

😆😆

maine iss baar mere normal se long comment kiya

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

time for new poem

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no:

it for kashmakash by muskan

me here with my few lines😆😆

sorry for mistake😉(spelling mistake dear)

yeh kaisi tukado mein

zindagi jee rahe the hum

hai hum ,

ek dusre kee

yeh kyu nahi ,

ek dusre se kahe rahe the hum

apne aap banaye gaye

mere niyamo ke alawa

kabhi bhi , haan

kabhi bhi ,toh kuch maine kiya nahi

aur kya woh

badalna chahegi mujhe

iska bhi toh mokka ,

maine hame diya nahi

kya mera

hammare is rishte mein ,

khush na rahna

yu ghutna

aur

chupchap ,sab sehna

kya kasoor tha bas unhi ka

kya mera

kabhi bhi ,

kuch na kah paana hi

mera bhi kasoor tha hi

kyoki

woh meri baat sune

meri har chooti zid ke aage jhuke

mere nakhre uttae

mujhe apni palko par bethaiye

is sab ka mokka bhi toh

maine hame diya nahi

aaj jab woh aayi

mere yu saamne

tham gayi yeh zami

ruk gaya aasma

par

mujhe mein naaye ahsaas the jagne laage

aur khud ka hi ,

naya pahlu

tha nazar aaya

mujhe mere hi saamne

jo chah raha tha

ke chum lu usse

chu lu aise usse ,

ke jaise chua na ho pahle usse

yeh kasak si mujhme jaagne lagi

kyu apne in hasin palo ko bhi

aur hasin banna sake hum

is baat ka bhi mokka ,

maine hame diye nahi