maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

oh this is emotional but very nicely curved

i loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
hi
the poem is really good
its really hillarious
plz cont with more funny and interestings poems like this
i really loved it

thaxxx dear

poor maan

i must day

its not like every day

i feel these emotions for him

so difficult to write this type of few lines regularly😉😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Originally posted by: Ru_21
Superb lines nishu...loved it

thaxxx dear

you didn't tell

which one you like most😊

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Ohh so loved it dii
soo beautiful..
Poor geet..forced to be mature before than her age
nd maan his dream broken
wat he expected from his wife..he is not wrong even
i just loved the use of comparison with kali,bhawra n mali
really liked it di

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poonam

@Angel_Luv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

kya khoob likha hai tumne nishu darlz👏👏

love it dear😃

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Isolophiliac

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

The captured love..the poem is so hilarious
poor maanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

Originally posted by: moni6262
The captured love..the poem is so hilarious
poor maanu

yes dear

poor fellow

kya se kya ho gaya😉😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: poonamgarg
kya khoob likha hai tumne nishu darlz👏👏

love it dear😃

thaxxx dear😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: moni6262
Ohh so loved it dii
soo beautiful..
Poor geet..forced to be mature before than her age
nd maan his dream broken
wat he expected from his wife..he is not wrong even
i just loved the use of comparison with kali,bhawra n mali
really liked it di

thaxxx alot sweety

oye tere back poems par comment rahte hai😉😆😆