maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 83

Kashmakash..so nicely depicted
beautifull
they both trying to know wat they lacked in the relation
lovely poem

Life partner..quiet realistic dii
we all want that unknowingly
beautiful words..
So nicely reflecting geets feelings

The poems for hmari prem kahani were awesome too
bt havent read the work

And the one for dangerous love ws mindblowing..
I'm loving this ff and the poem ws going exactly with ff's feel
di u r awesome in writing poems
so fantastic

Har taraf mei hi nazar aaying 😆

Originally posted by: moni6262

Har taraf mei hi nazar aaying 😆

Originally posted by: moni6262

Life partner..quiet realistic dii
we all want that unknowingly
beautiful words..
So nicely reflecting geets feelings

Originally posted by: moni6262

Loved all of them di

Originally posted by: moni6262

Kashmakash..so nicely depicted
beautifull
they both trying to know wat they lacked in the relation
lovely poem

Finally me aa gayi!!!😆

The 1^st poem… Kashmakash…👏

God could really feel it…😳

Never knew you could even write serious ones!!!😲

Haven't read Muskan Di's FF yet…😭

But still have already got a fair idea reading your super awesome poem….😉

This was from Geet's POV na???😊

My personal fav lines were…😳

jism se rooh tak

din se raat tak

dil ki aakhiri saas tak

dhadkan ki aakhri aawaz tak

to mai chah kar bhi ,sun na saki

saare sapne dobaara dekhu

aisi himmat,khud mai bun na saki👏

Sigh Loved these lines a lot…😳

Loved it to the core….😳👏