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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

lol lol lol... kuch aisa hi karna parega. first epi se hi shuru hota hain romance shuru hota hain. might be i'll post first epi today


Do it dear 😊

Sanju I don't knw kya problem ho raha hain...pm nahin ja raha...by the way quoted u in my os break of the dawn...replied ur queries dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: panchaali


Do it dear 😊

Sanju I don't knw kya problem ho raha hain...pm nahin ja raha...by the way quoted u in my os break of the dawn...replied ur queries dear 😊

yup, writting side by side, will check
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Manyata was getting bored sitting in the chawl. She was missing everyone like hell. She sighed. She was watching the T.V. when a news about Uday's success was being shown. She was so happy for him. She wanted to meet him suddenly. Akash was at his new job. He was not going to return till 9 in the night. She thot to go to Uday Niwas. Immediately, she got up. Checked herself once in the mirror. She took her purse and immediately left. She locked her door and informed Mrs. Rana, her neighbor and the only lady in the whole chawl ho treated her very nicely. She went to the bus stand. Finally after sometime, came a bus. She immediately hopped in and asked for the ticket. She looked out of the window. She rememberd the day when she had first came to the city. It was raining heavily. The drops of rain brot new hope for her. Hope of changing her life, hope of settling down, hopes of having her man, hope of completing her dreams. But she herself had kicked it off. She had refused the hopes, she had thrown them out before even they could enter. But it was written in her destiny to have those hopes completed. The hopes were still waiting at the verandah of her life, waiting to get the perfect chance of knocking the door.

She was lost in her own thots wen the lady beside her shook her gently. She informed her that her stop had come. Manyata got down and instead of taking a rickshaw, she walked till she reached Uday Niwas. She walked in but was suddenly stopped by two muscular arms in front of her. They didn't touch her, but blocked her way. She suddenly looked at them. "yeh kya?? Humara raasta kyu roka? Andr jaane do hume." She said, already frustrated due to the heat. "hum kisi aire gaire ko andar nai jaane dete." The guards said in unison. She was so shocked. They refused HER!!! The YUVRAANI!!! How cud they. Before the marriage, they used to open doors for her and give her red-carpet treatment and now, just look at them!!

Till then another guard had arrived permitting Manyata in as Unnati wanted to meet who was there outside. The guards escorted Manyata in. as Unnati turned around, only see an old Moniya-like clothed Manyata, she ran to her and hugged her. "MANYATA!!!" she screamed and the guards realized whom they had brought in. they apologized and left.

The only difference was, Manyata was now wearing a sari. Unnati and Manyata sat down to chat. Unnati ordered Manyata's favorite orange juice. As they drank the juice, they spoke about nearly everything under the roof. Suddenly, something happened very funny, and Unnati hit hard on Manyata's shoulder. As Manyata was just going to sip, the juice spilled on her sari. Unnati immediately started to apologize. Unnati told Manyata to wait there and she went to bring her something to wear. Meanwhile, Manyata went in Uday's room. While she climbed the steps, she wondered how Uday hadn't come down yet listening to the girls gossips and laughs. She opened the door directly as she never had the habit of knocking especially the door of Uday's room. She opened the room, only to find the pictures of Marilyn Monroe hung on the wall, looking at her. She smiled to herself and came in. the room still smelled like Uday.

Suddenly Unnati came in n said, "Manyata, tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?" Manyata turned around and looked at her, "expected to find someone." Unnati chuckle and said, "wo someone bina bataya kahi bhi chala jaata hain, doesn't even tell wen he's gonna come. By the way, wear this." she said as she unfolded the one piece. Manyata's face explained much to her. So she went ahead insisting that she should wear this dress. Finally Manyata had to agree. She went in with the dress. "Unnati, u wait here. Mujhe teri help chahiye hogi." Unnati agreed and waited outside. After a minute or so, came a staff member. "Rajkumari sa, aapko maharajsa ne bulaya hain." Unnati thot for a while, that what problem wud be there while wearing an one piece? "No" her mind answered. So she ran down

"Areh dada, aap agaye??" she said as she came down the stairs. "hi choti. See hum bahot thak gaye hain. Hum sone ja rahe hain. Plz don't let anyone come in." he said and ran above. "Ok" Unnati said. "Oh shit!! Upr to'" her mind thot, but then she giggled and left ahead.

"UNNATI UNNATI!!!!" Manyata shouted at top of her voice. Just then the door opened. She was looking down on the floor, standing before the mirror. Hearing the door open, she said "thank you itni jaldi aane keliye, kaha thi?? Goa gayee thi kya jo itni der lagi?? Chal thike, please jara ye zipper laga dena'" she heard the footsteps proceeding. As she felt the hand being placed on her hand with whioch she held the zip, a current ran down. She realized this was a masculine touch. She looked up in the mirror, only to find HIM. She froze there and remembered the day wen he was pulling the zipper of her anarkali suit. Both weren't speaking anything. Finally Uday broke, "tum achanak yaha kaise??" "kyu nai asakti kya??" she said to him as she walked out of the room followed by Uday. "nai aise nai, but still'" they sat on the bed there and both just stared at each other. "waise Manyata, tu bahot sexy lag rahi hain I must say, smoking hot'" saying this he winked. She fumed in rage and said "halkat vede khasmanu khane'." And they both started to laugh. "kitne dino baad humara naam suna'." He said laughing. "marjaane tharak ke peepe'" she still continued. "Manyata that's enough bahot hua'" he protested. "ye le sand kahike'" god knows why, but she was in a different mood today, and saying this she threw a pillow at him and ran round the bed. "ye le bhais kahiki'." He said throwing the pillow at her. She was hell shocked. "bail" she shouted loudly throwing the same pillow at him. "tu cow'" he shouted equally. "Hippo" she shouted'

Giriraj came out of his room running. He saw Unnati sitting in the living room watching TV, but its volume was mute instead, she was laughing enjoying Uday and Manyata's little quarrel.

"rhino" he said and both started to run around in the room. "to tu dino" she said and giggled. They were shouting at top of their voices. "mekko dino boli chudail!!" he shouted running after her.

Manyata: gadha

Uday: gadhi

M: kabutar

U: ostrich

M: penguin

U: murgi

"choozzzeee" Manyata fell on the bed as she said chuze, and Uday trying to catch her, fell by her side too. Both laughed out loud. They both sat up on the bed. They were like that for a while till Uday lifted up a pillow and hit Manyata lightly. She punched his arm and rested her head on his head. After a while a maid opened the door. Looking at the room, she was highly disappointed. She had to bring it back to normalcy.

"gustakhi maaf' aap dono ko Rajkumari sa ne neeche bulaya hain."

And she left. Both got up and came down. They saw Unnati arranging the table. "come, lunch karte hain" she said. "woah!! 1 sec. no lunch. Nai nai, main lunch nai karungi, ghar jaane keliye bahot der hogi" Manyata said. Unnati gave her a hopeless look and it really pinched Manyata. "ok ok.. jau tum. Waise ye lunch tumhare liye tha hi nai. We both just don't want u for lunch here. Go now. Shoo shoo, bye'" Uday said as he pushed Manyata slightly. She stopped. "how rude of u Uday!! Chee' ab jo kuch bhi ho, mujhe yahi lunch karna hain. Hat pare. Unnati, mere liye lunch lagwade. Id halkat vede ki baton me main nai aane wali." Unnati giigled as Manyata sat for lunch. Uday left a sigh and came and sat beside her. "dekho manane keliye kya kya karna padta hain. Manyata stuck her tongue out at him, giggled and hugged him.

The lunch was awesome. Soon it was evening. Taking some snacks, Manyata left. Uday and Unnati insisted that they wud drop her, but jiddi Manyata, wud never budge at all. She left giving Uday the tightest hug ever. Surely, he was in bliss

He waited at the door till he say Manyata's figure vanish. Even after Manyata went, Uday stood there till Unnati patted on his back and moved him in.

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So here we come to an end to chap 1.

This is the last update for coming 20-21 days.

Will be back with all three stories of mine then.

Sorry for delay

I had actually cut the middle finger and the index finger + exam preparations.

I noe I shudnt give lame excuses. Sorry once again

YOURS:

Pranks aka Sanju

Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Great update
manveer scenes were awesome
loved reading it ...

Sorry about ur hand dear
get well soon
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
pms will be sent in the evening
RES FOR A NOTE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
yaay me second...

ressy 😉


unresd...😃😃

Wat a start sanju dear,
It was

Awesum...⭐️

Fab...👏

Amazing...😎

Wonderful...👍🏼

n I feel sad for Manyata poor girl...
jzz for her promise she had 2 marry dat Manju...

Manveer scene was Amazing...
haaye Dek ke dinno ki yaad dila di...😭

miss dek...
Do cont soon...
n dear
update toh hota rahega bt
health is more impt na...
tke care of ur finger...

n All d very best 4 ur exams...👍🏼
Luv u...❤️
muuaaahhh...
hugs...🤗🤗

ur's Sonia...😳
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Great update manveer love fight wow nice one... Pls add me ur pm list n continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Great update

manveer scenes were awesome
loved reading it ...

Sorry about ur hand dear
get well soon

thanx dear!!
ur comment means a lot to me.
i think i wished u for being a goldie, but still once again,
congrats on being a goldie!!
thanx for caring for my hand 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
the chappy was beautiful...
i luvd it a lot..!!
manveer scenes so vry cute...!!😳
felt bad dat u cut 2 of ur fingers...take care..!!
thnx 4r d pm dea...nd will be in wait of ur nxt update!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: princessSonia

yaay me second...


ressy 😉


unresd...😃😃

Wat a start sanju dear,
It was

Awesum...⭐️

Fab...👏

Amazing...😎

Wonderful...👍🏼

n I feel sad for Manyata poor girl...
jzz for her promise she had 2 marry dat Manju...

Manveer scene was Amazing...
haaye Dek ke dinno ki yaad dila di...😭

miss dek...
Do cont soon...
n dear
update toh hota rahega bt
health is more impt na...
tke care of ur finger...

n All d very best 4 ur exams...👍🏼
Luv u...❤️
muuaaahhh...
hugs...🤗🤗

ur's Sonia...😳

AWW that was so sweet.
luvd your comment
"haaye Dek ke dinno ki yaad dila di...😭"
this is one of the bestest compliment any dek writer can get.
thanx for the care n love u show
thanx for the wishes...
hugs to u too.🤗🤗🤗
yours
Pranks aka Sanju

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