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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm sanjuuu love it manyata akash ka jaldi divorce karwao

yep, asap! glad u liked the update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: catty2000

Nice update ! thanx

Loved it ! i am very happy
What is going on with Uday? pyaar me pagal hain!
Manveer scenes were too cute 😳 aww... thanx!
Actually is Akaash really a problem ? 😆 a big problem!!
I mean why doesn't someone just throw him out of the window ! he is too heavy!!
Actually even if he is not thrown out then he should really see Uday there ! u really think so?
He needs a good lesson 😆 yup, milajyega
BTW why do you always leave your updates at a cliff hanger ? then u will always wait n die or rather taras for next update. well m evil like my prince
Continue soon ... asap.
Thanks for the PM ! u r welcome!

thanx for such nice comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great update Sanju 👍🏼. thanx navi! Very interesting. glad u found it interesting Uday meeting those mysterious guys , I think 🤔 (maybe) he was buying a bag of disguises from them ; that's how he , so cleverly dressed himself as a salesman and Manyata couldn't even make him out😉. Anyway ... that's just a thought! sahi jawab! i wonder how could u get it or was it so obvious?? well u r a mastermind i know! Manyata and Kantabai's altercation was superb. I could just picture Manyata in her jungli-billi mode ... defending Uday😳. The slap was too good , but the best part was when Kantabai shielded herself from a "SUPPOSED 2nd SLAP" 😆. lol! yeah i too liked it 😛 i enjoyed writting that fight! Loved this line : "aww' itni galiya kahase seekhti ho princess?"

aww... thats so nice of u!
Manveer scene inside the chawl , was awesome👏. Awww , Uday helped with the housework ... HOW CUTE . uday wanted to make himself useful for manyata😛
Now , why did Akash have to come and ruin their sweet moment😡. I'm sure whoever those "2 pairs of eyes" belonged to , they must've told Akash to go home now. Hope Uday remains hidden 😉 & isn't caught!
firse u r right!! dont worry! he will surely not be caught! Eager to read the next part , my pleasure1please continue soon ! asap PS ... I did not "LIKE" the update , because the stupid button is not working😭. its all ok!

glad u liked it! thanx for sucha beautiful coment!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

aww,itw as superbbb!!!!!!!!!! manveeerr scenesss sooo soo magicalll!!!!!! uday ki baatein and manveer cuming closee!!!!!!!!!! hayee akash kaha se tapak padaa!!!!!!cntinue soon!!!!!!!

akash is hopeless!! lol! glad u liked it!! thanx for the support!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

Rapchik rapchandous update CC 👏 👏 thankyou!!😆😆😆
Loved the way Manyata stood out for Uday...yeh hui na baat...and yeh sab Uday ne sun liya..wow 😛 haan, sunana to padega!
starting wala part thoda mysterious tha...what was there in the bag 😲sales man ka costume? yeah, u got it right!😆 and woh do log Akash ke khabri toh nahi 😕 might be yes, might be no!

gosh ab kya karegi Manyata...kamre me Uday, darwaaze par Majnu😉 loved the reporter-ish tone! aur Majnu ko dusra time nahi mila ghar lautne ke liye 😡 nah!

next update is eagerly awaited 😃 thats great!

thanx for such beautiful comment!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow nice update
manyat so possessivness to uday n slap kantabai ws so gud
manveer persnal movement me again akash entry hmm i hate akash
cntinue soon n do pm me if it possible

yup, i'll pm u for sure! glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi...

loved d chapter
very much.

loved all manveer
moments.

continue as soon
as possible.

will wait for ur
next update.

👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

hi...

loved d chapter
very much.

loved all manveer
moments.

continue as soon
as possible.

will wait for ur
next update.

👍🏼

thanx dear!! loved ur comment! will pm u! r u my buddy? will try to give next update as soon as possible!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys! Me back with new update! Well all, u shud thank Navina! Because of her u r getting the update "THIS EARLY". Lolz! She reminded me that Uday was hiding in Manyata's bedroom since the start of April! Thanx Navi once again! Nahi toh bechara Uday boodah hojata Manyata ke bedroom me chupte chupte. Lolz! Enough of my bak bak. Here comes the update...

"AKASH" Uday repeated in his mind as heard Manyata's small scream. "Oh shit! Bloody kamina yaha bhi agaya! Kitni mushkil se yaha aye the hum! Ab hum kya kare kaha chupe! Kamal hain, kaise ajeebse bedrooms banate hain ye log! Chupne keliye ek jagah bhi nahi" Uday said walking around the room. "huh.. ab hum kya kare! Par wait a minute, hum majnu se kyun dar rahe hain? WHY? MAJNU?? Oh please! Get a life Udayveer Singh! To kya hua hum princess ke bedroom me hain! Big deal! Uske bed pe thodi lete hain! Hain na?" he said convincing himself. "nahi Uday! That's not right! Akash dekh lega to koi problem nahi, pr sab chawl walonko pata chalega, fir princess ki aur badnaami hogi! Aur wo hum kabhi bhi bardaash nahi kar sakte! Thik hain Yuvraaj. Chupne keliye jagah dhundo." He said finally deciding. He saw the bed and immediately sat on his knees. Crawling, he went under the bed and slept on the floor under the bed. "offo" Uday coughing a bit "Manyata ko batana padega bed ke neechese thora jhadu mar de"

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Meanwhile:

"Akash tum yaha? Is waqt?" Manyata said stopping Akash in the door. "kyun abhi nahi asakta kya? Ye humara ghar hain!" he said pointing towards both of them. "nahi wo baat nahi hain pr ye waqt nahi hain tumhare ghar aane ka. Abhi to tumhara lunch hain na?" Manyata said to him. "isiliye to main abhi yaha aya hu." He said looking around the room. "Akash?" Manyata said as she noticed Akash looking everywhere. "hume andar bedroom me jana hain" Akash said to Manyata becuz he might not have found any traces of Uday in the living room. "kyun? Bedroom me kyun? Tum nahi ja sakte!" Manyata said in defence. Akash looked at Manyata in utter shock. "kyun? Wo bedroom mera bhi hain!" Akash said. "nahi wo baat nahi! Tum kyun jana chahte ho" Manyata corrected herself. "wo…. Paise lene hain" Akash's face suddenly lighted up as paise came to his help. Without even waiting for Manyata, he walked inside. While going inside, he explained that he was giving a long awaited party of his promotion which he got before Uday demoted him from his job.

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As Akash entered inside the bedroom, Manyata stood outside closing her eyes. She didn't hear any sounds from inside so she slowly crept inside the room. She saw no one there. "Phew..." she left a sigh of relief. "pr Uday hain kaha phir?" Manyata thot to herself. Suddenly they heard a sneezing sound which was rather suppressed a bit. Both Akash and Manyata looked at each other. Unknown to both of them, they were looking for the same person. Just the difference was that one was trying to conceal while other, reveal.

Akash removed some cash from the cupboard and was about to leave when he heard a small thud. He looked towards the bed as the sound came from there. But then he looked away. Akash ran out saying "chalta hu". Manyata followed him out.

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As soon as Akash went out, Uday came out of the bed somehow. His shirt was covered with dust. He stood up and dusted it off. He saw some movement outside the window. He went near the window and looked out. There he saw Akash. "areh thikse jaankari nahi de sakte kya? Sapnome rehna band karo aur hakikat me jeeyo." Akash said loudly in rage. Then his voice lowered. Might be the person across the phone had silenced him. Uday smirked to himself.

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Manyata sat on the couch outside after Akash left. Suddenly she realized that Uday was inside. Before she could get up and go in, Uday came out of the room caressing the back of his head. Manyata saw him and came towards him "cheeke kyun?" she spat angrily. Uday was a bit shocked. "areh! Tune hi bed ke neechese jhadu nahi mara tha. Jara wo jagh bhi saaf kiya kro. Sari dhool (dust) mere naak me chali gayi! Cheek nahi ayegi kya?" Uday said. Manyata sighed. "ok thik hain. Aur wo dusri awaj kaisi thi?" she asked hi. "wo actually bed lagi sarpe" Uday said rubbing the spot. Manyata was shocked. She immediately lifted her tose up and tried to reach the spot at the back of his head. Uday founf it amusing and bent down a bit so that she could reach till the spot. Manyata became overcaring as she knew that the bed was of steel and that hurts a lot when ur head dashes with a steel. "By the way? Aise kaise lagi bed?" she asked still rubbing. "wo suddenly cockroach dikha" Uday replied. Manyata laughed loudly. "tu cockroaches dar gaya?" she asked. "humari jungli-billise nahi darte, to cockroach kya cheez hain" Uday replied and in return got a small slap on the neck by Manyata. "Ouch!" he exclaimed. Accha theek hain, acchese batata hu" he said and explained that as the cockroach appeared suddenly from nowhere, he was just taken aback. "accha theek hain yaha baitho couch pe" she told him and went in. he sat there silently. Within a few minutes, Manyata came holding a handkerchief in her hands. Uday was puzzled. She came and stood exactly before and close to him. His head was facing her belly. She took the handkerchief and placed it on his head. "tss..aahh" Uday let out a sigh as the cold ice wrapped in the handkerchief was placed on his head. Manyata told him that this would reduce further aggravation or either internal bleeding.

After applying the cold ice, Manyata kept it aside on the table. she put her hands around Uday. One around his back and other on his head, and pulled him close, making him rest his head on her belly. Uday was shocked. but within seconds. he too encircled his arms around her waist. Her waist was open from back as she had worn a saree. He enjoyed that bare touch. Manyata left the embrace after few sometime and gave him a broad smile. She went inside to bring them lunch while Uday pondered over the position in which they were, before a few seconds.

Both had a nice and sweet lunch together and Uday complemented Manyata regarding her food till she was flattered.

In the evening, a couple of hours after the lunch Uday told Manyata that it was time that he should leave. He called Jaggat so that he could come and pick up Uday. Jaggat came and silently without making anyone aware, (excluding the two pairs of eyes 😉😉) Uday went back.

After Uday went, Manyata sat down and thought about the day. About the fight, time spent with Uday and all. Suddenly she remembered what Uday had told her. Immediately, she took the broom and cleaned the floor under the bed. She smiled to herself after doing the work.

At night, Akash came a bit late. He told that he wouldn't eat anything as he had given a party and he himself had ate there. Manyata too, had her lunch at the regular time as she knew Akash would dine outside.

Both were sitting in the living room. They never sat together on the Couch. they always used to sit on different chairs. Suddenly the bell rang. "abhi kaun hoga, itni raat ko?" thought Manyata. She went ahead and opened the door.

As soon as she opened, she was shocked to see the person before her. "TUM!" she exclaimed

well guys here we come to the end of chapter three.

do tell me how it was!

do like and comment

yours

Pranks aka Sanju






Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update👏👏
majnu toh poora pagal hai🤪 kamina kahin ka..achcha hua Uday ne use demote kiya😈
actually naukri se nikalna chahiye tha😡 hey that means Akash works for Uday? great!
aww Poor Uday, is majnu ki wajah se use bed ke neeche chupna pada aur chot bhi aayi😭
that scene where Manyata applies him medicine was so cute😛
ab yeh majnu koun sa naya plan bana raha hai? 😕

im trying to guess whom does Manyata see at the door..but i'll keep the guess to myself😉

Thank you so much for the PM and please continue soon😃
(me first to comment..yay)
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago

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